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armion82

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I voted for that. Even so, it is more realistic, but the Aiden storyline ise different. Because I want to see how far Sophia will go to protect Dylan for getting beaten up. And also that a Teenager does that, is also different. I think, we have enough games with men blackmailing women.
I wonder another thing.Do we realy gonna see all 12 tasks?That will take realy long time.Even if he start to put task each day not only in the 3 days she works as a teacher.
 

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I wonder another thing.Do we realy gonna see all 12 tasks?That will take realy long time.Even if he start to put task each day not only in the 3 days she works as a teacher.
Maybe later on, she will get some help. Maybe the Janitor or Sam or she has a plan with Alyssa. We can have two tasks in one day. But what can that be?
 
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Since the developer is trying to optimize the visual novel by eliminating some routes, it would be good to suggest that some lesbian routes are also eliminated, such as the maid's route, Emma's route or other routes that I don't remember since I don't follow those routes, there are many lesbian routes that are slowing down the development of the novel. A next poll would be good, if there are already two why not three. It would be good to suggest that...
I hope he doesn't go down that route as the lesbian arcs are one reason I play this. From what someone stated earlier in the thread, apparently they are a big hit with his patreon supporters too. That being said, if streamlining the story meant cutting a few then that makes sense. Just please don't cut Allisa's route. That's the one which seemed to start it all (MC oogling her when she came to pick up Aiden) and she's definitely the best looking character in here.
 

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I haven't posted anything on this site for a long time, because my English isn't the best. But because I read again and again what is supposedly not right about this visual novel I would like to comment on it again.

I can only say I love :love: this game, it's one of the best I've found here and I sincerely hope that L&P will continue the game in its planned direction.

I would have only small optimizations that I could imagine but I can live well without them.

First of all, maybe Dylan's tail could be a little bigger in the toilette shower scene (day 4) to leave more impression on Sophia, I think I would have read something here in the forum.

Second, the balcony door scene (day 14) could be a bit more revealing, maybe a hotter bra or Sopiah completely in underwear to make her reaction a bit more plausible.

Third, I don't know if we need the section about the janitor and his blackmail, but I don't know the whole story board, maybe it will be necessary for later events I don't know yet, so it's just a question how useful this blackmail is for the story. (should not be a criticism)

I can only say about Aiden's blackmail, maybe it's unrealistic but it has the potential to move the story forward a bit faster that Sopiah will be a bit more revealing and might like it more and more.

I think it's a pity that so far the soccer moms only play a minor role, they could have talked a bit more about their boys at the soccer game, a little dirty fantasies like in porn movies soccer moms.
Or did Sophia not even want to search the internet for the term MILF, but that could still happen, so I hope for the first time. But that would also have a lot of potential.

Or like Sophia Liam visited in the office, she was asked if she would like to work as an underwear model. I personally would have liked this job better than the one as a nurse in a nursing home. But that's just my opinion!

The main thing is that L&P continues, I can even live with his update rate, of course I wish to have the finished game but better slow and constant quality and good action like just one of those entertaining porn games where everyone fuck everyone the same without sense and intellect. Especially his slow building up plot I find so nice about his novel.
I fibernate again and again against the next update to learn how it goes on.

I can only say L&P keep doing this, no matter what others say, you're doing a great job. (y)
 

Notretsam

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I haven't posted anything on this site for a long time, because my English isn't the best. But because I read again and again what is supposedly not right about this visual novel I would like to comment on it again.

I can only say I love :love: this game, it's one of the best I've found here and I sincerely hope that L&P will continue the game in its planned direction.

I would have only small optimizations that I could imagine but I can live well without them.

First of all, maybe Dylan's tail could be a little bigger in the toilette shower scene (day 4) to leave more impression on Sophia, I think I would have read something here in the forum.

Second, the balcony door scene (day 14) could be a bit more revealing, maybe a hotter bra or Sopiah completely in underwear to make her reaction a bit more plausible.

Third, I don't know if we need the section about the janitor and his blackmail, but I don't know the whole story board, maybe it will be necessary for later events I don't know yet, so it's just a question how useful this blackmail is for the story. (should not be a criticism)

I can only say about Aiden's blackmail, maybe it's unrealistic but it has the potential to move the story forward a bit faster that Sopiah will be a bit more revealing and might like it more and more.

I think it's a pity that so far the soccer moms only play a minor role, they could have talked a bit more about their boys at the soccer game, a little dirty fantasies like in porn movies soccer moms.
Or did Sophia not even want to search the internet for the term MILF, but that could still happen, so I hope for the first time. But that would also have a lot of potential.

Or like Sophia Liam visited in the office, she was asked if she would like to work as an underwear model. I personally would have liked this job better than the one as a nurse in a nursing home. But that's just my opinion!

The main thing is that L&P continues, I can even live with his update rate, of course I wish to have the finished game but better slow and constant quality and good action like just one of those entertaining porn games where everyone fuck everyone the same without sense and intellect. Especially his slow building up plot I find so nice about his novel.
I fibernate again and again against the next update to learn how it goes on.

I can only say L&P keep doing this, no matter what others say, you're doing a great job. (y)
brilliant, don't agree with everything you said but am cool with that, just happy to see a positive post on developer doing a great job because they are.

Nothing happen in this game,absolutely nothing.Just a bunch of reading and reading then teasing and them some more reading.
This woman is the most frustrated woman in the world,she want somebody to fuck her but nobody gives a damn.
yeah its almost like its a Erotic Novel instead of a porn game. :)
 

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yeah its almost like its a Erotic Novel instead of a porn game. :)
have you ever read an erotic novel before?, actually it's not even at the level of an erotic novel that is far more kinkier and more erotic compared to this game storyline
but i'm pretty sure if he willing to make this game right by making more sex scene with another partner or make swinging parties i'm sure he will earn another patron and he can reach his 6k in no time
 

sansot

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yeah its almost like its a Erotic Novel instead of a porn game. :)
If this is a erotic novel, is it written for prudish Victorians or for Saudi Arabians?

Nothing screams erotic like watching a woman sunbathing when you're mowing a lawn after a year of development, so like 400 pages into a book in real life. Peak eroticism.

At least use one of the damn side characters to have a scene with each other.
 
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