Ren'Py - A Heartfelt Visit [Ch. 3] [Secret Arcade]

Might be decent if it wasn't absolutely riddled with mistakes and game breaking bugs. On the mac version, at least, you get to the drive up to the camping trip and then it just fades to a white screen and doesn't fade back. Probably a transition mistake or something but it completely breaks the game. There's tons of grammar mistakes and moments when characters refer to you as "MC" instead of the name you entered. Fix your bugs before you release, dev.

The game is quite good, don't end it quickly yeah, there one thing you can change that Nicholas looks skinny but his head looks big so try to make him a bit normal on skinny part and try to add more choices that lead to different parts and add mega link, overall the game is great, I'll soon recommend it on my Yt, One more thing, discord link is missing . Public link's are so late so 3 star

Full of bugs, no content that you couldn't see in the preview.
The Game developer should've just stick to usual visual novel and avoided complicating things for everyone when he decided to make a free roaming game, especially if his not gonna go through with it, make things smooth, and bug free instead of just publishing a half assed work.

This sandbox is nerve wracking. "Find Nina," who is not there and no one else. It doesn't make sense, either it's a bug or the Developer is really weird, done, deleted. The models are beautiful, the story has potential, but then such stupidity when you can just click endlessly and without rollback.

A strong start. Main man doesn't waste anytime and goes after the women and actually gets to fucked one of them pretty early too. All the women look great too and the story is pretty simple;
Mc stays at friend's place for a vacation and goes after the mom and sister of said friend and any other women around them. Including married women too
Ran into a few bugs so make sure to save often and have extra save files incase something bad happens.
Besides that, enjoying the game so far and looking forward to future updates

PS, Otis the cat is the greatest wingman of all time

+nice renders and tastefull and apropiate use of animations
+ MC Is not a wimpy loser nerd. He knows he wants to bang.
- a Lot of Bugs, typos and abrupt jumps
Waste of potential of a netori game with NPCs touching the LIs. Dont bother with this game.

Nice intro to a story involving some hot MILFs in a little neighborhood. I'm not a fan of the sandbox format but this one is OK. The animations available so far are very good, I'm looking forward to see much more soon

Rolled the dice on this one and while there are a couple of things that could be tuned gameplay wise this is a pretty nice start.

Story:

Not anything too deep, you're just visiting your dorky best friend that's been apparently missing you. When you arrive you meet his hot mom who you spend more time with due to your bestie always spending his time gaming. It's not a bad start for a newbie Dev. The story turns into a sandbox but it's not unbearable or draining playing. I found Otis the orange cat with no problems so I guess in terms of how good/bad the sandbox gameplay was I'd say it was fairly decent. The uncle looks like Varys from GO, don't know if he's going to turn into a cuckold but he has that vibe and he has "Issues" down there. I'll wait for that to develop more in the future before giving my full opinion on the matter. As long as the MC doesn't turn into a asshole it should be fine. I am still a fan of Away From Home afterall.

Renders:

Good.

Characters/Models:

If you're a fan of all things thick you'll enjoy this.


Dialogue/Grammar:

Good enough. Nina did refer to herself as "Mc" a couple of times.

Gameplay:

Anytime there's a sandbox involved you wanna make getting around as easy as possible. Add a home/bedroom button if you could.


Overall reaction:

Not a bad start newbie. 4 stars for the orange cat Otis, give him more screen time.

This game is excellent in many aspects, certainly, it has details, such as the MC's friend who looks too thin, or some controls that are a little vague, but in general it is an excellent start, the visual aspect and the animations are very good.

Highly recommended, and let's hope this continues.

It is obvious the game is just starting and so is the Dev. The coding and controls need adjustment but as an overall game it may have potential. The MC’s best friend needs some adjustment to his form as head is too big for body it looks to be on purpose, but it looks to off weird even. Choices for complementing Nina falls short get one option but not another and no matter she chooses for herself the mc could be able to lead the choice here. Its too early to give a full review because the dev needs to adjust some things and that could change the total experience of the game the game is worth the play time even with the comments left by many on how the Dev can improve. Gook luck you may become a favorite artist.