This game highlights the age-old dilemma in adult games. Do you bore players in the beginning by taking the time to give characters substance, with adequate back stories to give you a good idea as to what part they will play in the story? Will players give up on your game because there isn't enough sex to keep them interested? Or do you just jump in and start f*cking away?
This rather formulaic game features the latter approach. Well, calling it a "game" is a stretch, as there is only one choice given so far. More on that later.
So, you meet a girl in a bar. You immediately have sex. All weekend. Then you meet her boss, and eventually (a couple of screens later) get a job offer. And you immediately have sex.
Then you advise your best friend whether or not to change jobs. This simple choice puts you on two completely different paths without having any clue as to what either choice would mean. One path, you're in a threesome and that's it. The other, you have more sex with the first girl, but you come home to find your best friend gender bent into a woman.
Huh?
There needed to be about 10x more story for a first release, and it needed to feel a lot less rushed. The mix of AI cg images (which isn't tagged) and stolen porn isn't well matched. And the fact that it's a fairly generic Sugarcube/Twine game means the dev didn't have to spend a lot of time on coding, just sourcing the mismatched images.
Good luck, dev, but you need to spend a bit more time actually developing before releasing stuff like this.