First of all,
LazyBloodlines glad your health has recovered and wishing you the best going forward.
This is a pretty great game, albeit speaking only for myself, I'd wish you'd emphasize the school(girls) arc a bit more. The game overview indicates that the School would be the emphasis with the Mafia stuff simmering in the background and that is representative of The Prologue which I enjoyed
a lot. Since embarking on Chapter 1 however, it seems to the reverse with the mafia stuff front and center - a more accurate overview might be: "The MC is a mafioso balls deep in doing mafioso stuff while balancing his relationship with two girls he has at home. He will also have to visit a school once in a while, where, as a side gig, he is the Principle."
I would also like to recommend that for the next update you consider adding a clickable
Info Tab which contains all the relevant stats of the MC. Unless one writes it down, people will quickly lose track of what reputation he has with what factions, how much money he has, the lov/Cor points he has with which girl, the influence of "blue MC" vs "Red MC" (goodness) etc.
For example, there was a point in the latest update where one could "trade" $1000 & -5 reputation with the Wolfpack for +5 reputation with civilians. Now I vaguely recall that I got some money shaking down that minor gang in Jasmine's neighborhood and went with that, but here's where knowing exactly how much money the MC has in his inventory and what his current rep with the Wolfpack is (and if he has enough to spare without it going negative) would have been really useful for making an informed choice.
Anyway, really good game, nice writing and character designs. Looking forward to the next update. Cheers.