VN - Ren'Py - A Foreign World [Ep.8] [HighbornTiger]

Game version: Episode 8

The game has an interesting concept and execution. It is incredibly long for the space it takes up.
The pros are clear:
- Interesting concept and complex storyline
- If you like naturally assembled harems or less naturally monogamous relationships.
- Superpowers are present at every turn, although they are not shown that often.
- Nice-looking character models and good animations.
- A strong, intelligent, and perceptive main character (MC).

However, there are also cons:

- Right from the start, the action sometimes jumps around, and what happened is not clearly explained. For example, the MC meets a friend who faked his death and MC asks him for help with a dirty job. Then, we see him digging a grave for his friend. We don't know exactly what happened for a long time, and when we do find out, it's not shown very well. This isn't the only situation like this.

- The MC's character: At first, he seems to be a law-abiding, well-trained professional with a good moral compass—or at least without cruelty or a lack of empathy. Then, as others also noticed, he turns into a manipulative jerk and a bit of an idiot who blows things out of proportion. His approach to women is strange because it's neither cold nor warm. He talks and behaves as if he can't control his feelings or desires for certain women. Additionally, the MC teases the LI in an implausible way. He doesn't realize that he shouldn't do this to people who take him literally.

- LI characters: It's difficult to fully enjoy these characters either. Even though they represent women who have been through a lot in a somewhat apocalyptic world, the portrayal of their emotions doesn't quite fit. As I wrote above, the MC doesn't help in this regard. Sue is the best example. She's supposedly head over heels in love with the MC and very horny for him, yet she comes off as somewhat mean and not very smart. She's a little annoying, not only to us, but also to other LIs. Yet, the reactions seem to indicate that she's a very sincere and loving person, which somewhat contradicts what we see. This is not the only example; there are others. Overall, the LI characters are difficult, and the portrayal of emotions, such as liking or loving, is flawed. The text clearly shows what we are supposed to see.

- Chemistry between characters: This relates to what I wrote above; it's weak and dull.

- Attitude toward "The Organization" and Government: Before retiring, MC was an exceptional employee, but his solutions here are embarrassingly weak. Although I understand he managed to stop the flow of knowledge at the lowest level, this level causes MC too many problems. The solution of living in MC's house while he stalls and plays for time is weak and the Organization pays all of MC's expenses. Additionally, the MC should clearly keep in mind that, in the event of a conflict, he is on the side of the girls against his country, with the Organization at the forefront. However, the MC doesn't seem to realize this. I don't know what he's thinking in a situation where conflict is almost inevitable once the authorities find out. Who would allow a person with superpowers to live normally in a world where only they have them?

- Antagonist: There's not much to say yet, except that it's bad because the antagonist gives the MC power to grow stronger and defeat him. Of course, it's not easy—maybe even impossible—but the nine women still have very limited knowledge of the antagonist. No one realizes that things could have ended in their favor from the beginning if another LI had gone with ML.

- Sex and Fetishes: The MC behaves like a selfish jerk. For some reason, oral sex was rare in the eight episodes. The MC "licked" a woman once, which is strange considering the relationship between the MC and the LIs. It should have been an icebreaker to relax LIs, but they jumped straight to sex.

In summary: Despite its flaws, the game plays well, but only because the action is fairly static and hasn't developed enough. The organization continues but believes less and less in the MC's lies, which makes no sense because the MC now has the superpower of a much more efficient brain. Yet, a regular employee is causing him problems. Either get rid of him or neutralize him somehow. The antagonist has not appeared yet, making the action resemble a supernatural slice of life.

Four stars because it's still playable and engaging.

