VN - Ren'Py - A Mother's Love [Part 1-15 Plus] [OrbOrigin]

This game is amazing. Nicole is sweet and lovable. The story is fun and every side character feels alive. Like u actually care about them. John and beesman are very well written and great antagonist/rivals. Very well driven story and deserves the 5* i give it. There is also ntr so thats a plus for me.

The end just makes you want more... Can't wait to see where the story takes me. A lot of choices, maybe a bit too much sometimes because I needed to make a lot of saves but that is just because I want to get the best possible ending. This game makes you love a couple characters and hate others so its a good game that makes you emotionally envolved.

great story, amazing renders ,cannot wait for the next update,wish there was more choices in the game but overall a great story , hope we dont have to wait long for the next update, i have not finnished this update yet,but at the same time i cannot wait for the next update ,i wish you all the best and thank you for the game,good luck.

Overall bad writing, NTR is not avoidable (The """""Vilain"""""" fuck/rape the LI by Day21-22), animations are mid, gives of kind of an NTR vibe all along, too much empty dialogues, graphics are mid, story is pretty shitty and you can easily guess the plot

John's shit game. And the ending especially, just fuck this shit game. It kept on going with John. That plot is garbage.

It was fine at the start because I thought we could get the typical cuck the husband stuff but no. Honestly, a waste of time.

The renders are of good quality, especially in the more recent chapters, and the characters have striking visuals and well-defined personalities. The protagonist, in particular, is captivating and nuanced, making each interaction more interesting.

The story progresses a bit slowly at first, but rewards the patient player with strong emotional moments and decisions that truly matter.

The adult content is well-done, with a good variety of scenes and fetishes, although at times it feels a bit repetitive or lacking more polished animations.....

I never post reviews, but I had to make an exception for this game. I usually nitpick games based on animations quality which in this game is not great, BUT when it comes to the story and characters, it just sucked me in. For me the story is easily 10/10, in each game I tend to turn towards the harem routes, but here it was different. I was captivated by the main LI and couldn't bring myself to go for others. Also I am glad that NTR is avoidable.
Animations: 4/10
Story: 10/10
Characters 10/10

I would rate this 0 stars if I could, it's not a good porn game. The porn is good, the models are great and generally the look of mostly everything is at least good enough, but I just cannot stand John. At all. "A Mothers Love" is a lie, as is the description of the game. It's all about John. John, John, John...."John's Bad Story" is far more accurate of a title.

I would pay good money to play this game if the entire John "sub-plot" was cut out. I don't want to see it, so why is it the only thing the game wants to focus on after the first few chapters? And it just kept going deeper and deeper into it. It's like the writer realized they ran out of things to write about Linda and couldn't come up with anything, so instead it's basically written like an NTR story, but where John is and isn't the main character. It's infuriating.

At one point, I just felt like if I see John one more time in the next minute, I'll alt+f4 at that moment, then BOOM there he is, and I was out. I wasn't kidding about this feeling like an NTR VN where you watch are the cuck and John is the MC, even though it's supposed to be the exact opposite according to the description. Write the cuck as unlikeable as you want, I'm all for it, but NOT LIKE THAT. JUST NO. My god, I can't even put it into words, I just hate him as a character so much that all other enjoyment the game could have given me is just gone.

So good job, if this were rated for how hateable that character is, this would get a 100/10, but as it stands, it takes talent to write someone that hateable. Too bad I don't play porn games to hate things. I was even kind of exited about finally finding a game where the two lead characters were the ones who had the majority of all sex scenes, too bad the worst character in the history of fiction wants to have the rest of them.

Just a note for any devs reading this review, just in case. Don't do what this game does. I have no idea why it's so highly rated, but I'm certain they either are in it for the renders or they don't care about characters, just the story. Because the story itself is good, but the writer is HELL BENT on NOT CHOOSING A GOD DAMN DIRECTION. I don't care which you choose to write, but DON'T WRITE THIS TONE FLIPPING GARBAGE. GOD DAMN it's THE WORST type of writing possible.

