Fan Art Dating My Daughter: Fan Art

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CulayTL

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this time I added more objects. not the easiest to edit her pose.
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Awesome.. one minor thing.. her thumb should touch the dick maybe..
If I was me I would bend her hand and or arm a bit and grasp the cock a little bit more for a proper HJ not just a touch.. make sure you have her hand selected (not arm, not big thumb) on parameters tab type grasp and from there if some fingers doesn't match you can bend them back, depending by the angle.. usually I'm trying to keep something like 90 between hand and dick in this case.
On Rochelle hair parameters or shaping.. (shitty hair to work with it aparently..) search for tail try to make it shorter and bend full I guess a bit to the left and maybe a bit backwards.. it looks like it's inside her body.. or it drops down in a straight line but her head it's bended to the left
If you try to make the tail shorter probably you'll loose that middle bump there..
Change her Bra and give her some earings.. she's wearing my mothers casual bra and earings but at the end of the day she's doing a gloryhole scene..

Sry mate.. started from a minor one.. hope you don't mind.. no offence..
But yeah.. great job!
 
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I noticed in some of the more recent DMD game renders that the ponytail kink is shown ingame...

Someone mentioned zeroing out the hidden parameters on the ponytail to help reduce the kink. I think that helped, but I'd need to test that again. Most of the time I'm just lazy and fix it in post, if I remember.
 

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Would like to be able to see Bob Ross painting D
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Some Prae Hair style for Bob (Prae specializes in the hairstyles like the one Bob has). Check...
Bob Ross 3D model lookalike. Hmmmm....

It'd be more fun to have Bob painting on Dee directly. Anyways, it's a thought at least!
 
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ok did some adjustments. i think its better now.

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I'd suggest selecting the ponytail bones, swinging the top one back a bit, and then adjusting the 'mid' bone to bend it forward again. That'll help reduce the kink a lot.

Looks like you are coming along nicely otherwise!
 

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I want advice/tips on my work. Show your boy some love.
 
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I like your stylistic choices in general, plus there are waaaay better artists than me, so I'll just say that keep doing whatever you are doing. I really like how that gals vs orcs piece turned out.

Your lighting choices are generally much more interesting than mine I think.

If I were to nitpick the orc piece, the bow looks a bit too far behind the fingers in the right hand, but that just may be the lighting shadow playing tricks on my eyes.
 
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Your lighting choices are generally much more interesting than mine I think.
I wouldn’t say anything is more interesting, it’s just different as we have different styles. But thanks for your kind words. Was looking for more criticism, but I’ll take it. Your right about the hand she wipes her ass with. It’s off, now that look closer.
 

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I want advice/tips on my work. Show your boy some love.
I like your work.
Your last fantasy render was great, IMO one of your best. Really good, now D in skimpier armor :love:.
I like that hair in your work obeys the laws of physics. Too often in many renders (and games) a model is laying down and her hair is running parallel to her body.
 
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I like your work.
Your last fantasy render was great, IMO one of your best. Really good, now D in skimpier armor :love:.
I like that hair in your work obeys the laws of physics. Too often in many renders (and games) a model is laying down and her hair is running parallel to her body.
Then your going to really like my next one. Its rendering now. Can't wait to show you. And also, you always comment on my work to let me know what I did right. I appreciate that, so thank you.
 

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Nice D variant.
D certainly has taken on a life of her own in the fan art thread.
 
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