A couple of the test renders for the visual novel I'm working on. Would love some constructive feedback.

[Ifmonger]

I have a good story written (mostly). Here is the final test render of the custom morph I made for the main character and two tests of the opening scene of the story.

 

[Niv-Mizzet the Firemind]

Renders look good, just one observation/question:
Is all the light in the bedroom scene natural? As far as I can tell it comes from two opposite directions at once.

 

[BigIrishLug]

Lighting look good, Otherwise I would suggest
Bed=>Object=>Object=>Smoothing Modifier, Mesh Smoothing on the bed, adjusting the hair, Might want to separate the bed from the pillows to make the pillows independent objects, the skin looks like plastic... I would suggest improving on the models

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[Ifmonger]

Renders look good, just one observation/question:
Is all the light in the bedroom scene natural? As far as I can tell it comes from two opposite directions at once.

yes, just two light sources, one from behind the camera and one from behind the window (coming through the blinds).

 

[Ifmonger]

Lighting look good, Otherwise I would suggest
Bed=>Object=>Object=>Smoothing Modifier, Mesh Smoothing on the bed, adjusting the hair, Might want to separate the bed from the pillows to make the pillows independent objects, the skin looks like plastic... I would suggest improving on the models

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has a lot of great content that you could learn some quick tricks from.

Thanks. and LOL I'm already a fan and a supporter of WP Guru I will try the smoothing modifier, though.