VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - 53x – Homecoming [v0.2.8.1] [Agent 53X]

The game has poor graphics. The storyline is not something original. It wouldnt mind if the plot will be somehow interesting (it is not). The female characters doesnt look really appealing. Deserved to be abandoned.

v. 0.2.7.1

This was an instant drop for me after playing for 3 minutes.


The female characters seemed well designed and the story was promising but not enough for me to suffer through playing as a wimp.

I gotta say, this started in the worst possible way. The typical blackmail that's not really blackmail, you know the one where the MC could easily refuse to be blackmailed because what they have on him is pure bullshit? That's right. Get this, the stepsister enters the shower and records a video of him masturbating. That's enough for you to willingly become a servant? The MC could've easily told her to fuck off, but I guess the MC is dumb as shit.

I pretty much wanted to drop it right there, lol. It gets weird as shit, though. The stepmother tells MC that he should go see the stepsister in the bedroom and he sees her ass in a dark room and he gets out of there in an instant. After that, he tells the stepmother that he saw the stepsister like that and says "I understand if you want me to leave. My stuff is already packed," like what? lmao. That came out of nowhere and it's weird as shit. After that he hugs the stepmother and he gets a boner which slips out of his boxers, lol. And it's not the only time it happens.

After that, you either do EVERYONE'S chores or you don't do them at all. Including the ones from the bitch who is blackmailing the MC. He also agrees to help just about anyone. If you want to play as a naïve MC who gets taken advantage of by everyone, then by all means, play this game. And the dev wants us to believe that he is an elite at melee weapons, hand-to-hand combat, intelligence, tactical planning and SEDUCTION lmao. That last one I could not believe.

The MC is also submissive as fuck. This woman Wendy tells him out of nowhere to take off his clothes and then starts commanding him and he does it without question because... You don't get a choice if you want to do it or not also. It's just a bunch of nonsense. Nothing makes sense.

Also, when the MC finds an actual good reason to counter-blackmail the stepsister, he doesn't use it and keeps playing the servant, lol. Anyway, don't play this. You will be very frustrated.

The storyline of this VN is great. The begining is kinda slow and vanilla for this genre but when the real story starts to pick up it's hard to stop playing. My only complaint is that the animations during the sex scenes could be improved. The ability to cycle differnt angles during sex and making the animations more fluid would definately be an improvement. Still... I can't wait for the nxt update! Keep up the good work.

Renders are good
Story is not so good
your dad dies and suddenly you went from a normal guy coming home to a kind of secret spy with secrets
Mc has sex with almost everyone
No idea if he had sex with his redheaded sister because i saw no penetration But with all the spying in the shower and saying horny thing i would expected more family scenes
It's kinda meh if you expecting incest with the family

Oh man the writing, dear god the writing! It's just bad, it bounces from super in-depth explaining of corporate stuff, to the MC randomly attempting to be an alpha chad, to the MC being a sweet guy all within a 5 min span. The tone of the game is just everywhere and it feels really jarring trying to keep up with it. The models are decent and probably the biggest selling point of the game. The sex scenes however, have zero buildup and are over within 3 clicks. They feel super underwhelming for the amount of content you have to slog through.

This should be renamed Business Minutiae. It has exhaustive explanations of corporate espionage and employment contracts, with the occasional very brief sexual encounter. Very very tedious, with no payoff.

I see what the other reviewers are talking about. The story is not particularly deep but it has so many side stories that it makes it interesting. The biggest problem is that most of the sex scenes have little dialogue and are just two clicks. I am a big fan of teasing and dirty talk, the game is devoid of it. Fapping wise the game fails even with beautiful models, but story wise I am intrigued enough to keep coming back.

This game is so strange. First off, if you're here for decent fapbait just don't bother. There's no buildup to any of the scenes, no teasing or romance, it's simply: we are talking...ok now we are fucking...next scene. Also, every single conversation is packed with grammar mistakes and so many misspellings I could feel the dev's English teacher losing 53 IQ points per second. Beyond that, the dev's writing style itself lacks any nuance--seriously, there is none. I reads like this: "I am going to meet you in one hour for this reason. Okay now we are meeting for this reason. Do you have any updates about this reason? Thank you for telling me about these updates to the reason, I will now proceed to the next bimbo for different reasons that may or may not be related to this reason we are now discussing. Okay wait now we are fucking. Goodbye and thank you for the fucking keep in touch about that reason."

...and yet I couldn't stop playing. I read through 99% of the game in one consecutive sitting--a little over five hours--and was terribly sad when I fired it up again today and I only had a couple minutes left on the current build. WHY DO I LIKE THIS THEN? The writing isn't any good, the character models are not attractive, the plot is kind of generic, and really not much happens.

This is one of those rare games (Motherless being the only other I can think of) where I don't like pretty much any one thing about it and yet I just want MORE. NOW. It's inexplicable and I can't offer a rational explanation. But I can recommend you play the shit out of it, immediately, because above everything else is the fact that this is entertaining. And games are entertainment products first and foremost.

Truly enjoyed this series.

Yes the scenes are slightly short and a couple of pictures at first but it gets better over the next few versions as the developer improves his skills.

