VN - Ren'Py - Completed - 23 Sisters [v1.0 Final] [Abere Lucifer]

A complete waste of 5 minutes. The renders are much uglier than they appear in the previews, the one sex scene is dull, and the writing is terrible. Don't waste your time downloading this disappointment.

It's a great start for such an early version. Really looking forward. The story is unbelievable but kinda funny.
Almost nothing set yet though, but the direction of the game is clear.
I'll expand/rewrite the review further after it's later release.
Edit: The story's gone trash and it's really disappointing. Sex scenes are ok, the girls are great and there are many fetishes. But the story puts me off big time and doesn't make any sense.

Well one of the positives of this game is that it hasn't got the same generic looking models which you have mostly seen in so many other games, these models although not ultra attractive have more of a down to earth look to them, some might say they are downright ugly, but who cares they go extremely well with the original entertaining and hilariously script.

If you are looking for a serious game with a lot of meaning behind the story, well I'm afraid you are looking in the wrong place, this is a game for those who are looking for a good amount of laughs, ridiculous the story maybe, it is still certainly worth a play, and I hope the script carries on in the same manner.

I have high hopes for this one and hope the developer doesn't disappoint me as this is one story I would like to see to the end.

Not the worst renders i've ever saw, but they're made from someone that was too lazy to get some references before doing it.
Story is not catching.
13 years old people might find the humor in this game fun, i don't.

Game version: [v0.1]

That sick feeling when you realize you have a sudden, grudging respect for games you didn't like because you just played something that is so fucking shit and embarrassing that you appreciate all the work and effort someone else put into a game you don't even think is good, because it's still 50x better than the hot garbage that just killed half your brain cells.

Like, sometimes you need to take a step back and go "Wow, technically competent renders and coherent English sentences? Woah dude, even music and sound effects?" and even if you think the story is garbage or there aren't enough choices, at least someone put actual effort into that thing and tried to make something of quality.

Then there's the 0.1 from Hell, which has renders that would have been considered shit tier 10 years ago, no sound at all, and the typos start in the very first line and never stop. The story is incoherent, derivative wish-fulfillment garbage, the characters are cardboard cutouts and the writing, in general, is just embarrassing, like the entire project.

I will never understand people who put hours and days into making renders and then treat the accompanying text and story as an afterthought and can't even be bothered to run spellcheck on it. Like, aren't you embarrassed to put this out into the world? You should be.

The plot of the game so far is cool, I just think that an improvement in writing and how everything is triggered would be welcome, as well as a longer duration for each sister, because if each one has the same time as the prologue this game will become unfortunately short, of course nothing like the 7 days of WVM, but I think that from now on it would be a good choice to improve the time each girl has, it would also be cool not only to focus on the sisters but people around them, and how I think about this game as a VN containing several fetishes, it would be nice to have shemales who see naturally or are ex-suitors of the sisters who have been transformed by the MC or something, but that is not an order.

I really enjoyed this. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Tiffany is like the trailer trash girl we have all checked out at some point and never admitted to anyone. Lol dev has a great sense of humor, and for once this is a pretty original concept for this genre.

Comedy Gold folks _ this is one you want to download, do it now. But be warned; Do not play this at work! Unless that is, you have a sound proofed office because you will bust out laughing guaranteed. If you're in a cubicle those other worker bees around you are gonna to be asking questions and looking over the wall wondering wtf?

5 Stars
Joe Bob sez 'Check It Out!

has some of the funniest dialogues I've read and played. hope the comedy keeps going. Likeable characters as well, it's a game that knows that it's a crazy concept so it doesn't take itself seriously and has fun with its concept.
game is still a work in progress but it has potential, some dialogue cleanup as you're referred to as MC instead of your name in some cases. some have problems with how the characters look, personally I don't mind it, but I guess the characters' faces is something that could improve over time.

Review on v0.01b

Story: the most stupid one I've seen on this page.Some say it's unique and funny, I think it's just stupid 2/5

Renders: seen better, but it's okay, still the strongest part of the game 4/5

Animations: there are no actual animations just 2-3 pics "following each other", shouldn't even put the tag in the description 1/5

Characters: oh my god, the faces are hideous and dumb as hell, like everyone is retarded or something 1/5

If the game improve (a lot) it's gonna be okay for ppl who likes weird stuff.

sorry but the game is ugly, very bad story. The pictures and faces are very poorly animated. Nor is it nice to follow. Since the pictures are not flowing but rather a slide show comes right away. when compared to games of the same genre, this game is far below and should not be paid for.

This has got to be funniest game on this site, I'd recommend it to anyone, regardless of the fetishes they like or do not like. Looking forward to see where this game is going to go. Good modelling of girls and fantastic script with good English (except where intentionally bad).

Great for some laughs, but not much more. Renders are okay, but nothing terribly impressive.

The story is as stupid as it gets, and the first sister you fuck is a brain-dead bimbo (In other words, a grade-A retard). And... that's it. Not much else here.

Review of version 0.01 as of 14/03/21:

I wouldn't normally review a game this early in its development, but this one definitely hooked me with its simple, funny, engaging premise.

Porn games like this with decent writing and reasonably funny jokes aren't all that common, so it gets big points from me for that alone. I've also been wanting a decent harem road-trip game for a long time and yet this one has come up with a barebones hook that just works, at least for me.

Hopefully the dev will avoid the temptation to reuse the same background assets for each of the locations, though that may make the game quite memory intensive. We will see how that goes.

The graphics for the sex scenes are a little jank, but the faces are clearly trying for an Ahegao look, so I can't fault the dev too much for that. The models are also different enough from the usual WEG fare that I don't mind too much.

Since incest is the name of the game I'd give this one a miss if its not your thing. There's also a clear flirtation with Loli-esque content, which is risky but I like it and If you do too definitely check this one out while you can.

I don't know how or if this will progress, but if the dev does consistently update and build on this, I'll definitely be one to check it out and maybe update my review once there's a lot more to it.

With 22 girls remaining, there's plenty of scope here for creative fun. Best of luck to the developer!

Two stars since the writing and plot are interesting and very tongue in cheek. But the Models are absolutely awful. If the models were good this could receive a much higher rating but I cant get off to gremlins dressed up as lolis.

If the rest of the VN is anything like the intro, then this is going to be one hell of a funny ride.
PROS
Renders 4/5 because they're clean
Models 4/5 because they have personalities(not the best looking so far)
Writing 4/5 because of the humor.
Story 3/5 because it's super weird
CONS
MC looks like a douche( sorry, but he does)
Overall
Hilarious opening act for sure. Meeting the first sister was worth the whole intro. It's not a long one, but that interaction made the whole thing. NPCs have mannerisms and aren't just standing there like it's cut and paste. Good job to the dev for doing that. I recommend this VN. Looking forward to seeing how the future updates go. Hopefully the humor and characters remain the same, if not better than the intro.