The initial project was promising; the plot and story were there, but ultimately we're left with a novel that becomes rather indigestible and, ironically, lacks eroticism. It's not all bad, far from it. The creator of this visual novel demonstrates real talent in story development and strives to develop the female protagonists well. He deserves praise for that. However, the story quickly becomes bogged down in numerous details, due to a major problem with the script's execution. This novel is therefore unbalanced in its construction. In trying to be precise in describing the context, it quickly becomes indigestible. In attempting to portray a strong, capable, and understanding MC, it makes him a controlling, overconfident, even selfish person. Thus, we have a castrating and cold MC. Ironically, we have an original harem that nevertheless lacks eroticism and sexuality. The scenes are very rare in the first half of the novel and truly too short. Second half. The orgasms are poorly depicted, which is a major flaw in a harem where the central character is usually quite "skilled" in that regard. The scenes are poorly distributed, revealing a problem with the structure and balance. It's at this level that the VN creator needs to rework their work. This is all the more glaring since the MC never orgasms in the storylines, which is very, very awkward.
So my opinion is rather torn between two reactions: excellent premise, potentially a good VN, but a victim of its own complexity. It's a shame, but I will undoubtedly continue reading it because the effort is there, and that deserves recognition. I'm giving it a 3.5 for now because other VNs are far too overrated in this respect, but let's be realistic, given the theme the VN explores, it doesn't deserve more.

A Foreign World [Ep.8] December 2025

Pitch

You are a middle age man near the end of a successful career as a government agent when a group of women refugees with super powers from another world appear near by. Unfortunately a threat from their world looms and now your guests must train you for a confrontation that promises titanic consequences for you, the woman, and for Earth itself.

Final Thoughts

Overall this is a great visual novel with even pacing focused on getting to know the women, making them comfortable in a “foreign” world, while preparing the threat. Come for the harem & power fantasy and stay for the writing, characters, world building.

5/5

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Structure

This is a visual novel with occasional choices about love interests and sex scenes but with the over all plot being linear. There is no free roam, sandbox, or mini-game content.

Plot/Story

The world building for the world the women are escaping from is excellent and informs their reaction to a contemporary Earth quite well. Despite the fantastical elements the plot is pretty grounded and makes efforts to keep the story coherent and self consistent. There is good suspense and tension both within the group dynamic and from the outside to keep things interesting. The overall pacing is well balanced between moving the story forward, slices of life (that are novel for the women), character arcs, and relationships.

Writing/Dialog

The writing is great; characters have their own voice consistent to themselves, the plot is very intelligible, a wide range of human emotion is portrayed. I especially appreciate the dialog between the women while the MC isn’t present, which is often some of the most interesting character development; a nice change of pace from many harem games where the love interests lack agency, and are only allowed to express how much they love the MC’s dick.

Characters

The characters are well crafted, and given enough space to express themselves and worthy of curiosity. The interplay of the powers and personalities for the women with super powers is done well, I especially appreciate having a female character with super intelligence. While powers (and the lack there of), personalities, skin tones, and hair colors are all well varied; I did find the body shapes|types disappointingly similar. One character could have been a bit taller with more muscle (based on their powers and backstory) while another could have been curvier, perhaps more bottom heavy or top heavy. The main character is a little gary-sue-ish (too strong, too flawless, too benevolent) but it works well enough for the type of power and sexual fantasy the story is trying to tell.

Visuals/Graphics/Art

I find the 3D art to be great, not first class but without obvious flaws or looking dated. The camera work and lighting is solid. Backgrounds and sets are a little limited as so much of the story takes place at one location done well enough. The one sore area are the animations in sex scenes, which are wooden, mechanical, and not life like at all. At the current level of quality in the sex animations I’d have preferred the developer skip them in favor of a larger number static shots instead.

Fetish/Kink

This is a Harem game first and foremost, and I think this is well explored in the story with interesting dynamics based on the cultural of the women coming from another world with very different expectations. I enjoyed this aspect a lot and would encourage fans of Harem games to give this one a try. On the other hand while a monogamous relationship in possible in the game, I think it would detract so much that the result that the result would not be very enjoyable (YMMV). Otherwise this isn’t a very kinky game, sex acts stay pretty safe, and while there is a little bit of “Power Play” involving super powers I think this was under explored, under utilized.

