VN - Ren'Py - A Wife in Venice [v0.58] [EROTIC DROP]

Version 0.58, will update as game develops.
4*, above average to good VN.
Worth a read, it has quite a few really good to excellent moments and scenes.

Peter and Misako: 5*, they're stealing the show, and that's not a bad thing...
Nicole's story isn't bad, just outshined by Peter and Misako so far.
The female models are good.
Overall story is pretty good, nothing groundbreaking, but adequately conceived and constructed, has gotten better as the story progresses.
Everything else is pretty average.
The conversation text could be improved, but it's good enough and mostly a personal preference/cosmetic issue.

Nicole is a bit all over the place to start, but seems to be settling in with her character arc now with choices being offered and made and more past background story added in... Nicole's story will hopefully start to take off more and be as interesting as Peter and Misako, especially if they crossover with Nicole's story more... Good decision to allow the reader to move away from Thomas as the primary Nicole arc...

A game that is only visually decent, but the rest is very obvious and boring, nothing new in this plot, we do not have the usual BBC, but the father-in-law, old and perverted. only for fans of this genre.

I really appreciate the journey of Peter and Misako in this game; it's engaging and well-developed. However, I hope that developers can enrich it further by offering more scenes that delve into their story. The plot is solid and the environments are crafted with care, which contributes to creating an immersive experience. I would love to see more options and choices in the game so that I can fully enjoy all its facets. Overall, I've given it five stars because I'm excited about the way Peter and Misako's story is unfolding, and I look forward to seeing what the future holds for them.

It's ok, but it's in need of a huge amount of polish. Nothing overtly WRONG, but a lot of wee things which make the whole experience feel cheap.

The font text is colour coded to the character, but it has a while border, which is kind of odd. No background behind the text either so it can be a bit difficult to read.

There is also an issue where the dev puts the characters emotions in the content which is just not the way to do a story.

I'm used to having 100 percent of the shares, so yes, I am worried. (Angry)

So are you worried or angry? Also this is a visual novel, you've already got the character looking angry, you really don't need to state it. Either trust in your writing and renders, or find a better way. You just lead the player to think the character is saying it and you end up with a Hercules like situation. I appreciate the game is very obviously not written in English so perhaps the emotions in brackets are prompts left behind for translation purposes, but that then suggests there should be more care taken to clean up after it has been done

It's not all bad though, the main lassie looks nice, the renders are actually pretty solid. there was a line where a character said another dressed like a cheap sailor and that made me laugh. Not just a sailor. Oh no, a cheap one.

All in all it's interesting, the game has different threads and they're all doing their wee thing. Translation doesn't help it but it's not the worst thing in the world. Just comes down to a need for polish

Decent graphic and that's it.

Story is all over the place, I cannot find any eroticism, sex scenes are purely a swift checkbox exercise, impossible to wank over even for a teenager during an hormones storm.

Poor creation of characters and in general very boring.

Not interesting story and blunt and swiftly made sex scenes.. I do not understand what the dev wants communicate...

Art is good...ish. The characters all have room temperature IQ. There's porn movies that have a better plot than this.

None of the characters make any sense, but to deliver porn scenes and the story is laughably stupid.

Additionally, the English is very very obviously ESL.

I am sorry, but this really isn't good. I don't understand reviews here sometimes.

I agree with the review by Dessolos.
It didn't seem like there were enough characters or personalities established before getting into the action. She basically lets the maid do anything she wants to her & falls in love with her within one day lol. There's not enough setup with the father in-law before she becomes his submissive. I did like the butlers role, it seemed more in line from what you'd expect but even that looked like it again, went too far too soon. This all happens with only a couple scenes for each character

Seems this needs a bit of a rewrite or redo to establish the characters better and come up with better moments to sell her becoming more sexual. It is hard to write a path for a corruption or depravity story but this doesn't really have any. Sometimes she's the confident one teasing a man wearing see through clothes. Other times she's scared and lets the man grope her. Is she a vixen or submissive? The butler goes from worshipping her feet and treating her like a goddess, to manipulating her the next day. Like I said characters are not well defined and change on a dime.

The renders and backgrounds are great, some of the posing of the characters is really well done. Sex and lewd scenes are detailed and the high point of the game. The writing and story is sadly well below average.

It has elements that could make this good but it really needs a complete overhaul and smarter writing

I like the game. NTR part is hot here.

The plot develops quickly, sometimes even too quickly. And in this VN there is not a single choice.

Renders are ok, although the main character is not really my type.

very good and interesting story great graphics and realistic character types I really liked this game I hope it goes on like that. trust me it worths to try without thinking. I hope there will be more games like that

Too early to give it any more than 3 stars for right now. The setup to the story seems okay so far and it has some good renders. The only real negative I have so far is the relationship between Angela and Nicole felt like it's progressing to quickly like it's rushed. As well as it seems to me Nicole is giving into Thomas a bit to easily.

I think this hotwife game is a new work with full potential, excellent modeling, good plot, and most importantly, the modeling of the heroine Nicloas is so sexy, I have to give this game potential A perfect game, 5 stars. I like the ntr theme very much. I hope the author will continue to create.