Lets start with the good, I like the general premise. It has legs. For the most part the girls (at least the ones we spend time with) are written with some thought. The power sets of the girls are cool. A lot of back and forth with what's happening is digestible and makes sense......for the most part. Tracey and Aurora make sense in how they think. I thoroughly enjoy the story and the details when they are consistent with the world which is set up. The growth and training of your powers is interesting.
Now the mid, the MC. So this random secret agent chad just happens to find these girls who dimension drop from another world. Forgivable as it gets the story going. He also treats a bunch of women he does know as if they aren't really a threat or at least that he should definitely be the one to handle the situation while playing games with an agency he needs help from. Now we have the villain Nathaniel, an over powered child who is painted as "someone who would have fun torturing small animals for fun" who gives the MC powers and this is justified because boredom and the power hurts the girls when he takes their powers. It hurts them once and then poof he has all their powers. Its a plot point that comes and goes quickly. There is also waaaaaaaay too much time on them pondering on what his plan is. Its not hard. If he returns earlier than he said, the MC dies. Also there's this weird avoidance of sleeping with any of the girls in the beginning because he's hung up on his ex, but he's got no qualms later asking for a harem.....yup.
Now the bad. Sue is a bitchy rapist who is explained to us that's redeeming because she's in love with you....after like a day. She's a bitch to all the other girls if she's not coming off like a slimeball and then she tries to act all cute or seductive with you. Amber is basically a living super computer and she's black. Should that matter in the context of the story? No, does she immediately think the reason the MC wont kiss her is after weeks together where hes been nothing but nice he must be a racist? Yes. Once again she's supposed to be the smartest person in the room at all times. Esther, who's powers are locked away, will not tell you what her powers even are.....they just ignore it. She also is somehow smarter than everyone in the room and can talk people into anything. How is this explained? It never is. She just can. Couldn't talk her way out of interrogation at the beginning, but a couple of days later she talks circles around the same agents. I mean....why not? Invisible girl thinks shes ugly. Fox girl likes to be petted. Blind girl is blind.
And finally Fiona.....oh Fiona. If there were one word to describe her it would be grating. She left the MC because she cant have kids and he wants them. She never tells him this of course...she just leaves him. When she comes back mostly out of petty jealousy, not only does he immediately take her back, but she treats him like a whipping post. Even the other girls are looking at him like he's a giant bitch for letting her show no respect to him and not only does he acknowledge it, he just eats it. He knows they lose respect for him and he just eats it. Of course this is never brought up again, they just let him look emasculated and these women who are hoping he can fight off an interdimensional threat just look at him like he's a chode. Once again she does this out of petty jealousy. Her only solution to any of the girls problems is by taking them out as a group in public where any stupid situation could set off a war. She also magically gets her ability to have kids fixed by one of the girls. She then immediately freaks out and is trying to struggle and argue while the medic is telling her she need to rest, so she puts her to sleep. What is her reaction when she wakes up? To bitch that the woman who just gave her to ability to have kids again is dangerous because she ignored her body autonomy why she was spazing out. The MC of course nods and tells her she's right. He does this a lot and mostly because she like starting arguments with him. I swear she's written to bitch about college level social bullshit or which can be far worse, she's a pink haired self insert and we're meant to believe its clever writing. It's not. This is clearly the worst relationship ever. Its explained he saved her and thats why she loves him, but the opposite is never explained. She's just an annoying rich girl who is annoying. Also and this is the best part......you can't say no to her. You can tell any of the other girls no. Sue multiple times.....but Fiona is literally forced upon you, even if you are going for a harem. If you completely removed her and gave all of her needed interactions to the female agent, I would bump this game up two stars immediately.
Now the mid, the MC. So this random secret agent chad just happens to find these girls who dimension drop from another world. Forgivable as it gets the story going. He also treats a bunch of women he does know as if they aren't really a threat or at least that he should definitely be the one to handle the situation while playing games with an agency he needs help from. Now we have the villain Nathaniel, an over powered child who is painted as "someone who would have fun torturing small animals for fun" who gives the MC powers and this is justified because boredom and the power hurts the girls when he takes their powers. It hurts them once and then poof he has all their powers. Its a plot point that comes and goes quickly. There is also waaaaaaaay too much time on them pondering on what his plan is. Its not hard. If he returns earlier than he said, the MC dies. Also there's this weird avoidance of sleeping with any of the girls in the beginning because he's hung up on his ex, but he's got no qualms later asking for a harem.....yup.
Now the bad. Sue is a bitchy rapist who is explained to us that's redeeming because she's in love with you....after like a day. She's a bitch to all the other girls if she's not coming off like a slimeball and then she tries to act all cute or seductive with you. Amber is basically a living super computer and she's black. Should that matter in the context of the story? No, does she immediately think the reason the MC wont kiss her is after weeks together where hes been nothing but nice he must be a racist? Yes. Once again she's supposed to be the smartest person in the room at all times. Esther, who's powers are locked away, will not tell you what her powers even are.....they just ignore it. She also is somehow smarter than everyone in the room and can talk people into anything. How is this explained? It never is. She just can. Couldn't talk her way out of interrogation at the beginning, but a couple of days later she talks circles around the same agents. I mean....why not? Invisible girl thinks shes ugly. Fox girl likes to be petted. Blind girl is blind.
And finally Fiona.....oh Fiona. If there were one word to describe her it would be grating. She left the MC because she cant have kids and he wants them. She never tells him this of course...she just leaves him. When she comes back mostly out of petty jealousy, not only does he immediately take her back, but she treats him like a whipping post. Even the other girls are looking at him like he's a giant bitch for letting her show no respect to him and not only does he acknowledge it, he just eats it. He knows they lose respect for him and he just eats it. Of course this is never brought up again, they just let him look emasculated and these women who are hoping he can fight off an interdimensional threat just look at him like he's a chode. Once again she does this out of petty jealousy. Her only solution to any of the girls problems is by taking them out as a group in public where any stupid situation could set off a war. She also magically gets her ability to have kids fixed by one of the girls. She then immediately freaks out and is trying to struggle and argue while the medic is telling her she need to rest, so she puts her to sleep. What is her reaction when she wakes up? To bitch that the woman who just gave her to ability to have kids again is dangerous because she ignored her body autonomy why she was spazing out. The MC of course nods and tells her she's right. He does this a lot and mostly because she like starting arguments with him. I swear she's written to bitch about college level social bullshit or which can be far worse, she's a pink haired self insert and we're meant to believe its clever writing. It's not. This is clearly the worst relationship ever. Its explained he saved her and thats why she loves him, but the opposite is never explained. She's just an annoying rich girl who is annoying. Also and this is the best part......you can't say no to her. You can tell any of the other girls no. Sue multiple times.....but Fiona is literally forced upon you, even if you are going for a harem. If you completely removed her and gave all of her needed interactions to the female agent, I would bump this game up two stars immediately.