VERSION: Ep 7.5
SUMMARY: Overrated and bloated mediocre AVN
RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐
2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐
4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐
6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐⭐
9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐⭐
10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Decent enough looking models including MC
2. Writing is generally structured and reads well. Its in a way brilliant, BUT! See rest of the review.
3. Story is different and provides an interesting enough perspective.
4. Characters have depth and personalities that are unique and fleshed out.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Monotonous and long dialogue which eventually becomes so boring that I want to skip most of it and started to. Sadly most of what happens is boring in this game.
2. Dialogue while being "clever" structured and thought provoking eventually becomes annoying and tedious. Read comments
3. While models and visual renders are fine, they really not GOOD, they are simply average by todays AVN standards.
4. Music is annoying the same and boring also, added to the very limited amount of ambient sounds and complete lack of lewd sounds...yeah not good.
5. Animations are not that GOOD either, they again are mediocre at best, angles are few and scenes are short often with little kinkiness to it.
6. Like with mostly everything in this game even the sexual scenes are fairly dull, uninteresting and boring...see comments.

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• Initially I found the MC clever, but as it progressed my view changed and I saw him as manipulative and now as simply an epic bullshitter. This ties directly into the story which has one fundamental flaw for me an that is the MCs way to bullshit "the organization" i.e. the government into keeping his own personal harem in his house. This whole concept is VERY flawed and one guy will not simply strong arm the government with a threat this severe, even if they don't know half of whats at stake. This issue and the resulting story as it unfold is simply just too much bullshit for me to accept and therefor I cannot give this AVN a higher rating that 3 and thats me being generous.
• The writing/dialogue is actually brilliant, but is very bloated. Sure it complex and sophisticated in its structure and clearly the writer is skilled and intelligent to create such complex and structured narrative. Sadly it does become tedious and monotonous, almost making some parts a chore to read, as if there is too much detail that really obfuscates what should be the key driving point and that is the story and relationships. Often I feel the script is bogged down by spending too much time on the minutia. This is probably fine with sophisticated intelligent character like Amber, but it happens in most of the MCs dialogue which is annoying.
• Its almost amazing how the developer managed to take a good concept and harem of woman and screw up most if not all sexual content. Most sex is bland, boring and not sexy, provocative or erotic in ANY sense of the word, this in itself is an achievement because of the missed opportunities here. This AVN could almost leave the Adult out and just be called a virtual novel its so boring on the sexual side of things.

TLDR:

Average AVN on most levels with long-winded, bloated and annoying dialogue that is kinda clever but goes too far and causes irritation eventually. Music, animations and sounds are also average at best and there is nothing really save for wanting to see how it ends that drives me to play this AVN, its boring and lackluster and REALLY OVERRATED.

Models are interesting, but the writing is the longest, driest, most inconsequential waste I've read. At an early point I even got bored skipping it. the sound track manages to make it even more boring.

I have mixed feelings about this AVN. On one hand, it's a solid production and a good story... at least to start. The women are hot and unique and it's not filled with the familiar models of other AVNs. The writing is solid and the story is engaging. The MC seems like a decent guy despite the fact he is a bit of a Gary Stu and the LIs all seem reasonable, assuming you can suspend some disbelief due to the impact of magic and curses. Plus, the MC struggles with his feelings as he is engaged to someone. This is a great addition as you can see the MC struggle between giving in and staying faithful.

POTENTIAL SPOILERS

So what are my challenges with it? To begin with, the antagonist is like Thanos of the Avenger Movies. I mean, he was totally unstoppable. This antagonist is like that. He can apparently wipe out the entire world with the flick of his wrist. Whatever. So now the fate of the world is with the MC and his harem. Erm.... right. What an ego this guy has. Not asking for help, he's being a total tool to the people in the agency and he literally puts the entire fate of the world on his shoulders. What a selfish, arrogant ass-hole. Seriously.

Then the fiance comes back, and if you have played the MC faithful, she tells him she is cool if he sleeps with other women. And the MC, after preaching monogamy the entire story, suddenly becomes a slut. Crazy. Even if you did not play faithful, she still is okay with it. No internal debate. No leaving the room to think about it for a while. No commiserating with friends or family, no thought about what the world would think of the US President's daughter being part of a harem, just "I'd be okay with it.".

Despite all of this, the story is engaging enough to want to know where it will go and how it will end up. Fortunately, this dev has a solid track record of completing AVNs so part of the reason I am give 4 stars is to support devs like this. If I am being totally honest, it is between a 3 and 4.

