This one has the potential to become one of my most favorite VN's, but there's one point in Chapter 4 that feels totally wrong... with a very weird, unnatural feeling transition.
My first playthrough was with
JokerLeader's mod and this particular bit happened for me after the walk in a snow covered park with Sadie when you're lying in bed with her, and suddenly the next scene I'm in the car with Valeria...
At first I though it was the mod, but now I found
a post in
Sancho1969's mod thread describing exactly the same situation... only that player had a different scene before ending up in Val's car, so it's the VN. Which made me curious enough to look in the code.
Now I'm not one that sits around and waits for a VN to see if it progresses on autopilot, so when I've read/seen a scene with or without text I click. And because it's not a hard pause, but a series of jumps, testing various booleans, you can just click and almost immediately end up in that totally different next scene. Which just feels wrong... even with the transitions (yes it's not just one transition, it's a whole bunch of them, one for each jump to a label where a bool gets tested to check if you're in a particular relationship). So depending on those tests, the transition may be short or even longer than the one before ending up in, in my case, Val's car, that is if you're one that waits to see if a VN progresses by itself or needs a mouse-click.
It just does NOT feel natural, no matter how you look at it... there should at least be some kind of textual intermezzo like e.g. "Some time later". At least that would have felt natural...
Also, there's a few times where there's several (inner)dialogue/narrations shown in sequence on just black screens, which feel like these should have shown some scene showing that particular situation...