VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[minibaer12]

I forgot. That should still shake the MC up and make things awkward for the MC and Erynn.

Your suggested scene would be possible with a Lexi (break off with Lexi) and Val path or Layla and Erynn path.



Emily the good mother did make that phone call to Melissa after she caught the two smooching. I'm surprised Melissa hasn't twisted her teasing needles into Erynn yet.



A deep talk that would make for a longer scene.



She might ask about the other girls she knows about.



This fits with Val's personality and Minibaer's disaster scenarios.



I agree.



Also fits the MC and Val's personalities



The real rival is not Zane/Weight room guy but Madison Springs Old perv took a youth serum that makes him young again for 12 hours per day. Old perv is actually weight room guy.



I really like this idea and it fits the game's reveal style.



This would mean being in a relationship with Val, having an affair with Gabi and later Ximena, who invites herself into your Gabi affair, and Ximena pulling you into a side affair that Gabi is not aware of. This all culminates at the next Entanglement red carpet premiere where Val and Gabi and the press catch you banging Ximena backstage.



I like the Erynn with Iris. And yes, fits Val's personality.



The embers are starting to ignite. The MC having no friends will be a campfire next to the national park forest fires he will be experiencing shortly.

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This beach trip with Erynn and/or Valeria shows again how dependent I am on the WT.

Many scenarios are conceivable/possible, a lot depends on the timing. The content should not be forgotten either. Does the beach trip with Erynn take place in series with the beach trip with Valeria or in parallel! At what point does the trip to Riverside come up! Should he mention that he's also seeing Nikki/Cara? These were just a few examples of how the beach trip could develop.

For my part, I expect that I will be able to experience different variants.

 

[LSC82]

I forgot. That should still shake the MC up and make things awkward for the MC and Erynn.

Your suggested scene would be possible with a Lexi (break off with Lexi) and Val path or Layla and Erynn path.

It is kinda weird how he's gonna shake it off the fact that he is a "sister fucker" and just go on a date... but these things tend to happen when mixing many paths.

Let's see what kind of hand waving we'll get, "just stop thinking about it".

Emily the good mother did make that phone call to Melissa after she caught the two smooching. I'm surprised Melissa hasn't twisted her teasing needles into Erynn yet.

Yeah she was going to spend the night watching TV with her mom while we went to Dylan's... teasing probably already started.

A deep talk that would make for a longer scene.

It can progress in multiple ways, i'm just thinking meeting Zane, directly related to the source of Erynn's trauma would give us this opportunity.
They meet, MC positions himself as the new BF, maybe he makes some snide comment about how she'll dump you for a richer guy with no warning... and we get to defend her...
After that we have a heart to heart.

She might ask about the other girls she knows about.

She 100% knows about the Riverside sisters, doubtful about Layla or Val.

This fits with Val's personality and Minibaer's disaster scenarios.

Val isn't a stay home and sulk kind of girl, and we know she has others in line.

The real rival is not Zane/Weight room guy but Madison Springs Old perv took a youth serum that makes him young again for 12 hours per day. Old perv is actually weight room guy.

LOL
He's the time traveling MC, he's suppoused to advice himself not to fuck around, but gets carried away and justs compliments his achievements in pussy hunting lol.

This would mean being in a relationship with Val, having an affair with Gabi and later Ximena, who invites herself into your Gabi affair, and Ximena pulling you into a side affair that Gabi is not aware of. This all culminates at the next Entanglement red carpet premiere where Val and Gabi and the press catch you banging Ximena backstage.

Absolutely glorious!!!!!

This beach trip with Erynn and/or Valeria shows again how dependent I am on the WT.

Many scenarios are conceivable/possible, a lot depends on the timing. The content should not be forgotten either. Does the beach trip with Erynn take place in series with the beach trip with Valeria or in parallel! At what point does the trip to Riverside come up! Should he mention that he's also seeing Nikki/Cara? These were just a few examples of how the beach trip could develop.

