VN - Ren'Py - Lesson in Loyalty [Ch.5] [RWA Studios]

Ch.3

This one has some potential. It's on the slower side and the only real action involving the MC doesn't happen until Chapter3. I haven't played anything else from this dev, so I don't have prior work to compare it to, but there are multiple scenes of non-LIs have sex.

I'm not in love with how much of a pushover the MC is, but hopefully that's something we get to resolve in the game.

The models are quite attractive. I do love redheads, tattooed women and busty women that look natural.

I'm sure this will benefit from a walkthough down the line.

Can't wait for the next update.

Pros:
- very beautiful models, with different body shapes and no copy/paste faces from other games.
- good animations
- interesting story - I don't think I played a game with this kind of teacher MC. Sure, there are plenty of games with teachers corrupting the pupils, but this one is unique because the mothers are the focus.

Con:
- only a short hot scene until now. I hope the future will bring more and longer scenes.

Its good game and lots of internal pressure/drama is building. But downside is MC. He is too much wimp. Not even a cuck but a wimp. Gets bullied by coworker, high schoolers, his boss.. Another thing I personally didn't like was too many single moms or married LIs. Just does not feels right.. Why chase after used cars when there is tons of new ones..

Randers and models are great, no complains there. Game is really worth checking out. Hope it will get better.

Found this game because I was looking (search) for another game, I'm really grateful that I found this game.

The amazing render quality has been praised by many, I don't need to add more.

The thing that captivates me the most about this game is the plot/story,

Being a private teacher going to young mother's house to teach their child can trigger a very exciting story.

My favorite part is having a neighbor who is a beautiful young mother, her husband is in the military. It will be exciting how their relationship develops.

Maybe it's because I like Milf and my fetish is "cheating on people's wives" that makes me so satisfied with this game.

Wow, such a polished game, yet so little appreciation. I mean, I can understand the criticism, but still, I feel we jump to criticism more quickly than appreciating the good and positive aspects more vocally. And that too for an AVN like this. Anyways, here is my own analysis:

**Pros:**
1. The UI is quite unique and snappy. Good job!
2. I think we all can unequivocally agree to this point—the renders, mind-blowing!
3. The sound, music, and the whole ambiance are perfect; hardly one can argue on this point as well.
4. Well, this may be the most divisive point. Let me state this—I myself would have bullied someone like the MC in real life. I mean, not that I would do it, but saying the MC is a wimp, period. Now, the thing is, this is still a story that we are witnessing and not ourselves. And it's not always that we can and should get an MC who is the most chad of all. Sometimes an MC who is average or kind of bland is also refreshing to see IF IMPLEMENTED PROPERLY! I also just avoid or don't like a weak MC, but on this one, the MC has a real personality, and the dev has found a very good base for the MC to get character development. I also cringed in many places due to the MC's wimpiness, like come on, who gets bullied by schoolgirls at that age, but we have to remember there are people like that, unlike us. So it is a refreshing change. Of course, I am taking this into consideration that the MC will surely develop; otherwise, this will go to the negative, and why waste money going to the gym then.
5. Very realistic characters, and the dialogues between them are quite good and relatable. I also didn't mind the English that much, maybe because I am a non-native English speaker.
6. The plot is also simple yet effective. I liked it. Has a great premise to introduce drama later on and create more tensions if the dev wishes. I certainly wish to see more elements like drama, character developments, relationship problems, and any other mature-themed topics to be implemented here. The foundation is there for all these to be implemented.

**So-so:**
1. While I didn't mind the English, the monologue of the MC could have been better written. What I meant to say is it should have sounded more mature; instead, they sound loose and distracting from the more mature interactions happening between the MC and other characters.
2. Now this can be debatable, but while I personally like such good-looking girls, not all girls should have been so good-looking. I mean, it hardly ever happens that I find all the girls in games attractive, but here I wanted to make everyone part of my harem—the LIs and non LIs, the main characters and the side characters, and even the background females. While those may be a wish and made me happy while playing, I am always a strong supporter of the story in AVNs, and following that trend here also I will say this is bad for story development, no two ways about it.
3. The choices are not many, and I think you should look into that as well. While saying that, I think most of the choices that were given were good, as I believe in more quality than quantity when having choices in these types of games.
4. The game is quite short in its current state.

