[A game as no name] Translation review

Woolfie

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May 6, 2017
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Hello,

I'm looking for a translation review of my new game.
It is write in French and translate by google, yeah I know it is not the best but ...
I've already review it but since English is not my first langage a review made by an english person would be great.

About the game,
1- A game as no name is not the title ... I've not yet find a good one
2- It is not about GoT, it is just that I find funny the temporary title
3- It set up firstly in our dark ages between 14th and 17th century in a "Once upon a time" kingdom : so I'm write it in french using some old world or old sentence structures
4- After well ... you'll see

tell me if you are interested.