Regardless, you may not care about anything I said and you might love it. At the very least, I would encourage everyone to download it and give it a try. It's worth a download.

Good luck to the developer.

This easily ranks in my top 5 of favorite VN's. A perfect combination of long discriptive story telling without making it boring, a diverse set of loveable characters, a commendable MC who the reader can look up to and just enough adult material to tickle your fancy of an adult game. Combining this with gorgeous imagery, the time put into the characters expressions, it's just all I could ask for.

To HighbornTiger, this is a wonderful piece of art, you deserve to be proud of it, keep up the good work.

The entire premise and set-up for the meat of this VN is great. I think it's always nice to see a story where characters are learning to acclimate to a new, alien place. It's especially interesting if you've created and developed characters so that your audience is curious as to how they'll react to things we'd consider "normal".

The problem is that the story suffers from an unbearable amount of word vomit while also tripping on itself when it comes to the clear "emotional" moments. The main character was okay at first, then he becomes annoyingly insufferable the further you play into the game. He overwhelms the game with how much dialogue and thinking he does. I get being respectful and understanding of others. I get being some kind of secret agent for an obscure organization. But couldn't he have been written better? Whenever he talks, it's like he's trying to get people to sign off on a peace treaty or something. It's to the point where it makes me feel uncomfortable that these women kind of just fall for him, despite his stoicism and how manipulative he sounds. He has so much text in the game, that the other characters he's talking to can barely get a word in, and to me - that's when you have a protagonist that's less "cool" and more like he sounds self-important.

Anyways, the rest of the VN is just decent. The characters are distinctive and each have their own approaches to the world and how to deal with the protagonist. They're not archetypes, but I would say that some definitely get more development and screentime than the others. That could be alleviated with future updates, so not really a con for me. I will say that the sexual scenes aren't going to do much, if anything for anyone. To me, they're just a plot device to drive the story and convey the progress of these characters' relationships. They're not the primary reason to try the game out.

I do find that the idea of these women all falling in love with the protagonist and willingly being in a harem with him within 40 days silly, but I'll hold my suspension of disbelief.

The renders are decent, the sound design is a bit disappointing - with only a couple of music tracks playing on loop throughout, and the UI could benefit from a transparency scale, as the textbox is helpful to see the text, yet can obscure parts of a scene at times.

It's an okay game. It won't blow your mind, hell, it may even frustrate you if you can't resonate with the main character on some level. If you like one of the characters' designs, I found it nice sticking it out for a couple of the girls' emotional arcs.

I think it's impressive that they managed to fit so much development and progress within only episode 7. Keep in mind, when they say you're going through 40 days, they literally mean it. You'll be sitting through an hour of text sometimes and it would only equate to a day or two with how much is packed in the game's episodes. By episode 7, we're only around day 10-14 I believe, so there's definitely many more episodes planned for the future, unless the developer decides to use big timeskips, which would probably end really poorly for the remaining LI's pacing & development. I would let this marinate for a couple years, so that if you don't enjoy the protagonist, at least you can get it all done in 1 sitting.

Ironically, I think this is a rather crappy AVN. However it's a VERY good VN. The characters are interesting, and I really enjoy the process of learning about their pasts and how the trauma affected them. They each have distinct personalities as well as 'powers', and the interactions both between themselves and with the MC are well developed.
However the romance...feels sloppy. I actually enjoyed playing hard-ball with the girls, turning them all down, until the game just flat-out didn't let me. Legitimately during one scene, the MC suddenly reverses how I had been treating Tracy up to that point and suddenly he's just some horny guy talking dirty to her and talking about what he wants to do to her and it gave me serious whiplash. Did the author just get tired of writing for the 'long game' options and slap everything into the sex route? And what made it even worse was the way Tracy was reacting during the scene, all wooden. Made me feel ick, which is the whole friggin reason I had been avoiding it in the first place.
On top of that the scenes themselves are very boring, no animation at all ( unless you consider flame flickering animation ) and they drag on for far too long considering they add nothing to the overall story.
It's a very rare treat when I find an AVN where I'm more interested in the plot and characters than I am the sexy stuff. I wish this game had lived up to my initial assessment that it was one of them.

