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[R>Translator] [R>Writer] Share Unpaid 2D artist Looking for a FEMALE writer/co-writer about the female characters (re-edit)

Dag Robertson

2D Artist
Game Developer
Jun 20, 2017
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Project:
- "Soul & Time" (3-4 months for the first update)

Developer:
- Deltadidirac -

Looking for:
- Female writer or co-writer , to suggest, add, or change all that scenes and dialogues where are involved female characters (no need a person English speaker, because I had already founded a collaborator for this work (grammar corrections and structure and sense of the phrases).

Employment Type:
- For the moment unpaid because I have no money, but I'm available to share a good % of all the future earnings.

Work commitment:
- Part time (the text's part is not so hard to need hours of works)

Preferred method of contact:
- Discord or the first message also here

Job Description:
-After a failed attempt and after spending the last few months understanding and understanding both the mistakes I made and what I really wanted, I'm developing a comic series based in part on the key points of the old project. The intention is to start with a comic series, wait and evaluate the impact with the public, after which eventually transform the project into a kinetic-novel or directly into a real sandbox VN.

Additional comments:
Hi,

The comic series I'm developing now is for an adult public (it's a story with adventure, drama, comedy, incest and introspective themes and eroticism; but not focused on pornography; the main themes will be the "incest" problematic and situations and what about the "time-travel"), I'm developing the story and dialogues in a much more possible realism (as is the images), more than a game , this could be more near to a novel or a movie (even if paths, and different branches are already structured in it) , where the story and a deep study and research about dialogues, situations and character is always do and have a great importance.

I would like to collaborate also with a woman/girl , because I would like that all the scenes and above all the dialogues will have sense and be structured with the correct female point of view when female characters are present in it,; she will above all have a deep collaboration with my other person English speaker that will give the last view for all the correction that texts need it.

Other info:
  • First pubblication in 3-4 months
  • Programming code done and ready at the 75% of the whole project (if we are talking about a VN)
  • Story wrote only as a draft of key points, or main scenes, over all for the first part, (I have not spent too much time to write all the complete story , so to gain time and look with the first updates how will be the public impact.
  • Patreon & Pixiv FANbox already done and published (many socials done, and a Youtube channel)
  • Actual work time requested- around 3-5 pages completely wrote every 2-3 months (this is considered without a real participation or modify on the story as I thought ( I'm open to every suggest)
Thanks for your time, have a nice day
 
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So, here are a few questions I have:
1) Are you looking for someone to simply correct what you have already written in english or are you looking for someone to correct what you have written and then more or less take over the writting from then on?

2) Will it just be english corrections or do you need to have knowledge of coding as well?

3) Is the desire for a female writer just because you believe that they will have a more romantic viewpoint or is it because the main protagonist in your story is female as well and you wish to have a truly proper perspective?
 

Dag Robertson

2D Artist
Game Developer
Jun 20, 2017
218
241
So, here are a few questions I have:
1) Are you looking for someone to simply correct what you have already written in english or are you looking for someone to correct what you have written and then more or less take over the writting from then on?

2) Will it just be english corrections or do you need to have knowledge of coding as well?

3) Is the desire for a female writer just because you believe that they will have a more romantic viewpoint or is it because the main protagonist in your story is female as well and you wish to have a truly proper perspective?
Hi, nice to meet you; thanks for your question.

1) I already have the story in mind, some are clear things, others are still in development, but most are written as notes or direct dialogues. To answer your question, yes, I need a correction of what I write (mainly) also because writing the scene helps me to understand which images I have to draw, but not being a writer I am in favor of modifications, changes and suggestions of all kinds.

2) Only language fixes, no code

3) More than anything else to have a female point of view, Even if the MC is a guy, I want to accentuate the realism of the dialogues (the is an important side of the story), and finally because the story, being focused more on the erotic and introspective aspects rather than on pornography, I believe that a female hand is better suited .

I have read several famous and amateur writings and I must say that those written by women always had a very different (and in my opinion more beautiful) degree of stimulation, involvement and seduction than those written by men. However, this does not imply that a man is unable to do the same, perhaps it is just rarer.

I hope to be proved helpful and see you soon again.

Have a nice day
 
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Apr 9, 2019
53
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Hi, nice to meet you; thanks for your question.

1) I already have the story in mind, some are clear things, others are still in development, but most are written as notes or direct dialogues. To answer your question, yes, I need a correction of what I write (mainly) also because writing the scene helps me to understand which images I have to draw, but not being a writer I am in favor of modifications, changes and suggestions of all kinds.

2) Only language fixes, no code

3) More than anything else to have a female point of view, Even if the MC is a guy, I want to accentuate the realism of the dialogues (the is an important side of the story), and finally because the story, being focused more on the erotic and introspective aspects rather than on pornography, I believe that a female hand is better suited .

I have read several famous and amateur writings and I must say that those written by women always had a very different (and in my opinion more beautiful) degree of stimulation, involvement and seduction than those written by men. However, this does not imply that a man is unable to do the same, perhaps it is just rarer.

I hope to be proved helpful and see you soon again.

Have a nice day
Thank you for clearing that up. I would be happy to help you with any editing and brainstorming. I am by no means a professional writer, but I would consider myself to be a fair hand when it comes to english. I, of course, have my own quirks when it comes to writting, as all writers do, so feel free to discard anything you don't like, assuming you'll accept my help.

By the way, if perchance you profit from this project while I'm helping you, please keep everything for yourself. I'm just wanting to try my hand at this for fun, not profit.
 
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Dag Robertson

2D Artist
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Jun 20, 2017
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Thank you for clearing that up. I would be happy to help you with any editing and brainstorming. I am by no means a professional writer, but I would consider myself to be a fair hand when it comes to english. I, of course, have my own quirks when it comes to writting, as all writers do, so feel free to discard anything you don't like, assuming you'll accept my help.

By the way, if perchance you profit from this project while I'm helping you, please keep everything for yourself. I'm just wanting to try my hand at this for fun, not profit.
Thanks for your answer; please if you have an account on Discord, contact me here, we can talk more deeply.


Have a nice day
 

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This reminds me of this clip from as good as it gets.