And with captions you could make it more understandable. Lettting know what Sophia is thinking, why she is dreaming this. What is everyone saying. Dream and real life in one story.Dream sequence it is then
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Many men resent the fact that women love money!
But this is a big mistake!
Women love those men who can make money!
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Part 6 Monday. 2 continuation (Liam's second day on a business trip)
Holding an envelope in her hands, Sofia hugged a bouquet of roses and closed her eyes inhaled their scent, bending her face into the flowers! The roses were large with velvety, delicate petals! They gently touched Sophia's face like the touch of a baby! Sofia froze with pleasure prolonging this moment.
Then she sat down on her bed.
Sofia
How lovely! Such gorgeous roses!
But what is this envelope? How much money is there?
She opened the envelope wider and guessed it was about ten thousand US dollars.
Sofia
(When the messenger brought the bouquet, there was no envelope in it, that's for sure! I could not help but see, it is just huge!
I have to ask Dylan! He could put an envelope in a bouquet. Or maybe it's an envelope from Sam? He said that I was dearer to him than anything else!
The gifts he bought me were also expensive )
At that moment, Ellie entered the room.
Ellie
You have gorgeous roses, mom!
Sofia
Your bouquet is great too! I liked it very much!
Ellie
Me too!
Ellie noticed an open envelope full of money in Sofia's hands.
Ellie
What kind of money is that?
Sofia
Run to school, don't be late! I'll tell you later. Are you ready for class?
Ellie
Yes, mom, don't worry!
Sofia walked over to Ellie and kissed her on the cheek. Ellie went to school.
Dylan looked through the door.
Dylan
Do you like your bouquet of roses?
Sofia
Visit me.
The bouquet is wonderful!
Tell me please, did Sam arrange it?
(If Dylan is involved, he'll be offended that she only mentioned Sam )
Or are you together?
Dylan
Mom, what's the difference? The main thing is that you liked it!
Sofia
Who cares?
There's a lot of money here! Where are they from?
Dylan
Mom, there are only ten thousand! There is no reason to worry.
Sofia sat down on the bed and looked at Dylan.
Dylan
Mom, remember how recently I touched your ass, you scolded me for it. Then you let me touch you, then you showed your breasts.
I told you that this is more important to me than the prefix and everything else!
But your late-night show exceeded my wildest expectations!
I am immensely grateful to you!
What I did not expect at all, what happened to Amber! I think this is also thanks to you!
The whole Sunday we spent on the beach with you was great!
Therefore, thank you!
And money is little things! I am not asking for anything in return. Dispose of them as you like, this is my little thanks to you.
Sophia looked at Dylan with wide, surprised eyes. She thought that she had underestimated her son.
Her eyes began to fill with tears.
What was happening reminded Sofia that Liam owed Morello a large sum and Sofia burst into tears. She turned away from Dylan, lay face down on the pillow and sobbed.
Dylan
Mom, why are you crying?
(Dylan wondered )
Things are good! Nobody will know what happened! I talked to Sam about it. I'm sure he won't tell anyone. You don't have to worry.
Sofia continued to cry. Dylan sat down beside her and began to gently stroke Sofia's head.
He was confused and did not understand why his mother was crying. He felt sorry for her to the point of pain in his heart.
Dylan
Mom, I'm sorry ...
Please don't regret what happened! I beg you...
Sofia sat up and hugged Dylan.
Sophia
I'm not sorry, and I guess you and Sam won't do anything to make me regret.
Sophia pulled away from Dylan a little. He began to gently touch his lips to her face. Kissing eyes and cheeks where tears flowed. Dylan very gently licked her tears from Sofia's cheeks. Sofia stopped crying. Then he touched her lips with his lips. Sofia's breath was very hot.
Tender touches grew into a passionate kiss. They kissed long and passionately.
Then Sophia pulled Dylan away from her a little.
Sophia
I feel that he wants me again. Not now! Go to school or you'll be late.
Dylan
Mom, why did you cry like that?
Sofia, with some kind of pain and sadness in her eyes, looked seriously at Dylan.
Sophia
I need money, but unfortunately, much more than you gave me.
Dylan calmly, even with some kind of passion, asked
Dylan
How much do you need, mom?
Sophia was intrigued by Dylan's calmness.
Sophia
You never told me where you got this money from! Instead, you ask how much I need! Have you robbed the bank?
Dylan laughed.
Dylan
I told you, you just ignored my words. I even helped Sam so he could buy presents for you.
So how much do you need?
Sophia
More than two hundred thousand, son.
Sofia said, completely upset by this circumstance.
Dylan
Nothing wrong! I think in a few months or half a year I can earn them ...
Sophia
But money is needed by the time Dad returns from a business trip.
Dylan
Whoa! Let me think.
Dylan thought about it and leaving Sophia alone he went to his room, sat down at the computer desk.
Sofia entered Dylan's room a little later.
Sophia
Son, go to school, you're already late. What's your first lesson? I'll call the teacher, tell him that you are late because of me.
Dylan sat quietly at the computer and did something there.
Dylan
Don't worry mom! I won't go to school today, and probably in the coming days either.
(Dylan turned to Sophia )
Do you need money?
So, the school is canceled for now.
Sophia
How is it canceled? Let's go to school, I'll solve the money problem.
(I really don't know how yet! Perhaps Don Morello das a reprieve? )
Dylan
I'm going to print some information that I need on my printer and go to town. Don't worry, everything will be all right!
Just forgive, I have two thousand, but I need another three thousand five hundred! Can I take it from you?
Sophia
Yes, of course you can take it! But what does all this mean?
