VN - HTML - 13 Basic Blunders to Cuckening [v0.25] [Liturgy]

Art is okay (typical AI style, which I like at times) but there are errors (like 4 fingered hands) that don't get corrected.

Music is not fitting of the genre/situation. It sounds like a sci-fi soundtrack when this game is nothing like that. Same thing with the menu/overall design, it makes it seem "tech"-y when I don't get those vibes from the game.

Story is there to get you to the hotter stuff, but couldn't progress much though cause it's heavily paywalled.

A significantly underrated VN. 4/5 is for the public version I have had access to, pretty sure the real deal would be a 5 for me.

The developers specialise, and excel, in a niche variety of NTR; comedic humiliation cuckoldry. They also (in)famously experiment with modes of (b)locking paid content, UI's and teaser-styles for their public releases (extended h-scenes are a quick-paced slideshow without text in 13 Blunders). Both projects also have quirky titles.

Overview:
In both this and their real-porn VN, the MC starts in a standard mystery NTR position, catching escalating smirky, winky gossip and, despite his best efforts at denial, gradually confirming the rumours. What would otherwise be the climax, tonal-shift mark or ending of a mystery NTR is merrily skipped past as the momentum is kept with the same mocking humour and teasing lewdness. The story thus shifts into the voyeuristic cuckold genre.

So far the content is a well-calibrated version of a standard recipe: lover's (and son's and brother's!) angst, the occasional conciliatory release (like by a footjob) and accustomisation to voyeurism. The dev recycles the formula with some variations with virtually everybody the MC knows, every woman is a cuckoldress (office assistant, mother, sister, neighbour's cat) and every man a bull (friends, colleagues, salesmen, you name it). Though we'll likely see actual development of the arc, these procedural episodes give us more than harem-esque variety and incest as they allow the dev not to stretch the build-up of events to enlarge the content and avoid fizzling and/or dead-ends.

Writing:
The diction is good. The dialogue is not devoid of wit and wickedness. The exposition and pacing are quite good and/but? the backstory reveal is... quirky. There's enough porn in the words, honestly like it and lament I don't have access to the patron-version. There's a so-called brain-rot language with the wife in which she speaks some Wonderland gibberish which I found brilliant (AI-phobia comes up in the discussion, suggesting it's unrevised AI-writing but that's... gibberish).

Art:
Visuals are mostly very hot, and of a less common AI-art style (I think there's one or two games I've come across that have the same basic aesthetic, it's less Melkorish than the famous bunch and not like anime). Kind of a dwarfish aesthetic, mostly sexy large sharp eyes, bit oversized heads (not bad) and shapely curves, legs and feet, there's interest in pantyhose, urination and realistic hairy vaginas (and a taint!). Here and there there's caricaturish depiction of the scene which I found fitting (but it may break the immersion for some, not sure). Some inconsistencies in the clothes do occur, like thong shifting into a sheer bodysuit underwear but it's nothing too distracting. Judging by the images the scenes are not really short, I think about average number per scene compared to other VNs and there's a creative vulgarity to them. There's a lot of sensual teasing but sex is not softcore.

Comment on reputation:
This project has received more flak than I've ever witnessed for its more successful attempts (I don't understand the hows) at paywalling content. While the smaller interest in freesharing and stronger refusal of piracy is untrendy, the dev is by no means the only one with this philosophy and their response has not been uncordial. It is rather sad. Perhaps it was the AI visuals or the NTR genre-individually highly flammable substances, that added fuel to the fuel? I don't know. Alas, the scientific method has yet to explain why certain creatures are more attractive to the pitchfork and the torch. Regardless, those simply looking for a funny, nice-looking, well-written NTR VN might well find a nice title here.

One thing this groggy disinterested party can recommend: if you 're into this kind'a shit... this' is some goood shit!

My rating ? 0/5
A very bad cliché AI generated NTR with a great paywall for beta cuckold whales to dumb to recognise a scam

Don’t waste your money ($50) with a ”game” like this... in 6 months max it will be abandoned.

Just another grifter trying to make a quick buck with low-effort AI generated images. Most of the game is pay-walled...don't bother with this one. No story, no characters, no effort, no point.