For my part, I expect that I will be able to experience different variants.

Suppousedly they are scheduled for friday morning, you can have one girl scheduled(either one) or both... a scenario which nobody knows how it will be solved.

Erynn in particular has met Nikki/Cara and knows about the relationship, she's also a next door neighbor it's hard not to notice that the MC is gonna be gone for 2 days.
Seeds for a confrontation are here.

Val has met Nikki but lacks proper information, she can be weary of it... she already made the demand that you break up with Alexis, so she might as well question this...

The more variation and the more we can learn about how the girls react in the different paths the better

 

[Dessolos]

It is kinda weird how he's gonna shake it off the fact that he is a "sister fucker"

lol seeing you say sister fucker all I can think of is Tommy from BAD

 

[Justaphase]

Episode 13 Story Theories for Erryn and Val Beach scenes

ERRYN BEACH SCENE

Pre-Beach Scene
- Erynn wakes MC up and sexy shenanigans ensue
- MC wakes Erynn up and sexy shenanigans ensue, Melissa gets involved
- (EDIT: If MC wakes up Erynn), Melissa gets involved with MC for the first time not in a dream, Erynn almost catches them (EDIT: After getting ready for the beach)

Going to the beach
- Taking Erynn's car
- Taking MC's bike
- Drive scene to the Beach in car or bike

Beach scene
- MC and Erynn same beach does it copy vary Nikki scene or something more unique to them?
*******Beach flashbacks Childhood memories
*******Erynn models for the MC
*******Dirty Dancing sexy shenanigans
- EDIT: Madison Springs Old Perv encounter?
- Ethan encounter?
- Zane encounter?
*******Near fight or fight with Zane
*******A deep talk about Erynn's sex tape and trauma
- Val encounter
leads to
- Erynn exclusivity scene?
*******Talk about the time the MC proposed with his flower when they were kids?

Post Beach Scene
- Changing huts sexy shenanigans?

***This probably won't be the first completed sex scene with them but I'll be surprised if Nyx does it.

Ride Back Home
-in Erynn's car
-on the MC's bike

Home
- Is Erynn's secret caller from bedroom phone call from the last time going to be revealed or another secret phone call from LSC82's theoretical private investigator looking for John.

Cliffhanger are John and Iris revealed as relations?


VAL BEACH SCENE

- Val meet at the beach like the last time but this time she's wearing orange beanie and there's a variation

- Changing huts (EDIT: Sexy shenanigans) before the beach so MC can see Val putting on the blue swimsuit to full circle his photo booth request

- This is not a training day but we can have a mix of Val screwing with the MC since Val is competitive

- Are we on the public beach or back to the private beach?

- Yes Zane or weight room guy might show up

- Sexy shenanigans on the sand and in the water, things must escalate from kissing and necking, hopefully some groping, boobs play and sucking, not sure if Val wants us near her pussy and ass yet
*****VAL: Stop someone's coming, and this time it's our old friend Madison Springs perv (EDIT: Who's now 3 for 3 in catching the MC with his ladies.)

- Ride home on MC's bike

- Cliffhanger MC meets Ximena or Ximena and GABI
****Or that might be too early since Nyx should really push the explosive potential of this?
****EDIT: Or Ximena sees the MC leaving and realizes (only now) he's the waiter at the restaurant (because Ximena like Santiago and a lot of Intertwined characters have the attention span of a goldfish.)



EDIT:


Yes I forgot.

- We are forced to choose between the two of them? This loses us massive points with one of the ladies.
- Nyx closes off the choice and we are forced to juggle both girls

or

one or both girls leaves us at the beach in anger losing massive points or breaking things off

I'm not so sure that we will have a problem with Zane. From the small interaction we have on the Nikki path he seems like a pretty chill guy (obviously assuming it's the same guy.) Honestly I hope that he and the MC could become friends, he would be an improvement on bloody Zach who often made me want to either puke or slam my head on my desk.

