I can't really complain about the artwork or the presentation as it is all pretty solid and it's clear the dev is talented, If you are into corruption games without any logic (and yes, I know, that is most corruption games), then you might like this.
To begin with, the friend's hatred of the MC and the bold faced attempt at trying to steal his wife doesn't make any sense. Where did it all come from? And the MC's ex girlfriend... whatever... another attempt to add drama to the couple's life. Now they are getting it from all sides. The friend, her job, his ex, his father's company is in the toilet... I mean, where are their friends? Are they all so jealous and have no lives they just feel like they have to fuck with this couple?
I guess, for me, there are so many well written adult VNs out there, that this whole story seems to be just mailing it it. The idea for this story is simple, add a new character and make sure they have it in for the couple, and then let them loose.
I mean, I tried playing the MC straight... he didn't mess with the girl at the gym and yet his wife treated him like there was some kind of affair. Again, the gym girl is part of some elaborate plot at bringing the couple down. It's just silly.
For once, I would like to see a VN where the husband has a fighting chance to keep his marriage intact. If he plays it straight and loyal, give him the ability to fight back... but no... they always loose in these VNs. So unoriginal.
Having said all of that, it does have some decent bones and it could be something pretty good. And again, as I said at the beginning, the dev is talented and they are producing regular updates, and speaking as a failed developer, I totally respect the work.
If you like corruption games and if you like the cuck experience, give it a download; from that perspective it is pretty good.
To begin with, the friend's hatred of the MC and the bold faced attempt at trying to steal his wife doesn't make any sense. Where did it all come from? And the MC's ex girlfriend... whatever... another attempt to add drama to the couple's life. Now they are getting it from all sides. The friend, her job, his ex, his father's company is in the toilet... I mean, where are their friends? Are they all so jealous and have no lives they just feel like they have to fuck with this couple?
I guess, for me, there are so many well written adult VNs out there, that this whole story seems to be just mailing it it. The idea for this story is simple, add a new character and make sure they have it in for the couple, and then let them loose.
I mean, I tried playing the MC straight... he didn't mess with the girl at the gym and yet his wife treated him like there was some kind of affair. Again, the gym girl is part of some elaborate plot at bringing the couple down. It's just silly.
For once, I would like to see a VN where the husband has a fighting chance to keep his marriage intact. If he plays it straight and loyal, give him the ability to fight back... but no... they always loose in these VNs. So unoriginal.
Having said all of that, it does have some decent bones and it could be something pretty good. And again, as I said at the beginning, the dev is talented and they are producing regular updates, and speaking as a failed developer, I totally respect the work.
If you like corruption games and if you like the cuck experience, give it a download; from that perspective it is pretty good.