WOMANpukumaru

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I personally don't like the character a whole lot, honestly. Her design is "physically" super adorable milf stuff.
Problem for me is she's really mean and manipulative, and the way the game sets it up you have to FAIL to get her questline going. We're basically being used the entire time. Allaway best girl, or potentially the cute hentai store girl in 20 years when she's worked on. I also like the sister stuff a bit but only because I can sorta personally relate to some of it.
A lot of characters in this game are kinda grating and that Jack stuff didn't even get proper resolution.
It is true that the mom is kind of an annoying manipulative emotional selfish bitch who is obviously fucked in the head.

In that sense it kind of makes things more “realistic” in a way? It kind of uniquely feels like trying to get with

She also has moments of complexity that you don’t often see in these games. Like the fact she’s kind of emotionally taking out her empty nest syndrome on you, while also dealing with abuse, while also being extremely clingy. The way she handled her abuse,

The fact that you had to progress by NOT giving her what she wants, she gets mad at you and lose all points with her, she tries to push you away and cling to you at the same time.



Plus, unlike allaway you actually do some stuff with her leading up to the sex scene rather than just talking scenes.

It was just a very complex and interesting story to go through, and she is weirdly complex, almost like dealing with a real, emotional selfish character that doesn’t know what she wants.


It kind of feels like this guy based her on his RL mom, like completely. That’s about the only thing I can figure to explain this character.


That said, her design is just TOO MUCH up my alley for me to dislike her. Like, I’m sorry. A thicc brunette mommy with gigantic tits always in a white dress?

I feel you on the having to “fail” to get with her but geeseki seems like he enjoys putting a bunch of unnecessary suffering into these games.

I think I pointed out these things before but the characters mom is being abused, his dad is a switched out abusive doppelgänger, his sister was whoring herself out and is very damaged, he’s been kindapped, arrested, and almost executed. Allaway was being blackmailed. He’s now being kept under surveillance. He went to jail AGAIN.

Like I think geeseki just has some kind of suffering fetishized and he might be into cuckoldry.


Anyway, I think most of the characters in this game are kind of annoying assholes too.

Allaway and the sister are fine, and about the only strength this guy has is having characters with charm to them(the new writer isn’t as good)

Allaway’s Route is kinda boring other than the fact that dating yoir teacher actually had some consequences.


My only issue is, everyone in the game is a snarky asshole. All of them. They all kind of start to blend together.

Allaway, the sister, effie, all have the same personality with slight quirks.

That said the sister is fairly likable and probably the best girl personality wise that we have right now. But she doesn’t have much competition.


Other than that, I’m just hoping for the principal character. Been waiting for the principal character to have content for literally years. She’s about the only girl I’m looking forward to.
 
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WOMANpukumaru

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The fact that the mom is “using” us is also kind of interesting. She NEEDS this. She’s emotionally broken and just has an unhealthy obsession with her son

It’s kind of like yandere, except how it actually looks like.

Plus it plays into how the main character is also kind of an immature mommas boy too. Like, there soemthing actually going on here.



It’s just really complex and interesting rather than the idealized “everyone automatic falls in love with you” TGIF you find in these games.

This is back when he was doing semi regular releases and the moms Route was “interesting” enough that I wanted to see where else he would go. Didn’t think we’d be where we are right now.....
 
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Is the cuck shit avoidable?
I really don't remember any cuckold content. Unless maybe you're counting the father fucking the mother, which would seem to me an odd thing to qualify for cuckoldry. In which case, if you want to do the mom's content, no, you won't be able to prevent her from having sex with her husband.
 
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WOMANpukumaru

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Is the cuck shit avoidable?

Nope not for the most part.

The stuff with rhe sister is mostly avoidable yoibcan avoid seeing her suck another dudes dick,but you can’t avoid her being a camwhore if that bothers you.

The mom will fuck the dad in front of you and then rub it in your face to piss you off, but you can beat him up. He will still abuse the mom tho....

The stuff with allaway is Part of the story. So yeah you get cucked and forced to do what he says.