Dev, you have talent in making AVNs; yes, you may need some help in some areas, but you're doing tremendous work. And so, good luck for future updates!

Looking spicy! Love interests are all visually appealing and unique to each other. MC is having the time of his life meeting gorgeous girls left and right lmao. In terms of plot, there's nothing thrilling or anything serious, it's all about MC that is kind of struggling about his life and career while working two part time jobs where he meets the other girls one by one.

I will give it a 5 if ever future updates will lean into an emotional ride in its plot, as of now i don't see it going that route but i hope to be surprised.

Version of Review: Ch. 1

If the game is from vilkas there is no need to worry about renders it will be top notch but have to worry about English. But in this game it's good thanks to saint blackmoor for helping in English translation. About the story, i remember reading a pornhwa with same story long time ago. Forgot it's name though but after some chapters i dropped it. I do remember reading at this point where something gonna happen to lactating woman or her small child. Then Mc took her to hospital. Then she thinks her husband was not there when she need him most but MC was there. Well you know what gonna happen next

I don't mind seeing it here. Here renders are top notch. Don't know whether dev gonna follow the same story.

I enjoyed playing it. It was short though. Keep up the good work dev looking forward to next updates

Great AVN looking forward to it keep up the good work and if I talk about the
game perfect. Models are awesome, story is really good, the map is interesting and damn the animations ! As we know Vilkas known for his great animations.

Great rendering don't overcompensate terrible dialogues. Any of the games from this dev need a proofreader badly as right now all they are is the wasted potential. Another thing is that you can't take a super weird fetish and just blend it randomly into the story without letting the player choose whether he wants to see it or not.
UPDATE: I was thinking about this game, and the more games I play, the more I am convinced it doesn't deserve two stars: bad writing + terrible English, wimp MC who cannot control his dick, lack of choices, this game should never be released in the state it is.

If you go back and play the Christmas version of Lust Of Pain and compare the quality of rendering to this game then you can make the argument that Vilkas Creative is one of the best artist around. Storytelling is another thing but he's getting there.


Story:

You're down on your luck which is totally normal as a lot of us has been there. You working as a teacher and part time personal trainer. You encounter a drop dead gorgeous woman from your past in Lilie and she's married..
Not mad at that but disappointed as there's clearly something between the two. She hooks you up with two other knock outs in need of tutoring for their kids. From there with see Rosa who's also married and has two kids, one of which you tutor. She's alone as her husband is temporarily out of the picture.

Now my worry with this situation is that this could turn into a cheating-fest. It's one of the reasons why people ask for tags.. There is a monogamous and romance crowd and I am a proud card carrying member. Now, I'm sure Netori fans may jump for joy but I personally am not too much into it. Besides that, there's also the fact that Rosa's husband actually seems like a caring and stand up guy. Who's only away from his family in the first place and that's to make money and put food the table. But she looks to be one of the main girls so it's sort of the elephant in the room thing for me. It's like cheating could be one of the ways to get lewd content. Same thing could be said for Lilie.

One thing I didn't like is of course the passiveness of the main character. Now, others have already called him things along the lines of: Wimpy, Cowardly, and other things and they're not wrong.

Look I'm not a UFC fighter, I'm not confrontational, I don't go looking for trouble but I'm also no one's PUSHOVER. So it really grinds my gears when I play a guy that can't even stand up for himself. He stares at two "Schoolgirls" and gets confronted by them and can't even defend himself? No guy who looks like the MC should be getting... punked out by "school girls" lol.

