Pros:
- Models: they seem unique enough to not be the same copy paste models.
- Premise: Story touches the idea of parallel worlds which can usually be fun.
- MC: Is level headed and calm. Doesn't seem like he's afraid nor overly confident yet.
- Writing: I find it a bit lacking that there has been no real world building from the MC questioning why the girls are the way they are around men. There seems to be a stop every time we get there.
- Ex-fiance: It feels like this detracts rather than adds to the story if its gonna be another "I kept you away for your safety" side story.