So I guess, only play the sister route, in the moms story, never stop sucking moms boobs, and don’t even go on a date at night with allaway
 

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Nope not for the most part.

The stuff with rhe sister is mostly avoidable yoibcan avoid seeing her suck another dudes dick,but you can’t avoid her being a camwhore if that bothers you.

The mom will fuck the dad in front of you and then rub it in your face to piss you off, but you can beat him up. He will still abuse the mom tho....

The stuff with allaway is Part of the story. So yeah you get cucked and forced to do what he says.

So I guess, only play the sister route, in the moms story, never stop sucking moms boobs, and don’t even go on a date at night with allaway
The allaway cuck blackmail was removed from the game due to complaints by the users.
Now she just runs drugs for him at night instead, it's referenced later.
The rest is still accurate.
 
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Demon's Crust

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Oh yeah I forgot the allaway stuff was removed.
Without a proper resolution or revenge on that questline I feel like it's better this way.
It'd be nice if you could change the blackmail level depending on your decisions that night, or avoid it entirely.
Like if you walked home you'd avoid it, if you got a ride home you'd get current blackmail, if you kissed you'd get something heavier, and if you got a bj you'd get full cuck blackmail.
And each of those would have a different end, with the latter 2 ending Jack in prison or something.
That is, of course, the subjective ideal endings for me, in my opinion, but like... this game.... never gonna happen.
 

WOMANpukumaru

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Without a proper resolution or revenge on that questline I feel like it's better this way.
It'd be nice if you could change the blackmail level depending on your decisions that night, or avoid it entirely.
Like if you walked home you'd avoid it, if you got a ride home you'd get current blackmail, if you kissed you'd get something heavier, and if you got a bj you'd get full cuck blackmail.
And each of those would have a different end, with the latter 2 ending Jack in prison or something.
That is, of course, the subjective ideal endings for me, in my opinion, but like... this game.... never gonna happen.
Agreed. There should have been a way to influence this.

I personally think we could have had a criminal friend of our own, or we could just destroy his phone

But yeah the fact that you can do nothing and there is no revenge? Bullshit. So yeah, removing it was for the best
 
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WW_Walker

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Bruh, this is a smexy game. Why am I so invested and touched by the story of Miss Allaway. I just want her to be happy and get some good dickin
 
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Out of some sense of morbid curiosity mixed with what I can only assume is the alcohol I've consumed tonight I decided to play this again so I did every other girl's questlines before "Mom's" and FUCK she's so much more annoying than I remembered. God damn.
The others were at least passable but the monologues where the main character's actively deriding himself for not going along with the completely retarded and obtuse expectations that idiot has?
He literally calls himself an "animal with a lust for many women" even if you don't actually mess with anyone except the forced(unavoidable) Effie Scene. I went back and checked! Wut~? Jesus Christ, who wrote this?
Seems like the type of person whose work ethic would only function for 2 minutes a day and that day only comes twice a year.




Oh wait.
 

Qianke

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The argument that if you're not paying for something you're not allowed to talk about it always gets me.
The game is advertised as a free release, with early-release incentives for people who want to give money.
Those who don't give money still get the game for free later on, in other words, you gatekeep criticism on a free product.
In fact, you can't gatekeep criticism PERIOD. That's not how the world works, let alone the internet.
White-knighting what is clearly a lack of direction, professionalism and transparency is just sad though.
There's no getting around criticism, especially when a project is in such a deplorable state, like most Patreon games are.
Games like this have been made in a fraction of the time, and sold for less than some of the donation tiers.
Scrutiny comes from all places, if you're doing something public you'll get yours. Heck, you'll get it if you're in private too.
"Complaining about a game you got for free" doesn't mean anything when the game itself is free, just delayed for non-donors.
Edit: And given how slow and insignificant the updates are you may as well wait it out anyway.
hey man I've just noticed it, can I copy your post and paste it everytime i see shitter like that? is that fine? I'm sorry I've already copied it, you're gonna live forever
 

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hey man I've just noticed it, can I copy your post and paste it everytime i see shitter like that? is that fine? I'm sorry I've already copied it, you're gonna live forever
Lol okay sure, there was someone else who said it all better but this is fine.
 