What makesthis an exccellent VN is the story and dialougue as well as the amout of detail put into how the story flows.

Plus ! Harem and no NTR.

So dive in if ur looking for an intriguing storyline with some nice naughty scenes. definitely something to look forward to in the future.

v0.2.5.1
I like this game a lot , the story is interesting and better than most games on this site but the renders are not great like other games and the choices and relationships are what letting this one down ,it would be great if there both have worked out . And main character in this game is untelligent and the female charecters all work to unravel mystery in this one . I hope to see this game gets completed and story gets finished .

I like the look of the game. Love the story...to a point. I do not like how the dev chooses to make decisions on what happens with the characters. Example: a character wanting to see another nude with you as the MC having no say. To me this feels like NTR and while there is no NTR tag for this title, I feel there should be. I feel as the MC I need to have far more say than what has been given with NPC interactions. Therefore, if you do not like NTR, be wary of this title.

This VN plays along like a television drama series that is intended to go as long as it can to earn money for the cast/crew/writers before it gets cancelled. It's been 2 1/2 years and there's hardly any progress with either the main storyline or with any of the main characters. Every update just seems like another tangent to the story with the intention of dragging players along. The story just tries to do too many things: action, drama, thriller, romance, crime, mystery, sci-fi, erotica--but it doesn't do any of them well. The MC is supposed to be some genius super-spy, but he seems more like a robot than a person. Combine that with the average-quality renders and animations and you get a solid 2.5 out of 5 stars.

I really like the story, the spying and mystery around what happened to the MC make it interesting and engaging. The game has girl models that are unique I believe so it's also refreshing to have new faces.

Pros

• A nice story moving fast phase incest & polyamorous. Game/story moves pretty well/fast without any unnecessary lagging – pretty good
• Excellent quality of image renders.
• Excellent quality of animations; especially mom & aunt riding the MC
• Playability, performance and grammar are all just OK no issue
• Bug free
• Sound effects are pretty good

Cons

• Unrealistic picturization of MC getting erection while hugging his step mom as the cock comes out of boxer OMG
• Lack of genuine or more of fictitious for sexuality
• Lack of seductiveness in sexual approach
• Some more images to express the feelings of shy/embracement during the initial approach would have been more effective. But off late I realized the lack of seductiveness especially no forbiddances about sex including incest; all are portrayed as normal (socially well acceptable / not restricted)
• I wonder the culture of leaving bathroom door open while taking bath nude; this is most common in the westerner’s story/game. Is that really true or just too fictious?

Keenly looking for next update

This is just atrocious. The character renders are the only good thing about this game. There is no definition on who the MC is, he changes so many times it is hard to keep up. And what kind of brother teaches his sister the art of sex just so she can slut herself out. The sex scenes are far too short and not well done. The big minus goes to no music though. I have never found a VN good that didn't have music.

I'm a writer of stories ( mainly horror and erotica) and I put a lot of emphasis on the writing. A good story line should be well thought out and well written, this isn't it.

The writer can't seem to decide exactly who or what he wants the MC to be. He quickly has more different jobs than I've had in my life thus far. It's hard to have a good story when you don't even know who your protagonist is.

Some of the scenarios are simply ridiculous, suspending disbelief doesn't help much. At one point sis wants him to teach her how to have sex ( no internet to watch I guess) so she can be a better agent and he actually agrees!? Way to look out after sis, bro.

Nothing like a brother teaching his sister how to slut herself out, brother of the year there. That is one of the worst plot points I've seen and just one example of the horrid writing in this.

It has quite the story plot = will written.
The visuals for the female characters are quite beautiful. And that's all the good i have to say here.

I don't like the well written story. It has made me hate this. The MC had been refusing sex. That's actually fine with me when a statement's being made and he's showing that he has damn good control.

But here we have an mc who is too damn busy for most of the sex ( sex is why I'm here for porn games. And like all here have indicated at some point or another, the flavor is better when the story is good and enjoyable).

The mc being to busy turns him into the side characters whose girl we steal in some games, or into the mc of another genre that i apparently cannot mention as some snowflake seems to send a report in as soon as I mention any genre. Then the mods say I'm violating the rules here for just mentioning the genre regardless of positive or negative feedback relating to said genre.

Also, the sex scenes are very disappointing. It was a letdown. They're getting better. But overall in still quite disappointed with the content.

Apparently, i cannot give a specific someone respect for sticking to the work they want to produce either (you might not believe that this actually is not sarcasm). I cannot because that has at times been the detail used by the mods that told me I violated thread/f95 rules

I like it a lot one of my favorites

Writing: 10/10
Imagery: 7/10
Gameplay: 10/10
Kinks: 6/10
Overall: 8/10


its a bit vanilla at leas so far, and the sex/jealous scenes could be longer and more detailed.


lots of potential!

Very interesting game, the story is well filled with mystery and family matters.
The renders are pretty good, interesting variety of characters.
The MC is, thank God, a badass and not a simple horny teenager.

On the bad side, the animations are very poorly made and the updates are too few during a year, and since there are no good animations that require time to be made, the time between the updates is way to long.