VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - A Hero Journey: The Kindling [Ep. 2 Pt. 1 Bugfix #2] [JDoodle Stories]

ART - Gorgeous IMO, I love the 2D drawing style and it's always good that the characters are uniquely hand-made instead of ready made ones (though I have much love for those babes as well).

PACE - I don't mind the fast pace at all, quite the opposite really, at the end of the day it's porn you fucking hypocrites

ANIMATION - It's there, but it's quite basic. The art compensates though.

STORY - Meh, it's fine, not that important considering the fast pace. I think it was designed to just be the background for a porn-fest. I like porn-fests.

CONTENT - It starts fast and it's good, but it only gets to HJ and BJ and no more. Considering the game was abandoned, that's all you'll see here.

BOTTOM LINE - If you have a few minutes to spare a fap then go for it. If you're looking for vaginal sex or want a long play time - give it up. I give it 4 and not 5 stars just cause it's abandoned.

I truly see a lot of potential in this developer, and regret his choice to pursue a real life career. But good luck though

Art 4/5 - The art direction is great. Mom and sisters look hot.

Writing 3/5 - The writing is so so. Basically in your dream a flame shows up and gives you the power of getting sex with your mom & sisters. It's kind of cheesy. The writing focuses a lot on discussion of mundane things, like buying a puppy, even though it has no bearing on the game.These discussions get old and boring, so I ended up skipping a lot of the dialogue. I like the interesting parts of dialogue where they explained the super human part, but the mundane convo made me skip most of the dialogue. The writer should have the mom & sisters talking about super hero related topics, those are more interesting.

NTR - The game has no NTR in it, I could not find any. I even unpacked the RPA files and viewed the images. I actually downloaded it and tried it because it had the NTR tag, but there was no NTR in game. That's fine though, I'll give it a fair review. It's basically a harem game. You go and fuck all the women, they just throw themselves at you because of the flame power you acquire in your dream, kind of cheesy.

Vanilla 5/5 - The game is filled with vanilla sex, if that's what you like, you're in for a treat. Don't expect any mind fucks or clever writing and build up. Just 'flame' then sex.

Fetish 1/5 - There was one foot job. THe game is mainly for vanilla style sex scenes and that's cool.

The game is worth downloading, playing and even supporting on Patreon.

I gave 4/5 stars because people who like vanilla incest harem will like this. I couldn't give it 5 stars because there is no mind fucks, you know, that extra good writing that really turns you on, it doesn't have that.

Best 2d game so far, some other 2d games have a thousand times the budget and put out 1 thousandth of the content. This guy is doing it for less than $40 a month.

-Good Art Perspective
-Unique Style
-Good scene descriptions
-Good pacing (no bs filler)

-1 Bad glitch where moms tits don't show when she's giving you head

Earlier I was not giving any attention to this game as it is a 2dcg game but after playing it I realised that it much better than many of the 3d games and is now in my top 10 list. The main thing I like about the story is direct to action like blowjob for Anne and Cassandra without wasting any time in teasing which is normally the case in other games and in some games it is like teasing only. The only scene that I didn't like is the Anne pool scene where It was looking like Mc is gonna Throatfuck her but He didn't I hope there will be a throatfuck scene with Anne and other girls in part 2 of episode 2 and if not please try to add Throatfuck ,Facefuck and deepthroat scene with all the female characters specially Anne, Cassandra,Jane in episode 3 and for other girls in later episodes,If you can add these scenes for all girls in episode 3 itself it will be best and please remember that throatfuck, Facefuck and deepthroat scenes are three different things many people think of them as same.Anyways I like this game a lot ,Very fine art and renders, The game is having extremely great potential and can give tough competition to games like Taffy tales , Insexual awakening, Shelter and who knows may become the topmost game in it's category in near future.last but not the least i request to the Dev to consider My advice for scenes with anne and other girls ,I know the scenes i am talking about are complex but atleast you can give it a try.Please dev add these scenes to make the game sexier which of course is already very sexy.Thnx.....

Wanted to give this game 4.5 stars, because while not yet a 5 star show I think it has great potential to get there.
I freakin love the art work. The babes are smokin hot, and the story is fun and interesting.
Looking forward to seeing more of this one

Pretty good first impression! Consistent and well-defined art style, interesting premise and plenty of h-scenes for a first episode. Definitely worth playing and keeping an eye out for further development. If I was to point out any areas for further improvement it would be the variation in character design. As it stands right now, all of the female characters have quite...extremely generous proportions. It might add quite a bit of variety to have one or more with smaller tits, for example.