*Just leaving a quicker than normal review here primarily because of a select few elements having a devastating impact on the overall experience.

I'm genuinely surprised by the amount of 5-star ratings this AVN has received given how little it respects the audience's time, competency, and agency. What does all that mean? Boy howdy do I have a list of frustration for you!

Fiona
I genuinely struggle to understand why this character exists other than to serve as an antagonistic force for drama. Specifically, she leaves the protagonist due to promising him they'll have children together (she can't because she's sterile), but refuses to tell him. The amount of effort the author goes through to keep this character relevant leads to contrivance after contrivance as she's later forced back into the story with zero choice to reject her. Furthermore, if you have sex once with any of the characters than she'll lose her damn mind...

For perspective, removing this character would instantly bump my rating up to 4-stars rather than 2, that's how awful her character is written.

*Edit: I originally stated that if she was removed that the rating would bump up instantly, but having given myself time to analyze the plot further I genuinely believe that even if her character was removed entirely that it would still be a 2 star game. The harsh reality is that every character is introduced one way, only for the author break their characters in order to drive specific plot points further. It's such wasted potential because the notion of a parallel Earth where women are heavily oppressed coming to our Earth and facing a far more optimistic reality is something that could've been explored with each of these characters.

Let's take the above a step further, Fiona's character could've been introduced as a naive young adult who let her infertility affect her relationship with the MC (without the lies/subterfuge) such that she believed he wouldn't love her anymore because of it. She could easily be reintroduced by having the MC reach out to her for help in teaching the parallel Earth gals about the societal norms of this Earth (also revealing her own insecurity during the process). While the girls learn and grow from Fiona, she's also learning and growing from them and eventually overcoming her infertility insecurity, and the penultimate choice could allow the player to determine if they support her having Sally cure her infertility, or to reassure her that he'll still love her regardless of inability to have kids.

The above changes wouldn't fix the issues surrounding the MC, but they would at least take advantage of the unique plot point rather than wasting it on arbitrary conflict (i.e. Fiona being petty and hyper confrontational).

The MC
The story initially paints the MC as a heartbroken, lonely man while learning early on about his past working for a shadowy organization. This character is perfectly set up for the main plot of the story which deals with a group of super power women from a parallel Earth. The history with his ex-wife Fiona also sets up a believable path forward towards the MC genuinely falling in love with the women under his care. So what went wrong?

This ties back into Fiona being reintroduced... Seriously, this character already served her purpose for the MC, so why is she being brought back in? Furthermore, why aren't we given the choice to reject her especially when she left for such a petty reason? This whole scenario leads to the plot twist of Fiona being accepting of a harem feel heavily contrived as this guy has rejected every LI - multiple times - because of her. This genuinely feels as though the author had an initial plan to keep Fiona as a main LI, but fumbled the execution so spectacularly as to detract from the underlying premise being rather enjoyable.


Quickfire points

• Nathanial is a terribly written antagonist who follows bad practices in writing villains (i.e. evil for evil's sake, basic/mundane goals)
• The LI's vary significantly in terms of quality due to the author refusing to progress all of their arcs in parallel
• The author frequently utilizes the codex to explain plot development either due to forgetting their implementation, or laziness in properly scripting the scene (i.e. the friend in the beginning dying without knowing why)
• Choices are superficial, this is essentially a kinetic novel as the player only has limited agency when it comes to lewd scenes alone
• Lewd scenes are primarily dream sequences... Seriously? The author is this inept that he's going to script dream sequences rather than properly progressing character romances??
  • This genuinely frustrated me because the dream sequences degrades the MC's personality by adding a trait that fails to align with his overall character
    • This is made worse because said flaw is a contrivance to justify Fiona's antagonistic nature...

The quality of writing is a whiplash of fantastic ideas with extremely poor executions. The author will continue including whatever recent idea he thinks is interesting to the detriment of the overall story, and it's a genuine shame considering the elements are there for a refreshing blend of fantasy and sience fiction genres.

