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Had some diversions recently but I keep pecking at it when I can! I'm maybe 75% the way through now on Chapter 2Please continue this project. You are the hero that everyone doesn't deserve but realize they need.
Good luck and hope this project catches up to the main game!
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Hopefully it turns out that way down the road! hahaThanks bro. You are a really hero !!!!
If you haven't played the game further then chapter 3 before starting this project, I strongly recommend doing so, because you're about to make it inconsistent storywise. For your project to make sense, You'd have to wipe out part of the story, where you learn about MC's parents, the reasons for living with your aunt and uncle, MC's own past etc. And You learn about those things throughout the next chapters. Creating a mod for incest fans is well and good, and I enjoy those routes as well, but isn't relationship with an aunt and cousins incestuous enough? Especially if turning them into mom and sisters makes no sense in the story?Ahh yes about that, I have a guilty confession to make, I've not actually played through the VN beyond maaybe.. chapter 3? lol I'm essentially Re-Writing the chapter after I've finished reading / seeing it to keep things fresh in my mind.
It could be quite an extensive task without knowing which way the dialogue is written to smooth over that particular relationship dynamic, unless you could give me some pointers / markers to look into?
I'm honestly not sure on it's compatibility with mods, you could give it a go I guess? It shouldn't be too different from the original game barring the script changes etc!Great work, man!
I need to ask, is it compatible with the Cheats Mod of Joker Leader? Because that would be great...
I did actually run into a few "nightmare" scenes during Chapter 2 Re-Writing that I edited out for now that do deal with the topic of his parents etc, I guess I was just sort of accepting the fact that this would end up being a bigger Re-Write than I thought it would be.If you haven't played the game further then chapter 3 before starting this project, I strongly recommend doing so, because you're about to make it inconsistent storywise. For your project to make sense, You'd have to wipe out part of the story, where you learn about MC's parents, the reasons for living with your aunt and uncle, MC's own past etc. And You learn about those things throughout the next chapters. Creating a mod for incest fans is well and good, and I enjoy those routes as well, but isn't relationship with an aunt and cousins incestuous enough? Especially if turning them into mom and sisters makes no sense in the story?
As far as mother option for Amelie goes, I can't and don't want to disagree, because she's just damn perfect in my eyes. I can easily see why people like that option. As for overall subject of this re-write, I just finished playing the entire available content yesterday, so I know for sure, that creativity will be needed in abundance for this. Both uncle Davie and aunt Amelie talk with the MC about past and his parents, so You'll be changing a part of the story, to fit the re-write, while making sure it still makes sense. I'm only concerned that with later development of the game, it will become a struggle for you to keep up with it. Nevertheless I am curious if it will work out, and will most likely try it, once the game is actually completed. So keep at it.I did actually run into a few "nightmare" scenes during Chapter 2 Re-Writing that I edited out for now that do deal with the topic of his parents etc, I guess I was just sort of accepting the fact that this would end up being a bigger Re-Write than I thought it would be.
And the Mom option seems to be highly popular for Amelie so I thought it would be worth providing that option without too many clashes dialogue wise, I'll just have to get creative when it comes to the elements involving his past and what comes in the later Chapters. And I do enjoy being creative!
I've finished Chapter 2's Re-Write and it's ready to upload but I've lost access to the account that created this Mod post (I bought a new pc and wiped the previous one without saving any details .. lol).
So... I guess I'll see what I can do about that little conundrum... stay tuned guys!
Yeah it could certainly be a task for sure haha, but if I stick to making this Re-Write it's own thing, it will almost be like two separate games rather than just a modification of the original?As far as mother option for Amelie goes, I can't and don't want to disagree, because she's just damn perfect in my eyes. I can easily see why people like that option. As for overall subject of this re-write, I just finished playing the entire available content yesterday, so I know for sure, that creativity will be needed in abundance for this. Both uncle Davie and aunt Amelie talk with the MC about past and his parents, so You'll be changing a part of the story, to fit the re-write, while making sure it still makes sense. I'm only concerned that with later development of the game, it will become a struggle for you to keep up with it. Nevertheless I am curious if it will work out, and will most likely try it, once the game is actually completed. So keep at it.
