HTML Abandoned A Girl's Journey [v0.2.4] [Alyonsa]

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Overview:
The game is a sandbox with zero bad-ends but a lot of content. Over time the game will focus on options and decisions to facilitate a sandbox experience.
The game is not really designed to "end." The story will eventually be better written, but most of the story is developed by you, personally.
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Thread Updated: 2019-02-05
Release Date: 2018-11-13
Developer: Alyonsa

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Version: 0.2.4
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English
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[Eoin]

Word of Warning: This game is made in the dev's free time, making the time between updates very long at points. Don't be asking "when iz update lololol", as any comments along these lines will be deleted without warning.

 

[Chrathrard]

Oh. This is just another one of those, "Google Images in place of words" HTLM games; no wonder it's so big.

 

[BrokenRose]

Game's definitely worth a try, as you earn +6 blowjobs in place of skill experience.

 

[raulz0r]

I like my books with pictures, so I will definitely try this game out.

Oh. This is just another one of those, "Google Images in place of words" HTLM games; no wonder it's so big.

To each their own. I get bored easily if there are no visual aids.

 

[deltahalo241]

So how much content is in the game right now?

 

[Survivor1000]

Its a nice game at the start but gets boring after a while! Unfortunate because it has potential!

 

[XJ347]

Opinions... Not these are mostly subjective, it's ok to disagree with me.

• Feels very much like Girls Life, meaning it is a life simulator but this has most of the simulator taken out. That can be a good thing, but this is SOOOO stripped down that it's a negative.
• So far most stats don't do anything (it's early but still)
• I'm confused why have a transformation. If transformation isn't the theme of the game why throw something so dumb into it? If this was 3 years ago you would do this so you can post the game on tfgames, but now you have this site to advertise and host a game outside patreon.
• Your choice in hair color determine what images you see.
• Creator has an interest in skinny women. While I tend to like skinny women, I think others might like thicker big breasted women too. I get it, if you add in a skinny or thick option then you have to double the game size... I could almost see a thick or skinny pack decision when you download.
• There is a weird vibe where some rape content is considered consensual...
• I dont't like how sexual content happens without me choosing it, unless it's rape.
• Disappointing job, only can be a model, and no story progression relating to your job. You only get +1 skill. No random events.
• Overall a lack of random events.
• Have to PAY to go to school???? WHAT??? Breaks the life simulators feeling when you do things like this.
• No one to build a relationship yet, other than be the hook up to 2 school boys.
• Lack of plot, just full life sim.

Overall this has some good, but is very unpolished. I'm not the guy who overly rewards potential. So far it's below average at best. 2/5 for version 0.2.4, but with new content and editing old content to give plays the feeling of being in control then this will rise quickly.

 

[baconater1234]

i look forward to this if updates come at least once a month

 

[albamuth]

Searching the couch cushions all day is the fastest way to make money in this game, then save-scum the casino.

 

[deluges]

Opinions... Not these are mostly subjective, it's ok to disagree with me.

• Feels very much like Girls Life, meaning it is a life simulator but this has most of the simulator taken out. That can be a good thing, but this is SOOOO stripped down that it's a negative.
• So far most stats don't do anything (it's early but still)
• I'm confused why have a transformation. If transformation isn't the theme of the game why throw something so dumb into it? If this was 3 years ago you would do this so you can post the game on tfgames, but now you have this site to advertise and host a game outside patreon.
• Your choice in hair color determine what images you see.
• Creator has an interest in skinny women. While I tend to like skinny women, I think others might like thicker big breasted women too. I get it, if you add in a skinny or thick option then you have to double the game size... I could almost see a thick or skinny pack decision when you download.
• There is a weird vibe where some rape content is considered consensual...
• I dont't like how sexual content happens without me choosing it, unless it's rape.
• Disappointing job, only can be a model, and no story progression relating to your job. You only get +1 skill. No random events.
• Overall a lack of random events.
• Have to PAY to go to school???? WHAT??? Breaks the life simulators feeling when you do things like this.
• No one to build a relationship yet, other than be the hook up to 2 school boys.
• Lack of plot, just full life sim.

Overall this has some good, but is very unpolished. I'm not the guy who overly rewards potential. So far it's below average at best. 2/5 for version 0.2.4, but with new content and editing old content to give plays the feeling of being in control then this will rise quickly.

Girl Life and Life Choices are the best of these types, and it's not even close. Girl Life is a mess due to community sourcing developers who seem to vanish after initiating something so there's so many random threads that are never picked up. The game is full of half-assed ideas. Life Choices is really promising but, content-wise, it has a ways to go since there's nothing you're really striving for (there is a ton of content, but the game feels purposeless after awhile). Anyway, my point is all of these html games, especially those early in their development, are not worth the time since there's superior options.

