RPGM A Struggle with Sin [v0.5.8.7] [Chyos]

[zARRR]

Yeah... I'm super lazy. I am so lazy I can't even be more lazy. Because if I do that it means I'm dead. And I am already dead inside, so that's really close.
But we can still dream about my game being finished... in teaser/demo version. Hah.

I am also dead inside but I just gave up, ah!
Maybe in another dimension the game is fully released and a newbie Chyos is struggling at releasing a demon.
If you publish a teaser we call ourselves satisfied.

Well, you ain't the only one. Nobody likes walls of text. It's just tiredsome at the very begining, because... it's too much of text. But if you cut that text into few paragraphs, throw a dialogue here and there, character changing thier poses or moving thier mouths during dialoges, maybe some movement in the background, it's way easier to read, because something is happening. Sadly, there are cases when that wall of text is really needed, because you need to explain something important.

Wall texts can be fun or entertaining if built over a looming sense of mystery or a gut wrenching emotional moment… or if they are simply well written (Star wars literally starts with a wall text, but there curiousity and movement play a major role), but ASWS would probably suffer from it.
Chyos style is more fast, short sentences, impactful weight on plot twists, no unwieldy speeches on the aspects of the world and gods.
Wall of text can be found only in books and letters thorough out the game, which are expected to be heavy on word counting.
An ASWS VN wouldn’t work at all, Chyos ain’t that able to create an only VN structured game, pen essay Goethe style, the charm of ASWS it’s in his classic RPG characteristics, with whimsical circumstances and moving world.

 

[acowasto]

Wall texts can be fun or entertaining if built over a looming sense of mystery or a gut wrenching emotional moment… or if they are simply well written (Star wars literally starts with a wall text, but there curiousity and movement play a major role), but ASWS would probably suffer from it.
Chyos style is more fast, short sentences, impactful weight on plot twists, no unwieldy speeches on the aspects of the world and gods.
Wall of text can be found only in books and letters thorough out the game, which are expected to be heavy on word counting.
An ASWS VN wouldn’t work at all, Chyos ain’t that able to create an only VN structured game, pen essay Goethe style, the charm of ASWS it’s in his classic RPG characteristics, with whimsical circumstances and moving world.

My teacher always said: "You have to increase the pace with your words alongside the pace of the situation. If you write a heated argument between lovers don't use long sentences, even as narrator. Few words at best. Cut thier dialogues, they are arguing after all. If your main character is in the middle of battle, sweating, bleeding, fighting, don't write long sentences, don't write a wall of text about his state of mind. He is in danger, he might be dead in a second. He's fighting for his life. Use short sentences, even single words if needed. /He pulled his sword. Stabbbed man in front. Looked right. Left. Another man comming. He pulled his sword. Blocked enemy strike./ And don't treat your potential readers as retards, you don't have to explain everything to them. They will get it or reread the situation if needed."

Books and letters are understandable. They have to be long in order to provide players with more information in the shortest time possible. But, if I have to be honest, I did not even tried to read books and letters in ASS. After few words I just stopped. That font is making my eyes bleed.

 

[zARRR]

My teacher always said: "You have to increase the pace with your words alongside the pace of the situation. If you write a heated argument between lovers don't use long sentences, even as narrator. Few words at best. Cut thier dialogues, they are arguing after all. If your main character is in the middle of battle, sweating, bleeding, fighting, don't write long sentences, don't write a wall of text about his state of mind. He is in danger, he might be dead in a second. He's fighting for his life. Use short sentences, even single words if needed. /He pulled his sword. Stabbbed man in front. Looked right. Left. Another man comming. He pulled his sword. Blocked enemy strike./ And don't treat your potential readers as retards, you don't have to explain everything to them. They will get it or reread the situation if needed."

Who the fuck was your teacher Robin Williams?

Books and letters are understandable. They have to be long in order to provide players with more information in the shortest time possible. But, if I have to be honest, I did not even tried to read books and letters in ASS. After few words I just stopped. That font is making my eyes bleed.

Sad!
I took a lot of time writing some of those!
I could suggest a choice to give an option for an understandable font, some games do that, like Pentiment.

 

[ex]

Does anybody know if the update 0.5.6.5 has the option to get bimbo Liandra in the camp route or is that something that will come in a future update?

 

[DeminPatyon]

Does anybody know if the update 0.5.6.5 has the option to get bimbo Liandra in the camp route or is that something that will come in a future update?

Yes it has the option to bimbo up Liandra

 

[acowasto]

Who the fuck was your teacher Robin Williams?

Dunno. Was he capable of turning into a woman? Because she was a TILF alright. Sadly, live ain't a porn game.

Sad!
I took a lot of time writing some of those!
I could suggest a choice to give an option for an understandable font, some games do that, like Pentiment.

Sorry not sorry! But I like my eyes way too much to try reading those undreadable hand-made looking fonts.
Sometimes you need to do something immersion breaking in order to be... not annoying.

 

[zARRR]

Dunno. Was he capable of turning into a woman? Because she was a TILF alright. Sadly, live ain't a porn game.