Amazing game, I haven't finished it but feels like a lot of things happened, the dynamic is amazing, the back story is amazing, the character, the drama, the CG is well thought, even tho it's not as polished, it's Enough. and how realisic it is about choices, amazing game, and it's not even finished, they still need add music and stuff, but without it I've been feeling good with the stories, even I cried.

The story is a bit fantastical but overall is pretty good. Nicole is very sweet, in fact their whole interaction is sweet even with high corruption. But low corruption is probably best.
I hope the dev continues to develop the story well.

A game that in the end didn't drive me crazy.
I decided to play it because I saw a good rating, I really liked how the mother was portrayed and I thought the story was interesting (becoming the mother's lover).

In the end, for me, the most lacking part was precisely the story that never grabbed me. First of all, I didn't like Chloe, the daughter and my girlfriend, who I left as soon as possible and continued only with the mother.
First of all, the story is very boring and not very credible when it talks about what John and Beeman, Chloe's professor, her lover, do. Their part is so bad that it becomes absurd and not very credible, making all interest in the story fall. I imagined a story where there would be more corruption, the possibility of setting up parallel stories with other women or increasing the level of corruption of Nicole, the mother, maybe doing threesomes, pushing her to swing with other couples or making her become a lewd even with other men, but all this is not there, there is only a very linear, romantic story, where in the end the two will have a child together (I imagine the daughter whose brother's father is her peer and ex-boyfriend).

The drawings are nice, especially those of Nicole, the mother, who I find very beautiful, sensual and classy, but the sexual relationships are not so interesting and hot.

Not the best game of this genre. I agree with those who wrote that it would be nice to take Nicole, one of the most beautiful MILFs I have seen and put her in a better game, with a more interesting story and more exciting erotic parts.

Like the story. The animations are reasonably good, although could be smoother. Artwork is very nice. The balance of story to H scenes is well done. There are some issues with pseudo-realism, but they're not bad enough to quit. Am giving AML a 5 because I believe it rates better than a 4.

If you love an engaging story and deep characters with a range of emotion, and a thrilling series of events, then you will love this AVN. I had some doubts at first, and a few moments I wanted the MC to just die because he's a moron, but personal feelings and the 'what I would do' moments (having been in similar situations) aside, it is a wild rollercoaster ride.

The deeper you get into this story the more it develops into something more. If you're into the erotic there's plenty of great scenes that blend into the story, almost too much for my personal taste, but I enjoy a good story above being a fapaholic.

Sure the render quality isn't what some of the higher end AVN's show, but it's easy to sacrifice the high quality visual if the story and characters are high quality, in my opinion. Some things can be sacrificed if it means not waiting 1 to 2 years per episode.

The dialog is good, but the English grammar is a little choppy. This isn't a big distraction from the story though. Also there's no audio track, but better no audio than bad audio. Which is fine if you have your own playlist for these AVN's to play in the background. I give this 5 stars (because 4.5 star rating isn't possible) as it's great but not quite perfect.

If you're looking for a quick wank or porn clips with no story than I suggest ignoring this and visit a porn site. This is an Adult Visual Novel and the 1 star reviews seem to be from fapaholics looking for a certain instant gratification. No judgement, to each their own, just don't turn on a rock radio station and then complain all they play is rock (relax, it's an analogy, if you get it you get it, if not it wasn't meant for you).

I'm almost in love with Nicole! OMG this is the best game that fully describes the emotion/action change of FC, from the love of husband migrating to MC, in a rather slow but touching step. 5 thumbs up! Hopefully one day I can play it on steam!

Excellent game, Excellent story, Excellent art work , very sexy models, have a great suspense,Got abandoned for some time but came back with a great banger update with lots of scenes and suspense............................................

Review of Part 1-15+

So uh, this game kinda doesn't live up to the description. You indeed start by corrupting your girlfriend's mother, but it then changes to some weird half-romance scenario and abandons all pretenses of blackmail and corruption. Which is kinda sad, because that's what got me into the game. So yeah, as game progressed the theme completelly changed.

