VN - Ren'Py - A Day at the Spa [v0.85] [ReallySlowGuy]

Almost Great.

Pros:

• At this point, it's a pretty long game.
• Animations on the last day.
• Hiilarioous Sound Effects, never remove these.

Cons:

• Halfway through, the story just stops making sense. There is no slow transition from Innocent Teacher, to full blown porn. Once this happens the plot keeps trying to reverse time.
• Almost all animations are 2-image-slideshow.
• There are a disturbing number of scenes with MC's Ass totally blocking the girls we're all here to see. This is way too much information about the author. Let the girls bounce, sir.

Summary:
The game has potential until you reach the point when the girls become sluts for no descernable reason.

I am a fan of the art and the girls.
Not many games have girls like this who are well-endowed.
I wish the author updated it more, as I appreciate the simplicity and the theme. What brought me back was the March 24th update.

The animations could be longer, but overall I like that there are options that just don't go anywhere. Made me have to replay this several times before finding the right route.

I see that this game has a lot of potential.

Story 2/5
There arent really much of a story, MC a teacher for an all girl class takes a trip to the spa and gets locked inside, Its a very simple game where you just have to pick the 4 right choices to get to the path where the fuckfest begins.

MC will fuck every single girl at one point doing hes weekend locked inside the spa, all the girls wants it and some even gets into a fight to be fucked by MC, a few times your given a choice of who to fuck or make a 3-some instend since theres plenty of girls in the que.

The writting has alot of flaws but for a game where story isent really importen it dosent matter to much, its a little annoying but personaly i dident really care much about that.

I think most if not all of the girls are virgins and in most scenes they made it feel right so it does have the virgin vibe that alot of games miss, girls has blood and a little pain so for the virgin/deflower fans this is a pretty decent game, even though there are a few scenes where they forgot about the blood part, like in the 3-some but still its a nice supprise to see a game doing it right in most cases.

Girls 2/5
Cant say i found the faces hot in any way, they arent unique since its pretty much the same face re-used with diffrent hair/eye color with or without freckles and so on, the diversity of builds is pretty perfect there are anything from small to big, nothing huge which is a plus in my book.

Animations 0/5
For what it is its not a bad game really but its also a long way from perfect, no animated scenes dosent help the game, but atleast it has 1-3 frame picture to picture which does add a little compared to just a single frozen image.

Music 3/5
Its about averge background stuff but somehow it suits the game just fine.

Content 2/5
I must say i expected a bit more being 2gb in size and having no animations to take up space, so not really sure why its so big.

I cant really rate this more then average, girls arent that hot and dosent feel unique, no animations, no real story and just a fuckfest game.
Normaly i wouldent even rate games like this higher then 2 but it does have something about it and it did do alot of things right where many fails.

I think I get what the dev is going for but I also think the game fails at everything it sets out to be.

This game seems, to me, an attempt at a light and fun harem game where you just fuck a bunch of willing girls through a series of unlikely events.

The problem with that is that it's not very funny, the sex is nothing special, the language is overly formal, there's a ton of grammatical errors, and the narration and characters as a whole are just overly verbose.

I appreciate the effort and the more... I struggle to call them realistic... character designs, but it's simply not enough to make this game worth playing.

Excellent game Dev, I really appreciate your renders. I like that the girls have a normal ( Not everyone has to be gorgeous) appearance. It makes it feel more realistic. Anyway keep up the good work, and I'm glad you stuck with it!

Seriously, which pervert among us could not like this? A bevy of horny schoolgirls, all *obviously* of legal age. A specious excuse to spend the entire game (so far) naked. A few choices just to keep you from clicking through, and which do lead to (marginally) different scenarios. Cue a processional of well rendered 'first times'. Amusingly formal dialogue periodically let down by pro(noun) lapses between his and hers. Go elsewhere for depth and profundity. This is a slice of unashamed fun.

Unique art style and unabashedly goes straight to what it wants to do after a few critical choices.

Looks very promising and fans of ahegao will enjoy due to the characters' face designs. Love the always wet and sweaty look due to the setting.

Hopefully the updates keep rolling and not as slow as the creator's namesake.

The start of the game with the choices and bad endings was funny but a little annoying. The content after this section is way better. I'd rather just see a static intro up until the class gets trapped in.
The girls are cock hungry sluts, the writing is ridiculous, the renders are ridiculous. A porn game that doesnt take itself seriously at all which is great. I enjoyed it a lot.

The writing feels like it's been machine translated, it's incredibly stiff and awkward. And beyond that it's probably gonna be one of those VNs you hold ctrl during a lot because it'll write three paragraphs to explain something that should take no more than a single sentence.
The visuals are a mess, the girls' faces look pretty weird (I don't have problems with asians in general before you go thinking that's the reason I say that), and all the body fluids look like they're weird coagulated gels, not actual fluids.
Normally this kinda game would be right up my alley and I opened it in hopeful anticipation but sadly I found nothing to enjoy here.

This game is so silly. Silly in a good way, the writing and visuals are quirky and fun. It's lighthearted, fun and doesn't take itself serious.

Look at the screen shots and the story description and then consider the kind of slap stick humor of old comics (manga) like Ranma 1/2 and Great Teacher Onizuka.

The only way this story with these unique visuals could be told better is in black and white with old school tones in 2D of course, it just feels so nostalgic.

This is exactly what this kinda game should be, an easy way to pass the time/relieve stress.

tl;dr: A great start from a new developer.

Story:
The story is consistent and clear, although probably quite implausible. But I am more than happy to accept some unlikely events if I get to see a class full of nubile young *cough* college girls get naked and flaunting their extra perky nipples.

Writing:
The grammar and spelling are mostly quite good, although strangely formal. But given the situation and the characters, perhaps the formal style is a good thing - no winking or acknowledgment of the lewd nature of the situation. Later there are definitely some parts that could use some proofreadng - mixing "his" and "her" pronouns.

Graphics:
The graphics are basic Illusion style, but the dev has clearly taken the time to be careful with environment, shot angles, lighting and character design. The style is consistent and at least a little different from the repeated standard perfect girls we see again and again.

Gameplay:
A basic narrated story but with a handful of very meaningful choices. various combinations of choices will decide the route and ending you find. The game is clearly working within a small scope and is perfect for the size of the ambition.