Greetings to all forum participants. I have not written for a long time - I was sick with covid, so I wish everyone, first of all, health in the coming year. I looked at version 0.100 and was disappointed with both the game and the author. After all, it is he who directs the plot and actions of the main character - Sophia.
I got the strong impression that he deliberately makes Sophia more stupid and stupid, since according to the plot she is doing more and more illogical and inexplicable actions from the point of view of common sense.
Some fans have repeatedly pointed out that this is just a game. I agree, but any game develops within the framework of some kind of logic and all logic that goes beyond the plot does not look convincing.
Therefore, after the release of this version, I would call the game "A weak-willed mother and a brainless wife, or everyone loves Sophia".
From the very beginning of the game, Sofia did not have a special intellect, despite the fact that according to the plot a teacher with great experience, almost a professor.
As proof, I propose to discuss some episodes. This is a forum and everyone has the right to their opinion ...
1. An episode with the movers in the kitchen, when she receives unequivocal hints of adultery and announces to them the size of her breasts. She sees them for the second time in her life. Ha ha ha. Unconvincing. Primitive dialogue and her behavior. We are not discussing options for a prim wife. I say that on both lines of behavior, the hero must be logical and convincing in his actions.
2. The episode on the swing, when she allowed her son to feel her, and then got up and was indignant at this. Again, not a logical development of the situation. Logically, she either should have kept silent, since she allowed him to wrinkle his ass several times, or joke: Well, how did you like my ass? Don't do that anymore, or you'll get hit in the neck. This would be the normal ending of the episode.
3. Continuation of the episode with sexy lingerie does not stand up to criticism at all.
Sophia, tormented by a guilt complex in the plot (I wonder why) explains to 17 and 18 year old boys that sometimes parents are ... well, like hedgehogs, to make life more interesting. I believe that these guys, both or each separately, would have told her this theory themselves.
anecdote in the subject.
"A family is traveling in a car. Father, mother and 14-year-old daughter. Suddenly a dildo hits the windshield and slowly slides down the glass. Parents tensed. Suddenly their little daughter saw it."
Then his daughter asks: - Mom, what was that? Bumblebee, daughter.
Daughter. Poor man, how does he even fly with such a dick? "
4. Situations with Dylan are absurd. "Mom, I wash the dishes and clean the room, for this you have to sunbathe with me in a bikini and show yourself in your underwear.
On the beach. Mom, put your panties down, otherwise I can't cum ...
In the shop. Mom, show me your milkings, otherwise everyone at my age has already seen live boobs, and I have not yet seen ... You showed me boobs, and now lift your dress ...
The situation with the bikini show is also implausible. Done beautifully, looks like an episode from a fantastic game where miracles from nothing happen at the stroke of a magic wand.
Or the episode with Sam. Sam, I feel so sorry for you, in order to calm you down, I will show you the top of my boobs.
An 18 year old boy would have calmed down even more if she stood up with cancer and showed him the crotch. Well, what else does a young man need for peace of mind?
In the evening, Sofia goes to a nightclub, there, in front of her daughter, she kisses her sister passionately, allows a stranger to climb in her crotch, and in the morning thinks about how comfortable it will be for her to take a shower with her daughter.
Ellie, not hiding that she is already fucking with men with might and main, does not know that women sometimes shave their crotch?
On one of the routes, it turns out that it was Dylan who provoked the situation with Aiden. The author chose a very unfortunate moment for recognition. They had already brought him to the boarding school, they had already told him that it was only for a month and then he confessed ... Why? Conscience tortured? Dylan? !!! Not logical.
If on a muddy route, after completing the 3rd or 5th task, Dylan admitted this and put Sofia before the choice of what to do next. It would be a cool episode. And this is an empty episode, without the logic of its development, except for the confrontation between Dylan and Aiden. But the point of the game is not in it?
I'll look at the responses, maybe tomorrow I will continue to discuss the controversial aspects of the plot.
My idea is that any action must have its own logical explanation. And then, completely unexpectedly, a prim mother and wife commit completely inexplicable acts, practically killing their authority with their children and relatives, students of the school in which they teach, and irrevocably destroying their career and reputation. There had to be some explanation for this. Apparently there was supposed to be some kind of prequel explaining today's motives of this woman. And so everything is very far-fetched and not convincing. This is for those who regularly claim the fantastic credibility of this game.