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you can see the progress of the game here next update will probably come out in mid or late August :

 
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Agreed. There should have been a way to influence this.

I personally think we could have had a criminal friend of our own, or we could just destroy his phone

But yeah the fact that you can do nothing and there is no revenge? Bullshit. So yeah, removing it was for the best
I have to concur, that both instances of the seen and implied NTR just left a bad taste in my mouth after getting through them. As you stated it would have been both more interesting and more satisfying to see Jack get some comeuppance, the fact that he gets away with it scott-free? Fuck that and the horse it rode in on. A possibly better payoff would have been to fight (given that you can actually fight him in the gym's Fight Club) or blackmail Jack forcing him to destroy the evidence of the relationship between the MC and Allaway. Afterwards the player is given the option of reporting Jack to the cops anonymously, letting him leave town with the understanding of he can never return, or an unspoken understanding of not to impede upon the other's business.
 
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WOMANpukumaru

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Just gotta say that allaway story gets props for Like it legit making me feel bad and like question myself

On top of the unpleasant feeling ot gave me

One thing that surprised me was that...I didn’t want her anymore, like, I didn’t want to be involved, and I felt disgust when she was relying on MC



Which was kind of shocking to me since I’ve never felt that way before. That wa a side of myself I didn’t even know I had and I was like “but why, though?” It is kind of fucked up since the MC got her into the situation, and she is the one who will lose the most, and she is the one being forced to do sexual things and she’s in this mess because she’s involved with Mc and yeah, needs him. Like, no doubt about this, it’s xompletely unfair to abandon her and a total dick move.

So I was like “wow am I a shitty person?” On top of the poor taste in my mouth from the NTR

It also got me thinking about NTR and why sometimes I hate it and it makes me feel horrible and sometimes I’m fine with it and can even enjoy stories with it. The criteria seems to be all over the place.

I figured it out but it actually made me think and question myself, even if by accident. So that’s something.




It also made me think about “fucking the hot teacher” thing in a new light, the fact that she’s risking her career and jail time, and t gets way more complicated of there is actually love.

That’s one of the reasons I kind of wish the NTR was still in, just executes better. Becaus it actually gives some weight and consequences to the story.


That might be the strength of this game. Just like how you mom is a total emotionally damaged headcase, that’s probably the type of woman who fucks her own son just because she doesn’t want him to leave the house.


It’s kind of like “what it’s actually like to date your mom/teacher/sister” In other words a bunch of harmful fucked up dysfucntinal toxic relationships
 

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Some of this game has little hints of brilliance and that's why it's such a shame that the developer's a stupid.
The MC and sister stuff I like a lot because I can personally identify with a lot of it, like the crazy bipolar dad(he's from another world yeah but you can just interpret it as being really polar because of the move and such if you haven't done the main quest).
Beyond that, one of my biggest fantasies is this crush I had on one of my teachers when I was younger, and still sorta have, adding dramatic tension to it and making it all movie-like made the storyline for me but it ends without the villain being put away which is trash-tier suddenly. It's so lame.
Maybe I'll get to play 1.0 before I die and I'll have an okay time and give Geeseki $2 in FutureCoin or something.
 
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Alpha 0.24 - What's New?
Hey, perverts.
Nothing new to cover, just that I now have internet so I can now properly work with my team and share the necessary resources for this update.
Above, I've provided just a few snippets of some scenes and h-scenes that I've fully completed and animated.
I'm still working on more art and will continue to do so in the coming week or two.
Here's your reminder and notice for Alpha 0.24:
I will be changing the reward tier so that the new lowest tier that you have to be pledged at to receive the newest update is the $3 tier. No more, $1 pledge with a lifetime of $5. Anything from the $3 tier and over have no changes, this will only affect the $1 tier.
And if you're wondering about when to expect a release, think mid to late August. We will do our best to add and complete as many things on our list.
Thanks you for your continued support and patience.
 
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