VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - A Summer to Remember [v0.04] [jax63]

As an advance for a good ending. A story easy to understand, without time wasting plot, a really good and a coluorful graphic and attractive characters. Well, the figure of the trainer should be changed.

I have to say to the creator of this game you are best, the story is good and the pictures is very good to (soo hot) are very hot the exhibition and taken to the extreme here and I loved it you are to be congratulated I hope that more people can see this game and help in the patreon because you deserves to create a story and characters as good as these please continue to put on more and more exciting clothes and exhibitionists in the game

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs...

(03/01/2018 - Original Review - v0.01)

This is an interesting and different take on a reverse corruption visual novel/game...

The visuals of the characters are fairly decent, although the poses by some of the female characters look like they are in constant states of seduction... That might be on purpose, even though they did make me chuckle a bit because of how ridiculous and exaggerated some of the facial expressions look... Such as the lady the protagonist is living with, she is constantly licking her teeth when smiling or opening her mouth... Or when the neighbor, Sam, first visited her mouth was gaping wide open when she winked... The backdrops are a mix of unique looking and some that looked like I'ld seen them before... Most of the character facial expressions, including the protagonist, almost seem like they are either purposefully trying to look a bit funny looking to get a laugh, or they are just overly exaggerated on accident? Can't really tell...

The script is ok, but has a lot of broken English here and there as well as a few spelling/grammar errors... The plot revolves around a male protagonist who has moved in with his old neighbor (even though the words used in the text say he's moving next to her not in with her) while he attends college courses... He took off a year after High School to get into shape, because he's a virgin and wants to look and feel better...

Every woman he runs into, except the last one, seems to be in a constant state of flirtation, at least visually... The last woman can either be avoided (even though later text sounds as though he was caught when he wasn't) or he can stick around and watch her half naked in the pool, which he gets caught doing... And after being caught she talks a bit oddly... Claiming she needs to be paid to be seen naked, so I don't know if that is trying to imply her profession or if she's just promiscuous and wants money... The dialogue for that whole scene may need a revisit, as it sounds a bit off and confusing...

I also ran into an issue once where a woman was speaking to the protagonist, yet the protagonists name was showing instead of the character who was actually speaking...

Overall, this is definitely a unique take on a corruption themed VN/Game, but in reverse... You have a somewhat naïve and horny virgin, who all the women find attractive and they flirt with him or appear to be attempting to seduce him, but he either isn't fully catching on, or he is just slowly being corrupted... As this is still early in production, it's not too bad for a beginning... It shows some potential, but the text needs a lot more proofreading and re-translation/interpretation... I still can't tell if the visuals are trying to be somewhat satirically funny on purpose, or if they are just accidentally looking that way... There are a few moments here and there, where the story also feels a bit rushed... But if the author's can get over some of the hurdles I mentioned already and fix them, I can see this being a fun VN/Game to read/play... Only time will tell, and I'll have to revisit it somewhere down the line...

(04/20/2018 - Review Update - v0.02)

Well, the new content is about on par with the prior content... The protagonist shows more and more that he is new to sexual relationships as well as interacting romantically with women in general... He is basically taken under the wing of the older women, and doesn't get along well with the one closer to his age... In fact, the 24 woman he meets at the pool has all sorts of attitude and acts more like a teenager then an adult...

You can pretty much tell this VN/Game is all about the sexual stuff... Not much in the way of a deep story at all... Several new fetishes are explored in this latest content, and he learns some new experiences... The protagonist is basically at the whims of the women... There are some more peeping choices, but he's a pretty clueless guy much of the time, with his only prior sexual experience being porn he's watched...

The text is a bit better this go around, although it still has a tiny bit of proofreading needed still... The visuals of the new women characters are a bit over proportioned in certain body parts, which looks a bit unrealistic sometimes, especially the gym instructor... There is a new short animation this go around as well...

The story really isn't all that great, but it's ok for what it is, a B-rated porn story... I will most likely not re-visit it, as the women body proportions are just not something I'm into... Best of luck to the developers...