I haven't yet, but I am curious. I had this game on the backburner for a few months, and decided to finally give it a try. That's how I took notice of your re-write this time. I'm going through Something To Write About series at the moment, and will give this re-write a go to change the pace. Frankly I was a bit disappointed with STWA - The Author. That's the first game I didn't want to bang any chick in AVN, despite the game being well written, more or less. But I better not bore You with details.Did you happen to check out the Chapter 1 Re-Write btw? I'm curious what your thoughts are on it so far.
I think I've read through that one? And yeah I think there has to be a balance between attractiveness and quality of dialogue for it to be compelling. I started one recently and the dialogue was far too descriptive and long winded it made the whole experience a chore. I think the author had perhaps spent too much time with a dictionary XDI haven't yet, but I am curious. I had this game on the backburner for a few months, and decided to finally give it a try. That's how I took notice of your re-write this time. I'm going through Something To Write About series at the moment, and will give this re-write a go to change the pace. Frankly I was a bit disappointed with STWA - The Author. That's the first game I didn't want to bang any chick in AVN, despite the game being well written, more or less. But I better not bore You with details.
Actually there is a game, Stranded in Space. Long winded as hell, but very well written, entertaining, with a lot of different characters, and absolutely hilarious. Developer's sense of humor is off the charts. One of my favs, despite me not being very fond of sci-fi. There's so much text to go through, that many people hate the game for that, but I enjoyed every second. All the dialogues are well incorporated into the story. It was truly difficult to find anything I dislike about that one.I think I've read through that one? And yeah I think there has to be a balance between attractiveness and quality of dialogue for it to be compelling. I started one recently and the dialogue was far too descriptive and long winded it made the whole experience a chore. I think the author had perhaps spent too much time with a dictionary XD
I prefer it to be a bit lighter and easier to read with some humour thrown in there (being careful not to over-use it where inappropriate though of course).
I tried to make Heart Problems a bit more entertaining to read overall, though far be it for me to claim whether or not I succeeded at that lol
Yeah the one I started was very nihilist and edgy with a lot of convoluted lines that were often repeated. Definitely a tough read.Actually there is a game, Stranded in Space. Long winded as hell, but very well written, entertaining, with a lot of different characters, and absolutely hilarious. Developer's sense of humour is off the charts. One of my favs, despite me not being very fond of sci-fi. There's so much text to go through, that many people hate the game for that, but I enjoyed every second. All the dialogues are well incorporated into the story. It was truly difficult to find anything I dislike about that one.
Ahh yes about that, I have a guilty confession to make, I've not actually played through the VN beyond maaybe.. chapter 3? lol I'm essentially Re-Writing the chapter after I've finished reading / seeing it to keep things fresh in my mind.
Looks like we'll have to wait a while.I did actually run into a few "nightmare" scenes during Chapter 2 Re-Writing that I edited out for now that do deal with the topic of his parents etc, I guess I was just sort of accepting the fact that this would end up being a bigger Re-Write than I thought it would be.
I've finished Chapter 2's Re-Write and it's ready to upload but I've lost access to the account that created this Mod post (I bought a new pc and wiped the previous one without saving any details .. lol).
So... I guess I'll see what I can do about that little conundrum... stay tuned guys!
I'm just rushing through Chapter 1 again and then Chapter 2 tweaking and restructuring sentences here and there.It may be a stretch considering how early phase the writing is, but do you have an approximate timeframe you aim to catch up to the current update?
I decided to stop playing because I want this rewrite to catch up to the current update and any future ones, so how long do you think it'll take? Stopping myself from playing this gem is really hard.