VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - A Failure to Launch [v0.2.1] [Min Thy Lord]

The renders are alright, but I couldn't get past the fact that the main character has the emotional maturity of a middle school virgin, and that's a bit late in life for that. I don't particularly enjoy games where I feel like slapping the shit out of the character I am supposed to be playing.

Big girls, bulges, romance and even a touch of psychology.
Definitively a game for subs, but for the standards of the genre there's a surprising amount of respect/choice for your consent.
You just wished MC had a touch more spine and "will to live", but I guess it's the main story tagline.

Didn't enjoy this game at all. I thought it was going well until my choices ceased to matter. I rejected Evelyn the entire game until the MC just said fuck it and completely removed all agency from the player based on previous decisions made in the game. My other major gripe with this game is it doesn't have any actual futanari. None of them are hermaphrodites. So yet again another bait and switch. Utterly disappointed with this one. .

Version: v0.2.1

This is one of the best futa/femdom games that i have played art and story wise. It is such a shame that this game was left behind. It has a really strong setup with some great effort put into it, so if you want to still participate and play the introduction that goes nowhere, i still recommend trying this game out. Im not going say much more, considering there isnt much more content either.

SUMMARY: one of the best futa on male games that is currently on hold.

Seriously, I hope the creator reads this, my dude you got talent.

I would love to see this game complete and gave a 5-star for it.

Good art (not usually a big fan of CQ myself, but here we are).

The futas you meet and see their meat so far are gorgeous to look at.

It will have you fantasizing about a futa girlfriend.

The dommy female that is your roommate is also a nice touch for the main character (you) to explore this particular fetish.

The story currently ends after you get a healthy reminder in bed why futas are usually always dominate in these type of games.

If this is your fetish, you must play, even in its current state.

Give support to the creator and encourage him/her/they to continue their work.

Not enough games in this genre at the moment and it would be great to see done someday.

It was pretty good out of some random mood swings on the characters part. Though ill be honest I didnt like that you could reject Evelyn on the first time but not on subsequent times, or the you just jump into Hannahs "Help". Id really prefer some blocks so I could do an Olivia only run, who is the best character, none of the others are really that likable to me.

Now, I'm not a fan of the pear body shape and sagging breasts (the latter is why I can't add Ariel Raphael to my list of top porn actresses, hah), but I really like the character renders here. Just wish there were a bit more variety in body shapes, and that landlady (forgot her name) were athletic, because she just looks like she's got cellulitis from sitting on the couch for too long, even though she's implied to be pretty active physically.

The plot is fine enough. Nothing Pulitzer-worthy, but, in the immortal words of Godd Howard...

It just works.

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There are a few moments of inconsistency with the writing, such as:

1. The landlady getting mood shifts out of nowhere. One minute she's stern as a stick, then she's suddenly friendly, then she starts yelling at the PC like a psycho, and then she's suddenly not only calm, but also flirty. And for the rest of their interactions she's perfectly cool with the PC doing whatever he's doing, even though she explicitly yelled at him not to mess up (which he technically does at least twice after the fact).
2. The player character - despite being scared shitless of dickgirls and telling himself that he's not into that - agreeing, nay, "deciding", nay, resigning himself to having sex with a dickgirl relatively quickly, even though no one was actually forcing him into it.
3. The PC choosing to go on a date (and sleeping with) Evelyn despite having so much build-up with Olivia just recently, and knowing the animosity between the two. I mean, sure, he's technically a free guy with preferences, but it just felt off.
4. The landlady offering to peg the PC in order to prepare him for sex with a dickgirl, but there neither being an option to actually do it, nor the plot going through with it. The PC does ask her for "help", but the whole thing just bounces and he decides to go straight on his date, and get fucked by a real oversized dick without training.

Other things that could use improvement:

1. Choices. Is this a visual novel, or a kinetic novel? So far, choices are too far apart and don't affect anything at all. Basically, the only real difference is whether you get to see a sex scene or not.
2. While, as I've already mentioned it in the comments, incest is not one of my personal fetishes, I still think the sister gives off horny vibes way too much (just look at her facial expressions!), so it must be made into a thing.