 

[mnotwoke]

It is kinda weird how he's gonna shake it off the fact that he is a "sister fucker" and just go on a date... but these things tend to happen when mixing many paths.

Let's see what kind of hand waving we'll get, "just stop thinking about it".

Past Hand Waving:

- The unseen Erynn and Lexi make up.

- Most of the girls not caring about the MC's past heart breaks and problems aside from Val who got involved by kicking Ethan, but now seems to have promptly forgotten about it.

Yeah she was going to spend the night watching TV with her mom while we went to Dylan's... teasing probably already started.

- An Erynn walk out or a pillow to Melissa's face was probably the response
- There should be reference to this hopefully because that's quite plausible.

It can progress in multiple ways, i'm just thinking meeting Zane, directly related to the source of Erynn's trauma would give us this opportunity.
They meet, MC positions himself as the new BF, maybe he makes some snide comment about how she'll dump you for a richer guy with no warning... and we get to defend her...
After that we have a heart to heart.

Sounds good. I'll talk more about our possible relationship with Zane going forward in my reply to Justaphase.

LOL
He's the time traveling MC, he's suppoused to advice himself not to fuck around, but gets carried away and justs compliments his achievements in pussy hunting lol.

Man, a lot of game developers like Nyx might be pick-pocketing comments like these from the forum. That's another game I would play.

Suppousedly they are scheduled for friday morning, you can have one girl scheduled(either one) or both... a scenario which nobody knows how it will be solved.

Erynn in particular has met Nikki/Cara and knows about the relationship, she's also a next door neighbor it's hard not to notice that the MC is gonna be gone for 2 days.
Seeds for a confrontation are here.

Val has met Nikki but lacks proper information, she can be weary of it... she already made the demand that you break up with Alexis, so she might as well question this...

The more variation and the more we can learn about how the girls react in the different paths the better

I can see Erynn asking about Nikki/Cara and the trip if the MC brings up the trip.

OR Erynn might try to make more weekend plans with the MC, then he mentions the Riverside trip.

Val might also ask about Nikki/Cara on her own if the MC brings up the trip.

OR Val might try to make more weekend plans with the MC, then he mentions the Riverside trip.

lol seeing you say sister fucker all I can think of is Tommy from BAD

With the way Tommy behaves, I would have thought he would be the one who wanted to fuck his own stepsister. But Tommy has his strange code of twisted honor.

I'm not so sure that we will have a problem with Zane. From the small interaction we have on the Nikki path he seems like a pretty chill guy (obviously assuming it's the same guy.) Honestly I hope that he and the MC could become friends, he would be an improvement on bloody Zach who often made me want to either puke or slam my head on my desk.

That's fair. The game lacks a lot of positive male figures. Nathan is so far away.

Hopefully this goes the DC/Marvel/anime route - misunderstanding - conflict - begrudging alliance to respect to friendship.

We and the MC think that Zane was involved in the making of the sex tape but it turns out he was just an unwitting pawn. Erynn also was no longer able to explain what happened to Zane after the blackmail began. Hopefully he becomes a bro.

NOTES: Has Erynn mentioned if she thinks Zane was involved in the tape? I forgot already. If Zane finds out we're making the moves on his sister Brooke, how will he react?

 

[Justaphase]

That's fair. The game lacks a lot of positive male figures. Nathan is so far away.

Hopefully this goes the DC/Marvel/anime route - misunderstanding - conflict - begrudging alliance to respect to friendship.

We and the MC think that Zane was involved in the making of the sex tape but it turns out he was just an unwitting pawn. Erynn also was no longer able to explain what happened to Zane after the blackmail began. Hopefully he becomes a bro.

NOTES: Has Erynn mentioned if she thinks Zane was involved in the tape? I forgot already. If Zane finds out we're making the moves on his sister Brooke, how will he react?

