I haven't posted anything on this site for a long time, because my English isn't the best. But because I read again and again what is supposedly not right about this visual novel I would like to comment on it again.
I can only say
I love
this game, it's one of the best I've found here and I sincerely hope that L&P will continue the game in its planned direction.
I would have only small optimizations that I could imagine but I can live well without them.
First of all, maybe Dylan's tail could be a little bigger in the toilette shower scene (day 4) to leave more impression on Sophia, I think I would have read something here in the forum.
Second, the balcony door scene (day 14) could be a bit more revealing, maybe a hotter bra or Sopiah completely in underwear to make her reaction a bit more plausible.
Third, I don't know if we need the section about the janitor and his blackmail, but I don't know the whole story board, maybe it will be necessary for later events I don't know yet, so it's just a question how useful this blackmail is for the story. (should not be a criticism)
I can only say about Aiden's blackmail, maybe it's unrealistic but it has the potential to move the story forward a bit faster that Sopiah will be a bit more revealing and might like it more and more.
I think it's a pity that so far the soccer moms only play a minor role, they could have talked a bit more about their boys at the soccer game, a little dirty fantasies like in porn movies soccer moms.
Or did Sophia not even want to search the internet for the term MILF, but that could still happen, so I hope for the first time. But that would also have a lot of potential.
Or like Sophia Liam visited in the office, she was asked if she would like to work as an underwear model. I personally would have liked this job better than the one as a nurse in a nursing home. But that's just my opinion!
The main thing is that L&P continues, I can even live with his update rate, of course I wish to have the finished game but better slow and constant quality and good action like just one of those entertaining porn games where everyone fuck everyone the same without sense and intellect. Especially his slow building up plot I find so nice about his novel.
I fibernate again and again against the next update to learn how it goes on.
I can only say L&P keep doing this, no matter what others say, you're doing a great job.