VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - A Small Home [v0.5] [DX Games]

(v0.5)

The game has a lot of potential, I like the art style, even If it is a bit consistent, but right now there Is very little content and pretty sure a lot of it got reused as we went on, when its fully released I will 100% give it another shot

Nice game. Very short updates and the graphics could use some tidying up (not change just enhancing). But, very interesting story especially the last twist (I LOVE IT!). For that I'm giving 5 stars. Good work and good luck.

[v0.5]

I like the art style. It's unpolished, but it has a certain erotic appeal.

That's about it though. The writing is garbage. It's basically just a series of one line statements of what happens.

I played video games.
I heard a moan.
I went to check mom.
"Mom, are you ok."
"Yes, I'm ok. Go back to playing your game."
I went back to play games.
I heard another moan.
I went back to check.
"Are you ok?"
"YES Don't bother me!"
"Whatever."
I went back to play games.

I made that up, but this is the style of writing you find in this game.

What's in the game currently is mystery NTR from son's POV. With the above writing, there is pretty much nothing erotic about this. The dev just can't write and is obviously not an English speaker.

Maybe once the mom's POV is in the game, there might be a bit more to the scenes, but I seriously doubt it. This dev just doesn't have the skills to write erotic scenes with a nice build up.

Started good but the mother got fully corrupted after the first scene. So the game is pretty much completed.

Summary:
- not much content
- not really a corruption game
- no netorare
+/- okay-ish art
+ frequent updates (around every 2 months)

Not really a game. Just a couple of clicks for some costume options and that's it. Not worth the download bandwidth.

Doesn't allow any roaming or selecting anything. In terms of the initial option of selecting from which viewpoint the story shows it's just another option just for the sake of having a clickable option.

Good game with a robust pace and above average art

Not very hard NTR as of 0.3, fairly standard in corruption of the Mother character. MC is suspicious something is up but neither the Boss's Son or the Mother are necessarily rubbing it in the MC's face as of yet.

Look forward to more

[v0.2]
You are cucked by your landlady?..
Not GF/wife/mom...

-Story, Originality
Some little story. And MC even suspect something! Wow.

-Renders
Pictures have some mid-tier style.
Not bad, but not beautiful.

-Sound
Some music, some h-sounds (not so many).

-Playability
Can finish it in 10-15 minutes.
No replayability yet.

-Performance
It works.

-Bugs
Didn't see any.

-Animations
Still images only.

-Voice Acting
No voices.

-Grammar
Didn't see any mistakes.

-Amount of content
3-5 h-scenes, but "no boob, only eyes" (like in the meme). I personaly don't understand what so interesting in not seeing h-scenes, but "visual hints" for them (there are several games that made "cuck" perspective more exiting, by showing h-scenes, but from other angles/through the wall/while "cuck" is not looking and so on).

However there should be perspective of a landlady and "chad" (with the most content).
If the other perspectives and game overal will have the same lenght/number of h-scenes then it is too little.
But if there are at least ~10 or more h-scenes per perspective, then it is "okay", I guess.

In terms of setting this is exactly the kind of NTR game I like: incest corruption + voyeurism + mystery/hidden scenes with a decent build-up. Unfortunately the game as a whole turned out to be disappointing.

The artwork is okay but the characters are a bit too goofy/cartoony for a porn game. This may be just a personal preference though.

However, what annoyed me most is that the game is REALLY barebones in terms of writing and visuals. In its current form the game could use a 'text-based' tag since a lot of scenes just use the same standard picture while everything that happens is described. This would be ok if the writing was any good, but it's very flat, full of errors and as the game progressess it looks more and more like simple notes instead of actual story and dialogue.

Could be promising but the visuals and the writing would both need A LOT of (re)work.