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Dr.Fapalot said:
That's not the point I'm making. I am talking about that there is no build-up to the event for PD 13 evening with Sophia/Dylan. It doesn't matter if it's lust or love, you still have to follow a sequence for readers to understand. None of the scenes flow into the next scene with Sophia/Dylan's SEX-ED. If you play Sophia/Ellie, Sophia/Sam, or Sophia/Aiden, their scenes flow into the incoming scene because their scenes are written in such a way they are chronologically synced and the reader can follow.

Sophia/Dylan's scene doesn't contain that same outline. There is no flow. Their scene almost compares to the second side job, where Sophia shows up on day one at the Myers for introduction, and the next day it is "SEX-ED" X-rated style. That's a switch flip, and I think that is what is probably going to happen with Sophia and Dylan during the evening event, and that is how Sophia/Dylan ends up on par or ahead of Sophia/Sam's event. Readers like myself are going to be like huh? that made no sense.
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Didn't they agree on a massage after a run in the park? Is this not a reason for an evening event?
 
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Dr.Fapalot said:
That's not the point I'm making. I am talking about that there is no build-up to the event for PD 13 evening with Sophia/Dylan. It doesn't matter if it's lust or love, you still have to follow a sequence for readers to understand. None of the scenes flow into the next scene with Sophia/Dylan's SEX-ED. If you play Sophia/Ellie, Sophia/Sam, or Sophia/Aiden, their scenes flow into the incoming scene because their scenes are written in such a way they are chronologically synced and the reader can follow.

Sophia/Dylan's scene doesn't contain that same outline. There is no flow. Their scene almost compares to the second side job, where Sophia shows up on day one at the Myers for introduction, and the next day it is "SEX-ED" X-rated style. That's a switch flip, and I think that is what is probably going to happen with Sophia and Dylan during the evening event, and that is how Sophia/Dylan ends up on par or ahead of Sophia/Sam's event. Readers like myself are going to be like huh? that made no sense.
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If there is no flow to the Dylan route, how come it's as popular as it is?
 
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new_user! said:
Didn't they agree on a massage after a run in the park? Is this not a reason for an evening event?
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This should answer your question. That was from PD 12, which Nathalie handled during her active event. This is for PD 13 which there is no run event, but if there is a massage for the evening event, it doesn't fix the no-build-up for the story.

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Dr.Fapalot said:
That's not the point I'm making. I am talking about that there is no build-up to the event for PD 13 evening with Sophia/Dylan. It doesn't matter if it's lust or love, you still have to follow a sequence for readers to understand. None of the scenes flow into the next scene with Sophia/Dylan's SEX-ED. If you play Sophia/Ellie, Sophia/Sam, or Sophia/Aiden, their scenes flow into the incoming scene because their scenes are written in such a way they are chronologically synced and the reader can follow.

Sophia/Dylan's scene doesn't contain that same outline. There is no flow. Their scene almost compares to the second side job, where Sophia shows up on day one at the Myers for introduction, and the next day it is "SEX-ED" X-rated style. That's a switch flip, and I think that is what is probably going to happen with Sophia and Dylan during the evening event, and that is how Sophia/Dylan ends up on par or ahead of Sophia/Sam's event. Readers like myself are going to be like huh? that made no sense.
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Well , I don't see anything as sexual than what Sam and Sophia have developed , going on with Dylan either ; not on day 13 though , but maybe till pd 15 since Dylan is her son and it's not as easy for something sexual to develop between them as with someone who is not related to her like Sam or any other character who is not a relative to her. I think that in pd 13 they will go as far as Sophia allowing Dylan to touch her breasts during a massage and maybe more but only as 'sexual education'.
 
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Shalamar94 said:
Well , I don't see anything as sexual than what Sam and Sophia have developed , going on with Dylan either ; not on day 13 though , but maybe till pd 15 since Dylan is her son and it's not as easy for something sexual to develop between them as with someone who is not related to her like Sam or any other character who is not a relative to her. I think that in pd 13 they will go as far as Sophia allowing Dylan to touch her breasts during a massage and maybe more but only as 'sexual education'.
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I'm confused about what you're saying here. Have you been reading the story from PD 1 - AWAM Part 1?
 
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Dr.Fapalot said:
This should answer your question. That was from PD 12, which Nathalie handled during her active event. This is for PD 13 which there is no run event, but if there is a massage for the evening event, it doesn't fix the no-build-up for the story.

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You understood me correctly. But from the massage to the event is one step. Sophia: "Don't worry, honey. In fact, I get tired of something every day, haha." How can this be interpreted otherwise than "I am always at your service"? Doesn't that create a story? Is there any ambiguity here? Do they need to coordinate the massage scenario? What else would you suggest, for example?
 
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You understood me correctly. But from the massage to the event is one step. Sophia: "Don't worry, honey. In fact, I get tired of something every day, haha." How can this be interpreted otherwise than "I am always at your service"? Doesn't that create a story? Is there any ambiguity here? Do they need to coordinate the massage scenario? What else would you suggest, for example?
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That's an open-end comment, plus that happens after the story at the end of the PD 12 event. How does that comment help develop a build-up of the story from PD 1-12 when it has already passed? You can only use that comment going forward, PD 13 evening, but how does a massage comment help them jump ahead or stay on par with Sam's Pace in PD 13?
 
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Dr.Fapalot said:
That's an open-end comment, plus that happens after the story at the end of the PD 12 event. How does that comment help develop a build-up of the story from PD 1-12 when it has already passed? You can only use that comment going forward, PD 13 evening, but how does a massage comment help them jump ahead or stay on par with Sam's Pace in PD 13?
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You're right, the comment refers to a future Sofia/Dylan event. And we have high hopes for this event, including its results. And besides, Dylan has sooo many events in the near future, so there is reason to expect great results.
 
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So the sam/sofia scene ends for me when he tries to remove the bra. From what i gather there is more. Is this because i missed a point somewhere or because of a choice?
 
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There's no build up for dylan/sophia because you can't justify an incestuous relationship with your son. It has to happen on the spot. Like a tricky unwanted situation or maybe a bit drunk and horny. Because if there is a build up. Sophia will have time to think about the whole situation and will most likely put an end to it. So it has to be spontaneous. Like oups he slipped and slid his dick inside me
 
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:unsure::unsure: Can someone explain the last scene in this update?
Does that mean the event is not over yet and will continue in the next update?
Or it's completely over and we'll have a flashback of this in the next event between Sam and Sophia to explain what happened after the last scene!
 
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Anna2021 said:
:unsure::unsure: Can someone explain the last scene in this update?
Does that mean the event is not over yet and will continue in the next update?
Or it's completely over and we'll have a flashback of this in the next event between Sam and Sophia to explain what happened after the last scene!
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If you're talking about the cliffhanger, as Julia opens the door, yes, it's not over. This will continue into event 6 with Sophia/Dylan/Clarie/Marie.
 
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