Besides that, it sometimes fells purposelly dragged. I mean, the beginnings was rather fast, and Nicole (the main female character we're.. corrupting) gave in suprisingly fast, but then it became more about affair, as I already mentioned. At this point we started to get more story from all characters around MC, and while so far everything is connected and has (at least some) sense, I do feel like certain parts of the story were added only for the sake of wasting time before proceeding with main plot (like for example the entire Urn situation with Abi). Yes it does have certain connections to main characters, but it also feels like just unnecessary addition. Or why stretch the one day beach trip so much? Yes yes, many sex scenes with Nicole there, but why even put them all at this one point of time? Why not move main plot instead? Or even the latest update. Someone literally told MC something like "I know you're doing something incredibly important and I know you have much to plan, but it's late today, so take Nicole on a date". Really? REALLY? And they went on a date, so last scenes of this update became completelly meaningless excuse to drag things even further.

There were also moments when I basically wanted to scream from frustration. Like at least three chapters worth of bad things could've been avoided if MC at one point called the police instead of being A FUCKING IDIOT. But no, after him and some other character were beaten up, imprisoned and kept at gun point he not only let himself be persuaded of doing nothing in like 2 setences, but from that point onwards did everything in his power to NOT involve any authorities. And of course just a while later the same perpetrator made even worse mess. Wow, who'd have thought? I get argument "this is a porn game, so expect a porn game logic", but it does not justify wrting the most idiotic situations possible just because.

Nothing much to pick on visual side tho. The game is few year old and it shows, especially in the beginning. But there is progress here, and Nicole model is gorgeous from the very beginning.

Lastly, some complaints about a few smaller yet persistent issues, that won't let me ejnoy the game as I should:

1. For the entire game Chloe refues to have bareback sex with the MC. Yes, this isn't the game about Chloe and maybe it wouldn't be such a big problem, but if you go NTR route with her, she let's Beeman fuck her raw since the very beginning. It feels very unjust and I fail to see why it has to be like this.

2. After Nicole got pregnant, she started to insist MC won't cum inside her. Seriously, why??? At this point the "damage" is done, so it would be actually best time to not make fuss about the creampies, but she does the opposite...

3. 15 episodes, full blown affair, both Mark and Nicole told they love each other, yet he keeps referring to her as "Mrs. Heavens". Does this make any sense to refer to your lover with her husbands' last name the entire time? There even is special variable to count times he spoke to her using her name, because the only moments MC is allowe to do this are occasional choices and only if player picks it. Seriously, that's riddiculous.

If i download a game about sleeping with my girlfriends mom via blackmailing and abusing her i dont understand why i would care about my girlfriends father doing pretty much the exact same thing. Also strange decision that you can only sleep with 3 of the like 10 characters, maybe next one i can play as John so i get more than a weird story justifying my objectively poor moral position by cucking my girlfriend by blackmailing her mom?

A perfect example of how untrustworthy the rating system is. I dropped this one after less than an hour due to the terrible English and overall poor writing. I shouldn't feel like I'm watching amateur actors reading from a bad porn script when I'm reading your VN.

Hard to feel invested in this game after awhile. I wanted to see what would happen, but the MC is so fucking dumb its hard to even read. He lacks any common sense or logical thinking skills. Waaaaay too much focus on John, who is an awful person. But uhh the MC did basically the same shit to Nicole and has the audacity to be like "nuh uh, I am nothing like you!". Then the plot just focuses on John for what feels like forever. Animations are mid at best, renders are decent, story is dog water, and lack of sound is disappointing, but not a huge deal. All in all, I cannot fathom why this game has so many 5 star reviews. Also, maybe this is just me being a grammar Nazi, but holy hell the fucking English looks like someone used some backwater translator to figure out the words.

i miLF single women focused corruptionAVN done right, the writing is not exceptional nor are the renders animation great, but this is what I call a perfect quick fap avn, don't go expecting a gold and you will enmjiooy it for what it is