So far, these are the only things I can think of. The game definitely has potential. And even if the plot won't go where I think it's going (some crazy futa conspiracy with the PC right in the center), it still looks good enough to be nice, sexy pastime.

Best of luck to the developer!

This is actually the first 3D game I tried. I was always put off by the weird models used in these type of games and was never into any of them. But then I saw this and I was blown away by how good the characters in here looked and I just had to give it a try. And boy oh boy am I glad I did because this game is freakin' amazing!

Pros:
- Really good looking characters (renders?)
- Well written dialogue
- Incredibly hot sex scenes
- Clean and simple UI
- Protagonist is actually believable and doesn't just turn into a brainwashed sex toy like in most futadom stories out there
- Evelyn and Hannah (gaddaaamn)

Cons:
- Choices don't really do a whole lot, which is understandable as the game is still in its early stages.
- No futa Hannah (she's still hot af tho)

Needless to say, the pros vastly outshine the cons for me so it's an easy 5 stars. Game is kind of short for now but I'm looking forward to upcoming updates for existing and new choices alike.

Thank you for this amazing game!

I'm absolutely happy to try this game. It has a pretty well build story, great (and actuallu intriguing) dialogs, which I enjoyed so much. But what differentiate this game of other is the balance between the fantasies and realism, sexuality and feelings of participants of sex scenes, and behavior of MC (he is sub, but doesn't lost humanity like a toy) and possibility of choises.
Also I want to highlight juicy renders, and I'm looking forwarrd to support such a good developer. Great job!

Futa content: 5/5 obviously

Game/story: 4.5/5 with great potential

Story is relatively short but is also very sweet. It packs a decent punch right out of the gate and has a satisfying build up towards a nice release. If you're into futadom, futa+male, even femdom, and aren't into a bunch of useless dialogue keeping you away from the good stuff then you'll greatly enjoy this game.

Renders are really good and the sex scene between Alex and Evelyn was really hot.
Wonder where the story is going with that article the protagonist Alex saw above the desk on Evelyn's house.

My only complain is that the choices are pretty much just flavor and they change (almost) nothing. After all the bulding up with Olivia we get no choice about going over to Evelyn's house, even if the scene was good.

The pros: high quality renders and the amazing sex scenes.

Con: maybe add some actual choices as the game progress.

Anyway, amazing game and i look forward to more.

Excellent models in terms of bodies, expressions, poses and clothing. Relationships and dynamics between characters track and are clearly defined. Worldbuilding so far is satisfactory. Storyline is progressing at a good pace, with good signalling of content to come. The developer clearly knows their audience and the kinds of kinks/fetishes that their game needs to revolve around accordingly; great vision, great execution.

Writing: Awseome, i usually skip a large portion of the story in VN cause it's just filler text or unecessary character information, but i was captivated throughout and was sad when i finished the content.
Art: Fantastic, despite me not being a huge fan of every female having the exact same body type, it's still really hot and done with a lot of care.
smut: Perfecetly paced and teasing in a way that keeps you wanting more without going too far too fast.

This is one of the best VNs i've seen, maybe ever, and i've been on this site for a long time.

Absolutely masterpiece of a game! Truly the best that I have played in over 5 years.

Each update gets better, the latest of which (0.2.1) was fucking amazing.

Cannot wait to see what else you add in the future!

It's a bit of an odd one in that the game makes it appear as if you have choices but in fact you have little to none outside of do you want to see some scenes don't really matter anyway since you'll still get railed in the behind.

It's also one of those the MC seems to have "normal" kinks and were clearly given a bunch of choices to reject futas but then all of a sudden we get told that off-screen the MC has been surfing and viewing a ton of futa porn especially one's which focuses on men being dominated by them so any attempt at not getting railed by a futa is null and void.

So far with the game not giving you any options outside of having the MC getting domed and seemingly turn into a sissy by the futas, it's a futas rule the world setting where they just turned up all of a sudden and are raping/kidnapping people left and right with no repercusions outside of a bad rep and their seemingly slowly turning men into sissy's with everything that entails and hinting at that futas will eventually erase every gender outside of futas or at least women will be turned into something only breed by futas and men will turn into futas personal cumdumps.