I've seen enough of this one to give it a full-throated endorsement. It's surprising how well this story works for an erotic game, The balance is great. There's always a thrust and a clear goal our characters are working towards while not missing out on the romantic/erotic moments that arrive organically and they are plentiful unlike many other "serious" games. Even the accelerated time crunch of a month makes sense here.
The LIs are another aspect in which this game shines. While there are some who are not that memorable( the hacker chick and the invisible girl are boring imo), there are many that will pull at your heartstrings with their unique story and/or fiery disposition(yes, I'm talking about the redhead, my favorite LI). Coming from a foreign world different from ours, their thoughts on what a mixed gender society is totally different and it's great to see them deal with the complete contrast they are presented on earth in their own way. Each girls' future actions is shaping up to be an exciting mystery.
Gameplay wise, this is a linear VN if you're going for the harem playthrough. The visuals are top of the line Daz3D models so if you like them, you can't really expect more.
A really amazing experience with lots of interesting it can still go. Keep up the good work guys.

Lets start with the good, I like the general premise. It has legs. For the most part the girls (at least the ones we spend time with) are written with some thought. The power sets of the girls are cool. A lot of back and forth with what's happening is digestible and makes sense......for the most part. Tracey and Aurora make sense in how they think. I thoroughly enjoy the story and the details when they are consistent with the world which is set up. The growth and training of your powers is interesting.

Now the mid, the MC. So this random secret agent chad just happens to find these girls who dimension drop from another world. Forgivable as it gets the story going. He also treats a bunch of women he does not know as if they aren't really a threat or at least that he should definitely be the one to handle the situation while playing games with an agency he needs help from. Now we have the villain Nathaniel, an over powered child who is painted as "someone who would have fun torturing small animals for fun" who gives the MC powers and this is justified because boredom and the power hurts the girls when he takes their powers. It hurts them once and then poof he has all their powers. Its a plot point that comes and goes quickly. There is also waaaaaaaay too much time on them pondering on what his plan is. Its not hard. If he returns earlier than he said, the MC dies. Also there's this weird avoidance of sleeping with any of the girls in the beginning because he's hung up on his ex, but he's got no qualms later asking for a harem.....yup.

Now the bad. Sue is a bitchy rapist who is explained to us that's redeeming because she's in love with you....after like a day. She's a bitch to all the other girls if she's not coming off like a slimeball and then she tries to act all cute or seductive with you. Amber is basically a living super computer and she's black. Should that matter in the context of the story? No, does she immediately think the reason the MC wont kiss her is after weeks together where hes been nothing but nice he must be a racist? Yes. Once again she's supposed to be the smartest person in the room at all times. Esther, who's powers are locked away, will not tell you what her powers even are.....they just ignore it. She also is somehow smarter than everyone in the room and can talk people into anything. How is this explained? It never is. She just can. Couldn't talk her way out of interrogation at the beginning, but a couple of days later she talks circles around the same agents. I mean....why not? Invisible girl thinks shes ugly. Fox girl likes to be petted. Blind girl is blind.

And finally Fiona.....oh Fiona. If there were one word to describe her it would be grating. She left the MC because she cant have kids and he wants them. She never tells him this of course...she just leaves him. When she comes back mostly out of petty jealousy, not only does he immediately take her back, but she treats him like a whipping post. Even the other girls are looking at him like he's a giant bitch for letting her show no respect to him and not only does he acknowledge it, he just eats it. He knows they lose respect for him and he just eats it. Of course this is never brought up again, they just let him look emasculated and these women who are hoping he can fight off an interdimensional threat just look at him like he's a chode. Once again she does this out of petty jealousy. Her only solution to any of the girls problems is by taking them out as a group in public where any stupid situation could set off a war. She also magically gets her ability to have kids fixed by one of the girls. She then immediately freaks out and is trying to struggle and argue while the medic is telling her she need to rest, so she puts her to sleep. What is her reaction when she wakes up? To bitch that the woman who just gave her to ability to have kids again is dangerous because she ignored her body autonomy why she was spazing out. The MC of course nods and tells her she's right. He does this a lot and mostly because she like starting arguments with him. I swear she's written to bitch about college level social bullshit or which can be far worse, she's a pink haired self insert and we're meant to believe its clever writing. It's not. This is clearly the worst relationship ever. Its explained he saved her and thats why she loves him, but the opposite is never explained. She's just an annoying rich girl who is annoying. Also and this is the best part......you can't say no to her. You can tell any of the other girls no. Sue multiple times.....but Fiona is literally forced upon you, even if you are going for a harem. If you completely removed her and gave all of her needed interactions to the female agent, I would bump this game up two stars immediately.

