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Hi. What exactly are you interested in?what does Bane71 think of all this?
mine is just a simple question
There's an inherent conflict in his storytelling. He wants to tell a believable story of a good, straitlaced, woman's corruption. But it has to happen over (roughly) 30 days. Therein lies the original flaw of the story. How do you tell a believable story of corruption when the woman starts very sexually conservative (not a nun, but definitely conservative) and you only have 30 days to corrupt her? Oh, and you want this to be an incest story?That's quite harsh you know. I criticize, never complain. If he doesn't want to include sex quickly that is his prerogative(although the VN has been in development for 3 years so an argument could be made about the lack of sex as well).
Take Rebirth it has had quite a lot of updates, much more than this BS and has had 0 sex scenes and most people don't say anything bad about it. Because the story is focused, interesting and really engaging and always leaves you wanting more in a good way. This leaves you wanting more in a bad way.
L&P has been working on this update for 6 months now, and it has only 4 events in his "branching" story.
Frankly the story telling is unfocused, uninteresting and downright terrible. Character development is all over the place due to path progression.
Like seriously, if he were to introduce a new character right now, say an Ex of the MC and he put the moves on her she would be conflicted as fuck, even though she has made out with her sister, her daughter, her daughter's girlfriend, played with her daughter and her girlfriend and has let her son touch her and jerk off while staring at her ass and has gone over this process many times before, she would not do anything with her ex with whom she would have done things in the past already, because the path just got introduced and we have got to start from 0 and go through the same things we have seen over and over and over again.
That is just terrible writing. And yes he has the right to write terribly as have I to say that it's terrible.
While that may sound like a complaint it is not, it is constructive criticism.. I am now able to support more devs again and came back to check it out, but seeing this after 2 years and the shit he just pulled. No way am I giving him my money again.
Alright, I'll decompress and make what you said more intelligible and then respond.what I understand in this porn indy games industry is that nothing is creative...we are talking about money...and nothing else...You,the creative one, are you going to tell to the people around you that you are creating a porn game? This is only a way to earn money without sweat. You work on caracters created by professional, you simply modify it just to match your taste..nothing more, the only creativity is in create a patreons page full of promising words ...only there we can found real creativity.
When 0.1115 was updated, L&P promised that the next update would be faster, but it took 6 months
I think most people here are fans of this game and appreciate the quality L&P put into the images and story.Lets see who should I side with...
On the one side there is L&P a dev I respect who has been creating something that I enjoy playing for some years now that seems to be going through some shit.
On the other side there are a few hateful trolls that shit over everything for attention because they think they sound cool on the internet.
It's downloading, will do once done.can someone make a torrent please i hit mega limit and nopy is down