13 ways to scam people with AI CG for next to no effort - official title.

tried it out and it's not very good. Not a whole lot of anything interesting available here. A lot of content seems to be blocked out and unaccessable. Plot seems typical for the genre and images are AI and honestly, pretty below average (unless if fits your style preference.) It all seems like a bad marketing attempt and honestly seems like a scam. I'm just gonna ignore the drama. Beware of scams, and spend your money well, you all worked hard to earn it.

Don't ever say I didn't give it a chance...

This is low effort AI slop.

Terrible writing, terrible pacing, terrible characters.

The "game", if you can even call it that, reads like a very low quality porno flick from the 80's, plus lots of "current day" slangs.

It's also too short even for a first release, and even the AI art is low effort from a model available on civitai.

Aaaaand, the cherry on top... It's paywalled!

This site is being SPAMMED with low effort, paywalled AI slop which just so happen to be mostly NTR. Probably all made by the same person with different accounts.

Abso-fucking-lutely terrible.

Man, the story's just plain dull, got no real hook, and the way it's written feels kinda clumsy. You can't even tell half the time if someone's talking out loud or just thinking it's a real head-scratcher. Visually, it ain't much to look at; honestly looks kinda cheap and unfinished, like they didn't smooth out the rough edges. The character art looks wonky in places, too, pretty amateur stuff. Plus, that background tune just repeats and repeats, gets super annoying, and if you try to mute it, poof, all the sound goes away! Seriously feels like they put out a half-baked game; definitely not worth shelling out cash for it right now.

Let's get to the bad first for "13 Basic Blunders to Cuckening."

Shit incoherent writing with no cohesiveness.

Shit AI generated art.

Shit paywall scam.

Now that the bad aspects are covered, let's move on to the good:

Nothing.

I must express my deep disappointment with this game. The development appears rushed and incomplete, giving the impression that players are essentially paying to be beta testers. The implementation of AI art is particularly troubling. The obvious morphing issues and consistently hidden hands reveal a lack of technical proficiency. It comes across as amateurish work that wasn't ready for public release. One of the most frustrating aspects is the audio design. The background music loops incessantly with a techno beat that feels completely disconnected from the game's atmosphere. Even worse, muting the music eliminates all sound effects, destroying any chance of immersion. The dialogue suffers from numerous syntax errors, and the internal monologue formatting is confusing. Unlike properly developed visual novels, it's often unclear when characters are thinking versus speaking. The paywall structure feels especially exploitative given the unfinished state of the game. It's essentially asking players to fund development while receiving an incomplete product. The narrative itself lacks depth and originality. Characters feel one-dimensional and uninteresting, while the storyline follows predictable patterns without any compelling hooks. For a game in this genre, the writing quality is particularly disappointing - awkward phrasing and cringe-worthy dialogue make it difficult to connect with the story or characters. Overall, this feels like an early draft rather than a finished product. I cannot recommend spending money on something that needs significant improvement in nearly every aspect of its design and execution.

The art looks good, but the writing needs help. The story needs a lot of development. Beware because the content is pay walled. All it is, is a money grab by the creator making us pay to alpha test for him. That makes it a hard nope for me.

I played the free online version.
Usually, I would like to support this kind of game, but the entire game feels very half-baked and has many issues.

I personally support AI art when it's done right. Regarding its use here, AI seems to be done so haphazardly that it has glaringly obvious AI morphs and obviously hidden hands, which is a huge downside to AI. That, to me, says, " Look, I'm not good enough yet."
The background music is annoying because it's on a short loop and is kind of techno. It doesn't fit the game. If you mute the music, all other sounds are muted, which is not good for immersion.

The dialogue has mistakes in syntax, IMO. Also, when the character thinks to themselves, you can't tell immediately like you can in a renpy game.
Playability is hampered because of these many issues.
I don't recommend this game at this time.

No, just no.

I don't mind ntr games, some are really good, but my god this one is bad. The writing is cringe inducing, the story basic af, the characters boring and then there's the paywall. I legitimately think this was written by a teenager.

The ai art is fine, nothing special or groundbreaking. In fact anyone with some basic knowledge could get the same results.

I don't wanna sound harsh but this just isn't it. If you want some advice, improve your writing and storytelling and then revamp the whole thing.