 

[JackedHeart]

Girl Life and Life Choices are the best of these types, and it's not even close. Girl Life is a mess due to community sourcing developers who seem to vanish after initiating something so there's so many random threads that are never picked up. The game is full of half-assed ideas. Life Choices is really promising but, content-wise, it has a ways to go since there's nothing you're really striving for (there is a ton of content, but the game feels purposeless after awhile). Anyway, my point is all of these html games, especially those early in their development, are not worth the time since there's superior options.

If all these games are bad then what are some good ones? You mentioned that there are superior options but I have yet to find any decent html games of a similar genre to this, any recommendations?

 

[deluges]

If all these games are bad then what are some good ones? You mentioned that there are superior options but I have yet to find any decent html games of a similar genre to this, any recommendations?

Sorry, I meant that those two, Girl Life and Life Choices were the superior options. Girl Life is way kinkier, and more involved, while Life Choices is more about slow corruption. I'd recommend both.

 

[Blue727]

Does anyone know the source of these images?

 

[BurningSun]

Girl Life and Life Choices are the best of these types, and it's not even close. Girl Life is a mess due to community sourcing developers who seem to vanish after initiating something so there's so many random threads that are never picked up. The game is full of half-assed ideas. Life Choices is really promising but, content-wise, it has a ways to go since there's nothing you're really striving for (there is a ton of content, but the game feels purposeless after awhile). Anyway, my point is all of these html games, especially those early in their development, are not worth the time since there's superior options.

Auch @deluges, harsh critique! Haha just joking. You touch upon a very important point. Won't go into detail about it here, but am happy to talk to you about it in my own thread.

My thoughts/remarks regarding this game so far:
1) I know it is in an early stage, but why implement a shower when there is absolutely no use for it? So I think work is needed first and foremost to make stats important.
2) The seperate school slut stat is a nice idea, but I'd like to be able to somehow be in control of it. Right now it is increased by itself automatically every other click or so
3) That is my main gripe at the moment; If you start a new game you can instantly start to go and do stuff any normal girl wouldn't just do off the bat. And this girl has been transformed like only moments (feels like that) ago and without a care in the world (s)he can go out there and whore themselves out on the streets. That is a weird transition if you ask me. Too much change implemented too quickly (read instantly) and smut is there instantly as well. No story or anything like that guiding the MC to certain options.
4) Unlike someone else said, I like my book with pictures too, so yeah a + for the use of images, even though some don't match the text, but that happens and is easily fixed.
5) All in all a nice start with potential, but still needs a lot of polishing and more content as at the moment it is about 15 minutes tops I'd say.

Keep up the good work
BurningSun

 

[deluges]

Auch @deluges, harsh critique! Haha just joking. You touch upon a very important point. Won't go into detail about it here, but am happy to talk to you about it in my own thread.

My thoughts/remarks regarding this game so far:
1) I know it is in an early stage, but why implement a shower when there is absolutely no use for it? So I think work is needed first and foremost to make stats important.
2) The seperate school slut stat is a nice idea, but I'd like to be able to somehow be in control of it. Right now it is increased by itself automatically every other click or so
3) That is my main gripe at the moment; If you start a new game you can instantly start to go and do stuff any normal girl wouldn't just do off the bat. And this girl has been transformed like only moments (feels like that) ago and without a care in the world (s)he can go out there and whore themselves out on the streets. That is a weird transition if you ask me. Too much change implemented too quickly (read instantly) and smut is there instantly as well. No story or anything like that guiding the MC to certain options.
4) Unlike someone else said, I like my book with pictures too, so yeah a + for the use of images, even though some don't match the text, but that happens and is easily fixed.
5) All in all a nice start with potential, but still needs a lot of polishing and more content as at the moment it is about 15 minutes tops I'd say.

Keep up the good work
BurningSun

Ha. I'll post over in your thread after work.

 

[Swallows999]

I love it so far, no boring grind or silly introductory tasks so I can get right to the action. I have to use a save editor in every other game just to get to where this one starts. Then again, maybe there could be a bit more story at the start- I thought it was weird that the house had a gloryhole, maybe the protagonist could purchase that upgrade (for cheap, it's just a hole in a wall) instead? I'd also love to see some exhibitionism and other assorted scenarios of nudity in public, sharking, groping on the streets, etc.

As a side note, I feel like having the three different hair-colors with their corresponding videos is a noble cause, but maybe too difficult in the long run? Especially for later scenes or other activities, it might end up being a difficult media hunt for the non-brunettes.

 

[kansasdude]

Can you get an apartment in this version so you can use the laptop?

Does anyone know the source of these images?

I did a reverse image search using

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Your image may be unique, and doesn't appear anywhere on the web. This happens with personal photographs, artwork, or other original images.

I used the laptop to make a game>sell>Cash: $NaN appeared I than saved>exited>loaded game>Cash: $0

 

[Luzifer22]

are there any saves from this game?

 

[mneroan]

Anyone knows the name of the stylist?