VN - HTML - 13 Basic Blunders to Cuckening [v0.15A] [Liturgy]

Don't ever say I didn't give it a chance...

This is low effort AI slop.

Terrible writing, terrible pacing, terrible characters.

The "game", if you can even call it that, reads like a very low quality porno flick from the 80's, plus lots of "current day" slangs.

It's also too short even for a first release, and even the AI art is low effort from a model available on civitai.

Aaaaand, the cherry on top... It's paywalled!

This site is being SPAMMED with low effort, paywalled AI slop which just so happen to be mostly NTR. Probably all made by the same person with different accounts.

Abso-fucking-lutely terrible.

Man, the story's just plain dull, got no real hook, and the way it's written feels kinda clumsy. You can't even tell half the time if someone's talking out loud or just thinking it's a real head-scratcher. Visually, it ain't much to look at; honestly looks kinda cheap and unfinished, like they didn't smooth out the rough edges. The character art looks wonky in places, too, pretty amateur stuff. Plus, that background tune just repeats and repeats, gets super annoying, and if you try to mute it, poof, all the sound goes away! Seriously feels like they put out a half-baked game; definitely not worth shelling out cash for it right now.

Let's get to the bad first for "13 Basic Blunders to Cuckening."

Shit incoherent writing with no cohesiveness.

Shit AI generated art.

Shit paywall scam.

Now that the bad aspects are covered, let's move on to the good:

Nothing.

I must express my deep disappointment with this game. The development appears rushed and incomplete, giving the impression that players are essentially paying to be beta testers. The implementation of AI art is particularly troubling. The obvious morphing issues and consistently hidden hands reveal a lack of technical proficiency. It comes across as amateurish work that wasn't ready for public release. One of the most frustrating aspects is the audio design. The background music loops incessantly with a techno beat that feels completely disconnected from the game's atmosphere. Even worse, muting the music eliminates all sound effects, destroying any chance of immersion. The dialogue suffers from numerous syntax errors, and the internal monologue formatting is confusing. Unlike properly developed visual novels, it's often unclear when characters are thinking versus speaking. The paywall structure feels especially exploitative given the unfinished state of the game. It's essentially asking players to fund development while receiving an incomplete product. The narrative itself lacks depth and originality. Characters feel one-dimensional and uninteresting, while the storyline follows predictable patterns without any compelling hooks. For a game in this genre, the writing quality is particularly disappointing - awkward phrasing and cringe-worthy dialogue make it difficult to connect with the story or characters. Overall, this feels like an early draft rather than a finished product. I cannot recommend spending money on something that needs significant improvement in nearly every aspect of its design and execution.

The art looks good, but the writing needs help. The story needs a lot of development. Beware because the content is pay walled. All it is, is a money grab by the creator making us pay to alpha test for him. That makes it a hard nope for me.

I played the free online version.
Usually, I would like to support this kind of game, but the entire game feels very half-baked and has many issues.

I personally support AI art when it's done right. Regarding its use here, AI seems to be done so haphazardly that it has glaringly obvious AI morphs and obviously hidden hands, which is a huge downside to AI. That, to me, says, " Look, I'm not good enough yet."
The background music is annoying because it's on a short loop and is kind of techno. It doesn't fit the game. If you mute the music, all other sounds are muted, which is not good for immersion.

The dialogue has mistakes in syntax, IMO. Also, when the character thinks to themselves, you can't tell immediately like you can in a renpy game.
Playability is hampered because of these many issues.
I don't recommend this game at this time.

No, just no.

I don't mind ntr games, some are really good, but my god this one is bad. The writing is cringe inducing, the story basic af, the characters boring and then there's the paywall. I legitimately think this was written by a teenager.

The ai art is fine, nothing special or groundbreaking. In fact anyone with some basic knowledge could get the same results.

I don't wanna sound harsh but this just isn't it. If you want some advice, improve your writing and storytelling and then revamp the whole thing.