This is a tricky one. Really, I'm stuck between 3 and 4 stars on this. Summary:
Good:
- Interesting worldbuilding. The story is long, although that could be a plus or minus especially since it feels like oftentimes the sex scenes are infrequent or repetitive.
- Characters are overall pretty good (and there are many of them) although the dialogue is often awkward. This does a much better job than most VNs of depicting characters that feel realistic (other than being super-horny)... they have their stories, their quirks, and their own relationships with eachother regardless of the MC. And it can be interesting to see how that plays out.
- The artstyle is controversial, but I come down in favor of it. The women are not supposed to all be 10/10 beauties.
Bad:
- Occasional bugs that require frequent saving / resets. This is especially annoying since the bugs feel like a dev skill issue, they all relate to how scripted scenes are triggered... basically every now and then if you trigger a scene by standing on the "wrong" tile, it will lock the game. I've played many RPGMaker games and have never encountered this issue so frequently, so I think it must be a problem with how the dev's scripting style. I noticed in the last chapter or two this became less of an issue since I think the dev made it so that when a scene is triggered the MC would always be teleported to the "right" tile - cool, please go back and implement this in the earlier chapters.
- UI is a bit lacking - no quest/character guide, no gallery, no strong sense of whether you've missed scenes or not. The game isn't hard to progress through, but these would've all been nice to have.
- Cliffhanger ending leaves some frustration, especially when it comes to character lines that clearly are leading to sex eventually but haven't before the episode ends. From what I can tell it's unclear when/if Episode 2 will be completed.
- One thing in particular that irked me about the writing is that the main thing that holds the MC back from fucking everything is that he's married. Yet despite this... he still fucks many of the girls. Yes he has some inner turmoil about this and that's one of the major story themes but like there are occassions where he will fuck girl A, and then when girl B hits on him 5 minutes later all of a sudden it's "oh I'm married, I need to resist". Like okay, I guess that's a good way to draw things out so he isn't like creating a harem by the 2nd chapter but it is wildly inconsistent and quite frankly frustrating.
- Related to the previous point, one general problem that these games can run into when the MC has a girlfriend or some of the girls obviously want monogamy is that it's unclear if the player will ultimately be punished somehow for having sex in an AVG. I hate it when this happens. It's hard to tell if it applies here... from the gallery at the end it does seem like I missed some scenes and maybe that's because fucking girl A means you can't fuck girl B? No clue, and there's not really a guide to help navigate this.
- My personal "this doesn't appeal enough to my fetishes" complaint is that I was hoping that there would be a stronger corruption theme to the game overall. There is this running theme that monogamy will break down in the post-apocalyptic society, but you don't really see it go very far. Casual nudity, public sex, open relationships... it would've been hot to see more focus on this, and seeing various characters come to embrace it. I think there were more teases of this in the beginning, but it sorta took a backseat to developing the main plot.
I'm hovering between giving this 3 stars or 4 stars, I'll go with 4 ultimately since the main bad point (bugs) are fixable, although I'm not sure if it will actually be fixed. I really am looking forward to Episode 2, though, if it's completed.
Good:
- Interesting worldbuilding. The story is long, although that could be a plus or minus especially since it feels like oftentimes the sex scenes are infrequent or repetitive.
- Characters are overall pretty good (and there are many of them) although the dialogue is often awkward. This does a much better job than most VNs of depicting characters that feel realistic (other than being super-horny)... they have their stories, their quirks, and their own relationships with eachother regardless of the MC. And it can be interesting to see how that plays out.
- The artstyle is controversial, but I come down in favor of it. The women are not supposed to all be 10/10 beauties.
Bad:
- Occasional bugs that require frequent saving / resets. This is especially annoying since the bugs feel like a dev skill issue, they all relate to how scripted scenes are triggered... basically every now and then if you trigger a scene by standing on the "wrong" tile, it will lock the game. I've played many RPGMaker games and have never encountered this issue so frequently, so I think it must be a problem with how the dev's scripting style. I noticed in the last chapter or two this became less of an issue since I think the dev made it so that when a scene is triggered the MC would always be teleported to the "right" tile - cool, please go back and implement this in the earlier chapters.
- UI is a bit lacking - no quest/character guide, no gallery, no strong sense of whether you've missed scenes or not. The game isn't hard to progress through, but these would've all been nice to have.
- Cliffhanger ending leaves some frustration, especially when it comes to character lines that clearly are leading to sex eventually but haven't before the episode ends. From what I can tell it's unclear when/if Episode 2 will be completed.
- One thing in particular that irked me about the writing is that the main thing that holds the MC back from fucking everything is that he's married. Yet despite this... he still fucks many of the girls. Yes he has some inner turmoil about this and that's one of the major story themes but like there are occassions where he will fuck girl A, and then when girl B hits on him 5 minutes later all of a sudden it's "oh I'm married, I need to resist". Like okay, I guess that's a good way to draw things out so he isn't like creating a harem by the 2nd chapter but it is wildly inconsistent and quite frankly frustrating.
- Related to the previous point, one general problem that these games can run into when the MC has a girlfriend or some of the girls obviously want monogamy is that it's unclear if the player will ultimately be punished somehow for having sex in an AVG. I hate it when this happens. It's hard to tell if it applies here... from the gallery at the end it does seem like I missed some scenes and maybe that's because fucking girl A means you can't fuck girl B? No clue, and there's not really a guide to help navigate this.
- My personal "this doesn't appeal enough to my fetishes" complaint is that I was hoping that there would be a stronger corruption theme to the game overall. There is this running theme that monogamy will break down in the post-apocalyptic society, but you don't really see it go very far. Casual nudity, public sex, open relationships... it would've been hot to see more focus on this, and seeing various characters come to embrace it. I think there were more teases of this in the beginning, but it sorta took a backseat to developing the main plot.
I'm hovering between giving this 3 stars or 4 stars, I'll go with 4 ultimately since the main bad point (bugs) are fixable, although I'm not sure if it will actually be fixed. I really am looking forward to Episode 2, though, if it's completed.