Then the same thing happens at the gym. "Hey, Loser!" Is what Jay calls the MC and he just takes it. And no, it wasn't in a jokingly manner as we saw Jay basically humiliate the MC in front of Jane. Luckily for the MC's sake Jane is a pretty bright person as she saw through Jay's bullshit and decided to ask the MC to be her personal trainer instead. But please, grow a pair and don't take 10 updates before you finally stand up for yourself.

Lastly, the Kevin situation.

Now every country is different but in my country it's illegal to leave your underage kid at home all alone in any circumstance. Here, we have this situation play out where the MC finds this kid whose crying because he accidentally locked himself out of the home and in comes the MC who offers to invite the kid into his home... for chocolate milk.

Yeah... Not in this climate.

I would've stayed in the hallway with him and waited until his mother came home. That way I cover my ass. But that's just what I would've done, it's different rules in different countries I know but better be safe than sorry. His mom, Kelly arrives, she gives her thanks and that's the end.

Not much to go on but again the visuals are damn near perfect, that's never been a real issue with this Dev in my opinion. I just haven't enjoyed his or their stories so far. Although Lust Of Pain is growing on me.

Dialogue:
There's good grammar and having good dialogue. There's a difference but some still haven't picked up on that.

This game for the most part doesn't have that glaring problem. There were instances where it stood out like the confrontations with the "schoolgirls"(Let's be real here, those were grown ass women not schoolgirls) where the dialogue got dicey. But not bad to the point where you can't understand what's going on.

Renders:
Superb

Characters:
The models are heavy on the beautiful side, if you're only into that then you'll love this but it felt like I was watching Beverly Hills, 90210 where everyone is extremely hot. Even on public transportation the MC was sitting in front of hotties. Adding a average model or two won't dissuade players, I promise. The MC himself is pretty handsome, I don't mind that at all. What I do mind is him stuttering around women. Like dude look in the mirror. Also he reminds me a lot of Æthelred from the Last Kingdom.

Overall:
This is project number 4 counting the rework so.. We'll see what becomes of this one. Good Luck.

I love the game and Yes it does resemble manwha which someone mentioned above. Every game is straight up a copy of other with minor changes or spinoff, etc. So, I don't care if that is the case, at least it is not like 1000 others but like 1 or two. Plus Graphics are great. I love Lillie (Redhead). I love how Dev tries to capture emotions and face expressions (talking about Lillie). Absolutely loved the story. At least it is far more interesting and greater than this previous games.

Absolutely loved the cast as of now(ch1)!

The ring scene was such a blow to the face But Loved the scene.

MC HAS to grow backbone soon otherwise signs are not looking great and story can take pretty dark turn if that is Planned, I hope not(3forbiddenwords). As of now it is giving only Netori vibes and MC is gonna do stealing.

Loved the cast and story as of now. Looking forward to next chapter.

KEEP GROWING!

GOLDLUCK!

Small initial version of the game, with not much content but has potential.

Models are very nice and realistic albeit "too pretty" but being a game and fantasy that is not really an issue.

The dialogue is not as good as it could be, there is some work needed to proof read and structure sentences better.

Characters that know the MC need more introduction, the one scene felt disconnected and a bit too forced to be a random coincidence.

The MC is a beta male that is as they always are to me, highly annoying to play as, but I suspect that the developer purposefully made the MC this way to suggest and start on a low confidence character that gradually gains more confidence to become an alpha. I hope!

As said, early days, but good start, can go a few places or absolutely nowhere, lets see what happens in a few updates. Hopefully they wont be too small and occur in reasonable time-frames.

This is a nice start, and it's going to be a real treat for those who love milfs and women of the married variety.

The MC is almost so down on his luck, i started wondering if he pissed off a witch. This cat is cursed! The cool thing about it, however, is that he not only hangs onto hope but remains a good man despite his obvious troubles and despair.

If I had one complaint with this game, it is so sickening and difficult to watch a man continuously punked. And not just by men, but f-ing schoolgirls too. I hope this guy's character arc from "zero to hero" starts soon, because this sh*t is hard to watch.

That said, I look forward to seeing where this magic carpet takes us -- just so long as homeboy grows a pair.