Well Zane is actually a victim of the sex tape as much as Erynn is, and from what Erynn has said no he doesn't know. She made excuses and dumped him as she was forced to go to prom with Ethan. I'm sure he would be pretty pissed if he found out, I know I would be. Could be another ally in the fight to free Erynn, but I'm not sure she would want him getting involved or even finding out as she feels ashamed.

 

[Dessolos]

Well Zane is actually a victim of the sex tape as much as Erynn is, and from what Erynn has said no he doesn't know. She made excuses and dumped him as she had to go to prom with Ethan. I'm sure he would be pretty pissed if he found out, I know I would be. Could be another ally in the fight to free Erynn, but I'm not sure she would want him getting involved or even finding out as she feels ashamed.

This is assuming Zane had no idea about what Ethan was planning. For all I know he could of planned it with Ethan then Ethan pulled a Darth Vader and altered the deal cause it's honestly kind of sus to me how Ethan know when and where to be to record a sex tape.

 

[Justaphase]

This is assuming Zane had no idea about what Ethan was planning. For all I know he could of planned it with Ethan then Ethan pulled a Darth Vader and altered the deal cause it's honestly kind of sus to me how Ethan know when and where to be to record a sex tape.

True, but it would be a pretty weird, from what Erynn said they had started dating. I'm guessing that he set up a camera in Zane's room somehow without his knowledge or consent. But I guess we will find out (hopefully)

 

[Dessolos]

True, but it would be a pretty weird, from what Erynn said they had started dating. I'm guessing that he set up a camera in Zane's room somehow without his knowledge or consent. But I guess we will find out (hopefully)

yeah fair point, honestly didn't think he could of set it up in Zane's room prior either. Normally id take Erynn for her word as I have no reason not to trust her but problem is this is intertwined nothing it as it seems in this game lol.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Episode 13 Story Theories for Erryn and Val Beach scenes

ERRYN BEACH SCENE

Pre-Beach Scene
- Erynn wakes MC up and sexy shenanigans ensue
- MC wakes Erynn up and sexy shenanigans ensue, Melissa gets involved
- (EDIT: If MC wakes up Erynn), Melissa gets involved with MC for the first time not in a dream, Erynn almost catches them (EDIT: After getting ready for the beach)

Going to the beach
- Taking Erynn's car
- Taking MC's bike
- Drive scene to the Beach in car or bike

Beach scene
- MC and Erynn same beach does it copy vary Nikki scene or something more unique to them?
*******Beach flashbacks Childhood memories
*******Erynn models for the MC
*******Dirty Dancing sexy shenanigans
- EDIT: Madison Springs Old Perv encounter?
- Ethan encounter?
- Zane encounter?
*******Near fight or fight with Zane
*******A deep talk about Erynn's sex tape and trauma
- Val encounter
leads to
- Erynn exclusivity scene?
*******Talk about the time the MC proposed with his flower when they were kids?

Post Beach Scene
- Changing huts sexy shenanigans?

***This probably won't be the first completed sex scene with them but I'll be surprised if Nyx does it.

Ride Back Home
-in Erynn's car
-on the MC's bike

Home
- Is Erynn's secret caller from bedroom phone call from the last time going to be revealed or another secret phone call from LSC82's theoretical private investigator looking for John.

Cliffhanger are John and Iris revealed as relations?


VAL BEACH SCENE

- Val meet at the beach like the last time but this time she's wearing orange beanie and there's a variation

- Changing huts (EDIT: Sexy shenanigans) before the beach so MC can see Val putting on the blue swimsuit to full circle his photo booth request

- This is not a training day but we can have a mix of Val screwing with the MC since Val is competitive

- Are we on the public beach or back to the private beach?

- Yes Zane or weight room guy might show up

- Sexy shenanigans on the sand and in the water, things must escalate from kissing and necking, hopefully some groping, boobs play and sucking, not sure if Val wants us near her pussy and ass yet
*****VAL: Stop someone's coming, and this time it's our old friend Madison Springs perv (EDIT: Who's now 3 for 3 in catching the MC with his ladies.)