Dylan
I'm going to get you two hundred and twenty-odd thousand dollars. Unless, of course, the bitcoin rate falls this week!
I managed to exchange my one bitcoin for dollars at a rate of twelve thousand. But now the rate has dropped a little lower. I guess in a week he'll be back at twelve and you get two hundred and twenty thousand.
If of course I can handle it? There is very little time!
Sophia
I do not understand anything! What does bitcoin have to do with its rate? How can you get more than two hundred thousand dollars in a week?
Dylan
Well, in one week, it’s really very difficult, but I’m going to try. I have ideas.
Dylan got up from the table and asked Mom to sit down and watch.
Dylan
Sit down and look, I'll try to quickly explain to you.
Sofia sat down at the computer desk.
Dylan
In the United States of America, one in every five millionaires made their fortune in the MLM business. I accidentally found a global Internet project that uses elements of building an MLM business. Thanks to this, Sam earned his two thousand dollars, and I made twelve.
Sofia
And what have some bitcoins to do with it? I heard something, but I don't know anything about them.
Dylan
Mom, the project runs on bitcoins. Here, read here how everything works.
Dylan pointed to Sofia the correct section on the monitor screen. Sofia read carefully.
Sofia
Son, but this looks like a Ponzi game!
Dylan
Exactly, it looks like!
But unlike Ponzi's games, this project was created by crypto enthusiasts, not swindlers! That's why Sam and I made the money. And therefore, I have hope that in a week I can bring you what you need!
Dylan considered. Sophia looked at him in bewilderment.
Dylan
The fact is that I need five thousand three hundred seventy six people. That's a lot for one week. I will probably need your help. I'll tell you in the evening.
(Dylan spoke thoughtfully and drawnly )
Sofia was perplexed. The printer has finished printing some papers.
Dylan
All mom, please stand up. I need to throw some photos into my smartphone and I ran.
Sofia got up and went to her bedroom.
After a few minutes, Dylan dropped in on her.
Dylan
Mom, please give me three thousand five hundred dollars.
Sophia silently handed Dylan an envelope. He pulled out the amount he needed and returned the envelope to Sophia.
Dylan
Mom, don't worry, I'll be back tonight. And don't worry, everything will be fine!
Dylan closed the door and Sofia heard the steps of her son running down the hall.
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We will continue in the near future.
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Laying great ground work and keeping us guessing to where this will lead.... lovin it...
I read his story today. You did a hell of a job with this. Very impressed. I'm sure the finishing will be very erotic, naughty.Thank you for your kind words and feedback.. The source material from Bane71 did have a slower burn and further outfits but as you can appreciate rendering all of these scenes is extensive and I have been forced to cherry pick the scenes I do to allow the narrative to flow but not turn this initial scene into war and peace
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Its a labour of love haha.... I would only spend the time for our Sophia
thanks for the kind words of encouragement.
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Sorry but I'm not good at story writing. Also English is not my native language and I'm not that good in English, maybe I will give it a try in the future but not anytime soon.And with captions you could make it more understandable. Lettting know what Sophia is thinking, why she is dreaming this. What is everyone saying. Dream and real life in one story.
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I made this but apparently I understood wrong the request.
Anyway.. there is a auction for a thresome....
Anyway.. there is a auction for a thresome....
if you post some more, i will try to put some words in the pictures. Mayby fun to do. I am dutch btw
Congrats to Bruno de Montdragon, great job, great artwork, i hope you will make more of Sophia and Dylan stories and scenes, great mom/son characters. She's almost perfect for stories as cheating wife and, most of all, as "mother with son"character.
Please continue this, I wanted so many other options in the real story along this story arc...Should I let her escape unharmed or should I let them have their way with her??
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Fantastic, beautiful, except few dialogues. But i think that situation mom-son-his friend is incredibly exciting, and it's actually somehow believable, in real life, maybe teen boys (son and friend or cousin) trying and flirting with modern-days mom and eventually fuck her good, could actually happen. Anyway, i hope you will create first good sex scene with these 3, and then one where Sophia is getting fucked by her son only, him becoming some kind of her new man.
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Thanks for the feedback.
This is a large undertaking and its good to know its being appreciated by many of you . Note the story its self isn't mine but has been penned here by Bane71. There are a lot of processes here from the posing, rendering, generation of the text and narrative boxes thru to photo shop and final page layout. You will need to bare with me as this is all completed by me only and maybe not all text choices will be either consistent with the game style of speech or current game character personalities as as portrayed by the Dev.
All constructive comments are taken on board and i do welcome them.
Thanks.
A few extra thoughts then. I can imagine that the boys are so fucked up, that they would like Sophia perform first another show in this hot bikine. They know they get lucky so this show would be extra hot for them and I guess Sophia will agree gladly. While doing this she must thinking what shall i do. The boys are so horny, but no experiency. It must go not to quick when their boners are in her hand finally. And should she swallow both of them or just one. And later when sshe is alone with dylan, is he still so horny for a second with her.
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Thanks again.A few extra thoughts then. I can imagine that the boys are so fucked up, that they would like Sophia perform first another show in this hot bikine. They know they get lucky so this show would be extra hot for them and I guess Sophia will agree gladly. While doing this she must thinking what shall i do. The boys are so horny, but no experiency. It must go not to quick when their boners are in her hand finally. And should she swallow both of them or just one. And later when sshe is alone with dylan, is he still so horny for a second with her.
I take ur suggestions on board.
Please note the current story is already set out renders so I cant change but there will be possible other continuations where this can be explored.
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story is getting too dark, even for me