Edit as ofEP8: Whelp if it isn't my old friend "Well we gotta show Tracey is a badass....lets just have her defeat the MC in a couple of moves." Ignore he's basically using bullet time, ignore he's got any sort of training, we are just gonna let her almost kill him. Forget she decided to never show him what all out looks like from her, we are just gonna let him take an ass whipping because lord knows letting any of these women look weak is a terrifying proposition to anyone that would write in all earnest a character like Fiona. down to one star now.

Also the amount of 5 star reviews on this mess and all are liked by the same two people is pretty telling.

I'm surprised by the amount of reviews complimenting the writing, considering how consistently dry, sterile and verbose the dialogue feels to me. I suppose people on here are so used to broken or machine-translated English that anything grammatically correct and comprehensible is praiseworthy.

There's also a much less important thing that I find irrationally annoying: the people in this VN change poses as if they're talking to each other but almost never actually open their mouths. After I noticed what was happening, it went on so long that I stopped to point at the screen when one of them finally did.

I love the Concept of the Game.
Played the Previous one just to get some of the Story about the girls live in the other world.
I love that the MC is very smart and plays his cards well.
Can´t wait for the (happy?!) ending

Extremely good Vn i loved it and i enjoyed it a lot
Visuals are great and the story is very good too.
MC is very good and he js very capable and with backbone too and at the same time he isnt rude thats somewhat refreshing for me and i believe he is better than most MC in this site.
Furthermore the Lis are also beautiful and interesting and every LI is different than the other.
Overall i believe its a quite good Harem
(personally i like the fact that there isnt any lesbian content though thats personal taste.. in future i hope if its added to be optional at least).
Nonetheless i highly recommended it.

The purely linear VN style is not my favorite, but this one is very well done. The only choices are whether or not to pursue a particular LI, and it doesn't seem to affect the main storyline either way.

The storytelling, though, is first rate. The pacing of the main plot as well as the backstory reveals kept me interested. The characters feel like actual characters, not just archetypes. And the models are unique and well matched to the characters.

4.5* but will round up.

Unique plot, and its decently written. All of the characters have unique voices which is always a plus. Renders are good, there is a great amount of content relative to development time, and the plot is moving along instead of getting bogged down. With most LI the relations are progressing, and with appropriate pacing.

The only downsides are that there are too many LI. There are a couple characters for whom there is practically no content with, just because of the focus on other characters - which is fine, but they probably shouldn't have been included in the first place. Its a tall task to build out paths and content for 10 LI.

Only other negatives in my book is the english word choice can be spotty in some places, and the MC is a bit of a mega chad

Would suggest playing, this is a good one

This will be hit-or-miss for most of you

The game has good renders and writing thats been done with some effort, unfortunately threes this whole fantasy plot that is more of a nuisance than interesting (goblins type fantasy, not kink type fantasy)

Some of the li's are half attractive with good proportions and are rendered well but most look like boys and one even has hair on stomach that says it must be trans without tagging in.

The writing means the mc tries to be a bit of an action hero which so far ive never seen work in a vn and it means there are long sequences of distraction and with the unattractive li's

It's not a badly written, theres just nothing that excites or makes you want to return, the story premise was wasted on boy-action

I hardly mind when a novel stops and I have to wait for a new chapter, but a foreign world had me aching. If you like sharp dialogues, a gripping story and sufficient character depth; this a brilliant one. Had similar writing style to Summers' gone, which is a jewel imo too. If you like unearthly breast shapes, or a story that got lost in lewd scenes search somewhere else.
Can't wait for more !

An adult game that doesn't punish you for not being a 12 year old staring at every butt that crosses your path. And bad jokes and inuendo in every scene for fear you aren't mature enough to pay attention to a good story.

Is it for everyone, nope.. But I wish there were more adult games that don't low brow everything.

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