- Ride home on MC's bike

- Cliffhanger MC meets Ximena or Ximena and GABI
****Or that might be too early since Nyx should really push the explosive potential of this?
****EDIT: Or Ximena sees the MC leaving and realizes (only now) he's the waiter at the restaurant (because Ximena like Santiago and a lot of Intertwined characters have the attention span of a goldfish.)



EDIT:


Yes I forgot.

- We are forced to choose between the two of them? This loses us massive points with one of the ladies.
- Nyx closes off the choice and we are forced to juggle both girls

or

one or both girls leaves us at the beach in anger losing massive points or breaking things off

You think too much on this, you know that, right?

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

yeah fair point, honestly didn't think he could of set it up in Zane's room prior either. Normally id take Erynn for her word as I have no reason not to trust her but problem is this is intertwined nothing it as it seems in this game lol.

Then what? Waited until they had sex? What if they had sex in another place? There is no logical explanation that does not involve Zane being part of it one way or another. Though, Intertwined and logic is kinda water and oil.

 

[Dessolos]

Then what? Waited until they had sex? What if they had sex in another place? There is no logical explanation that does not involve Zane being part of it one way or another. Though, Intertwined and logic is kinda water and oil.

yeah it wasn't a theory I thought made alot of sense either just something I never thought of until he mentioned it. But it's possible Ethan just did it and randomly getting lucky lol ( I very much doubt this would even be the case at all would be terrible writing but can't say it's impossible either.)

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

yeah it wasn't a theory I thought made alot of sense either just something I never thought of until he mentioned it. But it's possible Ethan just did it and randomly getting lucky lol ( I very much doubt this would even be the case at all would be terrible writing but can't say it's impossible either.)

The most logical for me, if there is not any heinous act behind it, would be Zane recorded it for himself and Ethan get that video in some way. Maybe Zane was bragging about it and he stole the video from his phone in some way.

It could be lucky shot if Erynn and Zane was going town regularly, he could have caught them by luck but it was their first and only time, it would be a stretching too hard even for Intertwined standards.

 

[xapican]

The most logical for me, if there is not any heinous act behind it, would be Zane recorded it for himself and Ethan get that video in some way. Maybe Zane was bragging about it and he stole the video from his phone in some way.

It could be lucky shot if Erynn and Zane was going town regularly, he could have caught them by luck but it was their first and only time, it would be a stretching too hard even for Intertwined standards.

Maybe I remember incorrectly but, wasn't Zanes implication explained in one of the path's ? something along the way he was blackmailed or they had a deal with Ethan ?

 

[minibaer12]

The most logical for me, if there is not any heinous act behind it, would be Zane recorded it for himself and Ethan get that video in some way. Maybe Zane was bragging about it and he stole the video from his phone in some way.

It could be lucky shot if Erynn and Zane was going town regularly, he could have caught them by luck but it was their first and only time, it would be a stretching too hard even for Intertwined standards.

hmm, he hasn't even made her orgasm yet. Hm???

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Maybe I remember incorrectly but, wasn't Zanes implication explained in one of the path's ? something along the way he was blackmailed or they had a deal with Ethan ?

I don't remember such a scene but I believe Ethan somehow coerced Zane for that. If the other male model is really Zane, I think Ethan offered a modelling job in exchange of blackmailing material. If Zane had no feeling for Erynn, it's a good deal for him. Also, after the prom he just disappeared off of Erynn's life, which always sounded suspicious to me. A sane person would at least asks an explanation but he just vanished.

hmm, he hasn't even made her orgasm yet. Hm???

As far as we know. Maybe Erynn is annoying because of it? She may need a good dicking. Sorry for the sexist joke.

 

[LSC82]

Past Hand Waving:

- The unseen Erynn and Lexi make up.

- Most of the girls not caring about the MC's past heart breaks and problems aside from Val who got involved by kicking Ethan, but now seems to have promptly forgotten about it.

