Ren'Py - Abandoned - A Divine Life [v0.25] [Arcane Penguin]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    AMRAVN

    Having lustful intrusive thoughts is something Alex is regularly plagued with. Divine intervention only intensifies that feeling. It makes ADL a hot, steamy mess that leaves a chaotic impression.

    STORY
    A Divine Life is a stereotypical male fantasy about a teen lusting over women. Main character Alex is engulfed with a mobile gacha game about angels and demons, until one day his favorite game characters come to life. Struggling with his sexual desire and identity, he eventually forces himself to become intimate with women around him in order to help out his new divine friend.

    The game is quite text-heavy, so having a good story is key to a pleasing experience. ADL barely passes this check, even though the text quality is generally okay. The story suffers from teenage ‘and then the magic happens’ storytelling and doesn’t quite understand or respect what makes the relationships between Alex and his peers actually interesting. Sure, there are steamy scenes that are explained in detail over two or three renders. But they feel shoehorned in rather than naturally progressed.

    Throughout the game, the developer uses humor and sarcasm to create a better experience and for the most part, it works. Although the game doesn’t always explain why people behave the way they do, they make efforts to explain things through thought monologues. Because of pacing issues, the buildups often feel forced and lacking the proper intensity.

    ADL does a good job introducing a whole host of characters. Some, like Sophia and Cassandra, are pretty well thought out. Others, like Emily and Taylor, are shallow and need more weight in order to be believable and truly enjoyable. The game features over 10 supporting characters already, so you can guess where in harem land this is going.

    The magic story angle with a mana ring that collects and arouses sexual energy is alright. It’s been done before, but it works in this setting. That relates back to the quality of the entire game. It works, but you can’t shake the feeling it’s not up to par on where it wants or needs to be.


    PRESENTATION
    Graphics are personal taste with A Divine Life. The dev opted for a stylized, cartoon-based look with drawn sprites. As a fan of 3D, I tend to avoid 2D games because of low graphic quality. This game does have a distinct style and looks good. Dare I say, I even enjoyed the graphics. Even if they felt a bit childish at certain times.

    ADL does have a low amount of images compared to other games. A scene could play out in 5 - 10 images, even intimate ones. That’s a style choice and for the most part, stimulation comes through the text rather than the visuals. If it takes the developer a long time to draw these renders, he could consider adding comic panels with zoomed-in update panels. That way one render can be used more than once, as the overlaying panels update.

    Characters actually look recognizable and good. Damian and Lucretia have their distinct otherworldly styles. Cassandra really sells the bitch look. Abigail and Taylor are initially forbidden terrain, redheads living in the same house together. There are a bunch of women to enjoy and have conversations with.

    If you’re alright with the visual style of this game, the presentation is actually alright. The UI of the sandbox elements works well enough and there's even a phone that I’ll tell you about next. A Divine Life looks good.

    GAMEPLAY
    As Alex explores his options, the game turns into a sandbox style puzzle. You start out in the house, but soon enough are given access to the outside world. From that moment on, you figure out where you need to be to find who you need.

    There are a couple moments per day and for each day, you have to figure out where your subjects are. Work, school or otherwise. If you’re stuck looking for objects around the house, consider asking your dog Caesar for help. He might show you where to look.

    In addition to the sandbox, Alex has a phone handy that lets him track and set a couple of things. First, the scene replays. Second, a mission tracker that tells you which character still has a mission for you.
    It might be bare ones, but definitely helped me get to every mission that’s available.

    OVERALL
    For me, A Divine Life is an unremarkable bag of things. The art is good enough to be usable, but hasn’t grasped me. The story might even be more in need of an upgrade, even though the developer did their best linking all the characters together. I would consider revisiting this universe, but only if the developer finds a way to put more story quality and cohesion within. With that said, it was a positive experience and I'm curious to it's future.

    Rating: 6.5/10
    (Giving 4 stars for good measure. Godspeed, dev)
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    deadmasterx

    Version: 0.25

    To make this review more organized, I will divide it into three categories. First category will be storyline, to which I'll give my insights regarding the story of the game. Second, the art and design. Third, the sex-scenes.

    STORYLINE - 9/10

    I don't want to be unfair, as we're still talking about a game in its first releases, that has a lot to be improved and a lot more to happen. I think it's not a great idea to judge the story when it's still not over, but I'd like to say a few things about this one.

    First, the storyline is, indeed, interesting. You have a main character that, as usual, is a loser that get no girls. One day he is playing in his phone and one of the heroines of the game he's playing spawns. He's now tasked with the mission of returning her back to her universe, as she has no mana to cast a spell to return. The problem is, you also don't have any mana. The solution? She gives you a ring to help you detecting any sexual energy. Your way to produce, or store mana, is, indeed, by having sex.

    Now that we have a sinopse of the storyline, I would like to say that this line of story is the basic that works, and when well done (as it's going), it's just great. The game develops in funny way, the main character is funny, the heroines has their own stereotypes but they're overall alive, not the usual "I'm only here for you to skip my dialogues until you can fuck me" kind of characters.

    You have the usual landlady/stepmom around, along with the roommate/sister that hates you. You got the hot childhood friend neighbor and her hot landlady/mom. You got the teacher that hates your guts, and possibly many more in the future. The game is still early and we didn't get to see a lot of all these characters, but overall they seem all interesting and funny in their own ways.

    The writing is good and honestly there's nothing really to point out as a problem or something to be fixed regarding the storyline. As I pointed out many times, it's still to early to say if the story is great, but I can already say that I had a great time playing it and I'm surely looking forward the next updates.

    ART AND DESIGN - 10/10

    I'm particularly very (very) picky when it comes to art. I am the kind of person that can tolerate a shitty story if the art of the characters are good enough. With that being said, I'd like to say that the art of this game is indeed REALLY GOOD.

    The characters look original, I'm not sure if they're drawn by hand or not but the art is original enough to pass by (not that it would be a problem if it was AI). The characters does look good and the artist made sure to "save some energy" and leave the TRULY GOOD art for the scenes that truly matters, while you have a simpler version on the scenes or overall scenario that doesn't really matter much. That is a point that I really like, because it makes the game more... human? It's just interesting.

    The only point for me is that I'm not so fond of massive boobs everywhere. It's cool to have a few characters with it, but what about also giving space to normal sized boobs, or even flat chests? Making a variety when it comes to the characters bodies also makes the game really interesting. That could be something to look up in the future.

    Overall, great artwork.

    SEX-SCENES - 8/10

    For the time being I only had a few ones with the neighbors' hot mom/landlady, but I really enjoyed it. At some point you animated them, made them look really good. There's still some room for polishing, but I wouldn't dare to ask for something perfect. The scenes are looking good as they are, and I can only hope that the future scenes look as good or even better than the ones we have now.

    FINAL CONSIDERATIONS

    It's a great game, a recent one that deserves all love, support and attention. I'm looking forward to play the next updates. Keep up with the good work!
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    zeranta

    Another f*cking amazing art work at the girls and H-scene
    - The story is good, not extraordinary but not bad also
    - Sandbox element is simply so far. No farming or searching yet.
    Again, f*cking amazing arts