Are you saying Robin Williams wasn’t a TILF? What are you some kind of heathen?
Never met a TILF irl, but that’s a good excuse for adding one in the university if they still hire female professors.
I know there is at least one bangable stundent, and maybe a milf teacher.
Or it’s a typical medieval university and no women as professors.

Sorry not sorry! But I like my eyes way too much to try reading those undreadable hand-made looking fonts.
Sometimes you need to do something immersion breaking in order to be... not annoying.

Try harder, imagine all poor historians try to read sources.
Immersion breaks at some point, I get it, I’ll suggest for a readable font then.

 

[Shadowesnay]

Excuse me but does anyone know how I can get this event?

 

[WrathofAchilles]

Stumbled onto this game; and been loving it, (40ish hours in atm and just taking my time), but I gotta ask...

What's the BGM or music track that plays when you fight boss battles? I've heard it twice so far. When fighting Imawyn and when fighting Gurtak.

I'd love to know the name of this track.

Thanks so much!

 

[Baki-san18]

I've been thinking about something recently and I'd like to know your opinion on it.
So, I'll start by saying that if you choose incest mode or not, then our father will be either Marcus or another person (I don't remember his name, if it was indicated in the letter, of course), this is over, so (it's kind of possible) in general, the biological parents of MC (or just mom (depending on the choice of incest)) are you alive, so is there any chance that the MC will have a brother or (another) sister?

 

[acowasto]

Are you saying Robin Williams wasn’t a TILF? What are you some kind of heathen?

Well... yes? At least on the heathen part. I believe in Don'tFuckingCare'ism.

Never met a TILF irl, but that’s a good excuse for adding one in the university if they still hire female professors.
I know there is at least one bangable stundent, and maybe a milf teacher.
Or it’s a typical medieval university and no women as professors.

Well, then I'm going to ruin your day, cause I had THREE TILF's in my school. Well... third is rather questionable though.

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Try harder, imagine all poor historians try to read sources.
Immersion breaks at some point, I get it, I’ll suggest for a readable font then.

I'll gladly rise a glass in thier name as they endured such suffering so I don't have to.

As for the "readable font, I just think having more readable font, not looking that fancy would be great. But, to actually "decrease the workload" on it maybe maybe first try by adding a outline first, because:

Stumbled onto this game; and been loving it, (40ish hours in atm and just taking my time), but I gotta ask...

What's the BGM or music track that plays when you fight boss battles? I've heard it twice so far. When fighting Imawyn and when fighting Gurtak.

I'd love to know the name of this track.

Thanks so much!

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[Plvy1n]

Who knows if there is a gallery where you can see all the scenes or not?

 

[The Senior Perv]

Who knows if there is a gallery where you can see all the scenes or not?

 

[Deleted member 6593176]

Excuse me but does anyone know how I can get this event?

Files for this event

 

[zARRR]

Well... yes? At least on the heathen part. I believe in Don'tFuckingCare'ism.

You’ll fuck Robin Williams and you’ll be happy; I’ll try to add it as a possible LI just for this conversation.
Nah I won’t be that evil, but a teacher LI maybe, maybe with glasse, we have only one glasses girl.

Well, then I'm going to ruin your day, cause I had THREE TILF's in my school. Well... third is rather questionable though.

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Nay you are lying, I refuse to believe thee, hot teachers don‘t exists, last one sounds like she came straight out of a VN; what is your life? An abandoned porn game where the dev did yet add teacher content?

I'll gladly rise a glass in thier name as they endured such suffering so I don't have to.

As for the "readable font, I just think having more readable font, not looking that fancy would be great. But, to actually "decrease the workload" on it maybe maybe first try by adding a outline first, because:
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I’ll see what I can do, worst case none or comic sans

 

[BroembroemBoris]

hello everone i play with the walkthrough but i cannot find toren on kate stroy at all does anyone have information about this

Touch her butt during the day for three days and in the evening Toren will arrive

 

[zARRR]

Touch her butt during the day for three days and in the evening Toren will arrive

You don’t need to touch the butt at all.
You have to start the minigame after saying your relationship is official and after you approved or disapproved Kate’s dancing skills.

 

[Dole]

he should be here

On the right side.

 

[rosethorn87]

So like I said before I lost my 200hr save were I ground myself up to max level, but when the next version drops im starting from scratch and that cheat book is being used lol.

How many of you use the cheat book? I only used it a little in my old save to round the MC's stats out etc

And is it possible for the game to have an iron man mode? its how I played it with a single save

 

[acowasto]

You’ll fuck Robin Williams and you’ll be happy; I’ll try to add it as a possible LI just for this conversation.

As a... uhm... a evil creature(?) with PhD in Necromancy and Undead-Human interactions I can tell you already it ain't happening. Human skeleton doesn't have holes small enough for me.

Nah I won’t be that evil, but a teacher LI maybe, maybe with glasse, we have only one glasses girl.

If we won't have in Kirlic University a hot female professor teaching magic which we can seduce and undress with magical spells I'm going to... be very upset about it.

Nay you are lying, I refuse to believe thee, hot teachers don‘t exists, last one sounds like she came straight out of a VN; what is your life? An abandoned porn game where the dev did yet add teacher content?

I wish I was. But you will find your TILF.