All in all if you like futas and them railing everything, especially men then this might be for you so far it's kinda short outside of setting up the world mostly.

Great futa /femdom themed game, I havent come across many in this genre with good graphics.
It was however short in length (as of present) , will wait for further updates.
It was possibly one of the best futadom themed games i have played so far.

Do I wish there were actual choices? sure kind of but mostly to help color the dialogue more, seems like it's just a simple different repsonse form NPCs to my response. That said the dialogue is hot, the models and renders are gorgeous and that first actual sex scene is something I'll remember for a long while.

Renders are incredibly hot if you are into femdom and/or futa.

Futa is non-skippable so if you don't like dick in the MCs ass you will most likely not like this.

If you enjoy the femdom+futa genre you will think it's hot.

The problem is the story is a little "basic". Typical "futas rule the world" and the choices you make don't really matter.

I tested saying "no" to everything and still wound up with evelyn's cock up my ass and the MC loving it.

So it's more of a visual novel than a game. But it's hot if you don't are about "realism" or a deep story.

Hoping they add more female femdom and maybe som bi sissy stuff too and more humiliation.

Choices barely mean anything, rejecting Evelyn at every opportunity shouldn't put you on her path just because it's the only route this update, that breaks the story, as MC's decision doesn't make sense, you should just get an EOC message instead.

This thing is entirely futa-on-male so far and if you're not into that, I doubt there's ever gonna be any meaningful female-on-male content. Just a heads up for anybody browsing the tags.

A Failure to Launch is OK at best. From what I've seen, the futa-on-male fans tend to not really have standards when it comes to this type of content. Most of them just seem happy to see a futa dominate a guy, no matter how bad the content is.

This is going to sound astronomically pretentious, but I'm not one of those people. In fact, I almost hate how futas are depicted in this niche but unfortunately I'm into this shit all the same. I say all this because I'm trying to let anybody who reads this know that most reviews for this VN are extremely biased, with the hopeful exception being me.
Anyway, let's talk about the game:

The writing is... not good. Like at all. It's not the worst thing you're ever gonna read, but it's definitely on the low end of average. The MC acts like a bipolar jackass, the writing as a whole feels really awkward, and everything is incredibly rushed. You have 2 girls confessing their feelings for you a few days after meeting them and it feels even shorter than that because there's no sense of time. Things just feel like they happen just for the sake of it happening, rather than being a nice logical progression of things.

Take for instance Olivia. You're a receptionist at a massage parlor and she walks up to you, immediately trying to flirt with you. She says she's going to the sauna, MC peeps on her, gets caught, and runs away from the building while on the clock like a child. Next day she shows up at your place, tries to push herself onto you very strongly, you reject her, and then she leaves. And then the day after that she's saying she had her eyes on you and that she has feelings for you. Like... what? Lady I don't even know the first fucking thing about you and you certainly don't know me.

Another major flaw of the writing is shit gets forced onto you no matter what. It doesn't matter what any of your choices are, you're going to look at futa porn at work, you're going to act like a submissive bitch to your living partner, and you're going to get fucked by a futa even if you reject her at every possible chance you get. There's absolutely 0 point in making any choices. MC will always act like a complete dipshit and go along with whatever the girls say.

Besides that, all the characters don't act like real people. Hannah, your living partner, instantly gropes you the moment you come inside the house and starts calling you good boy, a random futa you meet is totally nonchalant when her sister and you walk in on her fucking some chick(chick doesn't care either for some reason), your sister WANTS you to work at a happy ending massage place that's notorious for turning guys into buttsluts, etc. Also almost every futa is the stereotypical "fuck everything that moves, always dominant, shameless, and has a giant cock" one you've surely seen if you spent any time with the fetish. The seemingly main girl Olivia seems to actually act somewhat like a real person, but still comes onto you WAY too hard and isn't subtle at all.

Personally I really like the renders but I'm sure not everybody likes the exaggerated body parts. Also I'm pretty sure one of the girls is just a slightly altered Yennefer from The Witcher but don't quote me on that.

So yeah, the game really isn't all that great. It's just that futa-on-male fans are extremely content starved in general so they just eat up almost anything new that gets made.