On most routes this making up happens completely off screen.

- An Erynn walk out or a pillow to Melissa's face was probably the response
- There should be reference to this hopefully because that's quite plausible.

I'd love some teasing and most likely it has been going on since last night lol.

I can see Erynn asking about Nikki/Cara and the trip if the MC brings up the trip.

OR Erynn might try to make more weekend plans with the MC, then he mentions the Riverside trip.

Val might also ask about Nikki/Cara on her own if the MC brings up the trip.

OR Val might try to make more weekend plans with the MC, then he mentions the Riverside trip.

For Erynn specially it makes sense for her to learn of it, she lives right there... and she probably would want to hang out after the beach, she often does that.

With Val it can be brought on with trying to set up a morning run for the next days and the MC saying he can't.

That's fair. The game lacks a lot of positive male figures. Nathan is so far away.

Hopefully this goes the DC/Marvel/anime route - misunderstanding - conflict - begrudging alliance to respect to friendship.

We and the MC think that Zane was involved in the making of the sex tape but it turns out he was just an unwitting pawn. Erynn also was no longer able to explain what happened to Zane after the blackmail began. Hopefully he becomes a bro.

NOTES: Has Erynn mentioned if she thinks Zane was involved in the tape? I forgot already. If Zane finds out we're making the moves on his sister Brooke, how will he react?

Zane's involvement has been largely fan speculation.

Zane doesn't have to be a bad guy to be a rival, it may happen simply because we are competing for the same thing... The fact that he's ex-boyfriend of a love interest does make a friendship a little more difficult, specially on this specific path.
Maybe with time we can see eye to eye, or have some level of mutual respect.

But it's also possible that he holds some resentment towards Erynn for dumping him for another guy (that's how it looks like from his perspective).

yeah fair point, honestly didn't think he could of set it up in Zane's room prior either. Normally id take Erynn for her word as I have no reason not to trust her but problem is this is intertwined nothing it as it seems in this game lol.

We don't have much info on that night, we don't know if it happened at his house(back then he lived with his father and his sister, could be tough to work out), maybe it was a party on Ethan's... Maybe he was searching for a good place for it and trusted the wrong guy to "help him".
We haven't met Zane yet, but Brooke seems like one of the few characters that doesn't have unlimited money, living in a small house, sharing a room with his sister and perhaps struggling to rent out a room is not too farfetched imo.

Him selling the tape for some type of profit or filming it to brag about "deflowering" Erynn are all speculation which may or may not prove true.

 

[misfolk]

I've those too. A clean save for every route. But I treasure my messing around saves. This game has tons of potential drama in it. You should try Layla's path with Erynn and her favourite teacher Gabi or even better: go for Alexis, ditch her in trainings camp for Layla, chose Elena and in the whole time you're hitting on Erynn, has didgeredood Gabi and have a side girl in Riverside. What could possibly go wrong?

Unfortunately, you have to choose between Elena and Gabi.

 

[mnotwoke]

You think too much on this, you know that, right?

Me and Ethan.

hmm, he hasn't even made her orgasm yet. Hm???

 

[anonnyscouse]

Then what? Waited until they had sex? What if they had sex in another place? There is no logical explanation that does not involve Zane being part of it one way or another. Though, Intertwined and logic is kinda water and oil.

Has it ever been confirmed where Erynn and Zane had sex?

My logical explanation would be that Erynn told Ethan that she was planning on losing her virginity on prom night and asked Ethan to help find somewhere for it to happen, so Ethan set up a hotel room thinking it was him she was planning on going to prom with. When Erynn then told him that she was going with Zane and that she was going to lose her virginity to him then Ethan decided to install the camera in the room as revenge for being rejected. Erynn does tell us that up until she took Zane to prom rather than Ethan that Ethan was playing the nice guy and good friend so it's not out of the question that she would have confided in Ethan about her plans and not realise he might think she was talking about losing her virginity to him.