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Nope, I promise you all that I won't be changing the story or remaking it, just fixing plot holes. Some dialogue and eventsGood luck. Hope it's not remaking
The wife has been getting hypno videos well before she smokes with Samuil. She gets them in her emailIt's funny, but it's stupid to put the cart before the horse. It's impossible to be under the influence of drugs without taking drugs. The “wife” voluntarily starts taking drugs, she ignores her husband’s warning, therefore, only she is to blame for the consequences of this choice.
When the “wife” makes a choice to tell her husband about drugs and sex with emigrants or to hide her hobby from her husband and continue to voluntarily fuck with emigrants, drugs do not influence the choice. She voluntarily abandons her husband and voluntarily agrees to continue having sex with immigrants in order to hide from her husband how she is having fun at work. She hypocritically saves her skin and turns her husband into a cuckold, drugs do not influence this choice. She voluntarily agrees to fuck immigrants so that her husband does not find out about drugs and sex with immigrants, she does not care about her husband. Hypocrisy, selfishness and the desire to hide the truth from her husband influence this choice, drugs do not play a role.
I'm not trust you at all. There is no single word from Kerosine_NTR about it, just your statement. Plus please stop acting here like you own this thread and if you going do any modification of game, do it regular, via your new threat for that mod!The wife has been getting hypno videos well before she smokes with Samuil. She gets them in her email
just like the MC does. He blames Autumn for sending them to him and demands she stop showing them to
his wife... she says she has no idea what he's talking about. This is why he believed the Mystery Caller is
Autumn. You're fighting a losing battle, my dude.
There is also a MAJOR plot point that has been forgotten. And I WILL be restoring it. You will all just have
to wait or flood this forum with guesses hahaha
Well that's on you then because yes. I do talk to him on Discord, I am in his Public Discord groupI'm not trust you at all. There is no single word from Kerosine_NTR about it, just your statement. Plus please stop acting here like you own this thread and if you going do any modification of game, do it regular, via your new threat for that mod!
Yeah, the aftermath of that was really weird. Who (MC) would react like that? "Let her sleep, I'm not going to wake her up despite her probably being raped and getting unwanted creampies. Hmm. Is she on birth control? I might have to get some and sneak it into her morning coffee."It's a major event or thing that exists that no one wants to look at or talk about.
The rape scene and it's aftermath. It's a massive pink elephant of the story that suddenly gets ignored by
everyone, including the FMC and it's the major thorn in the story's side. After this event literally nothing
in the story makes sense any more and the train falls completely off the tracks. It's the first thing I'm fixing.
It will not be removed. But it will be a major path point going forward. It's also the crux of a lot of complaints
and fear Kerosine has about A Wife's Life being banned from sites. I personally think it was brave and as some
one who's been there I think it's important to show the real consequences of something like that.
Yeah a hospital visit would have been expected... almost gave some shit away haha Oops gotta watch that.Yeah, the aftermath of that was really weird. Who (MC) would react like that? "Let her sleep, I'm not going to wake her up despite her probably being raped and getting unwanted creampies. Hmm. Is she on birth control? I might have to get some and sneak it into her morning coffee."
You would definitively have wakened her up and asked her "WTF?". Her reaction would probably have been "What are you talking about?" and then when realization hits "I was raped!". And then a lot of things can or cannot happen depending what the two does/thinks/likes/dislikes. Even if they don't go to the police she would most definitely get emergency pills (if she's not already on the pill); or maybe not if she secretly likes Samuil and somehow is OK with what he did (maybe mind control and weed is already to strong).
So I am looking forward to any change to make it better.
Sounds like you'll add the whole breeding kink package.Okay yeah. I'm gonna tease one thing. I'm not changing Samuil. However, his motivations will get
altered a bit for the better of the story that I think you guys and Kerosine will like better.
I'm not new to this whole BNWO nonsense and a lot of these stories either miss the point or don't
truly understand it. Fucking white women is basic.
Honestly imo every character in this game is either a) in on it or b) also been exposed to the chemicalOH! Quick note. Have you noticed Kendra isn't getting hypno videos? Food for thought.
It's funny, but it doesn't work. If everything worked as you described, there would be no need for "blackmail", drugs and video would be enough.You are the one putting the cart before the horse. As you and others mentioned. Weed is not something that does these kinds of things. So her and anyone else in their right mind will not think they are at risk of doing anything dumb by taking just weed... but once again it needs to be pointed out that this is NOT just weed, and she is UNKOWNINGLY being fed tainted weed without her consent. By the time she learns this info, her brain is already permanently altered. They also said in the game that the camp is poisoning the food and drinks with this mystery new substance, so her judgement was likely already damaged. I also need to remind you that the hypno videos are permanently changing their brains as well.
I do not know why this concept is so difficult to grasp, but it may be beyond you.
Let me try it this way. If someone grabs and restrains you, then they slice open the top of your skull without damaging the brain, your brain is now exposed, they then take an ice cream scooper and go to town on your frontal lobe. Then, they put your skullcap back on your head. Congrats, you have been lobotomized. Now you have the sudden uncontrollable need to go on a shooting spree. You do so and kill people. The authorities capture you. Are you responsible for your actions? To an extent, but they will not be able to hold you mentally competent to stand trial for your crimes and you will be sent to a criminal psych ward for the remainer of your days. The people that carved your brain into Swiss cheese are actually criminally liable for what they did to you and the harm you caused others as well.
I guess you don't believe in or fully understand the concept of progressive changes. The MC doesn't instantly become a cuck and she doesn't instantly become a mindless slut. The drugs and videos have gradual effects on people that require regular doses to break down resistive barriers. I thought that part was understood and clearly explained. But I guess not. You must have skimmed through that part of the game.It's funny, but it doesn't work. If everything worked as you described, there would be no need for "blackmail", drugs and video would be enough.
Where does the effect of all this disappear after talking to MC?
After talking to MC, did they stop adding drugs to food and water in the camp?
Why did everything "unexpectedly" disappear and stop working after talking to MC?
Before talking to MC, she can't think, can't resist, after the conversation "unexpectedly" she starts thinking and resisting, drugs in food, water and video stopped working?
I can vouch without question that the game is incredibly dark, depressive and triggering in all of the very worst ways. I'm not sure I've found one before this novel/game that has captured it so well. It's been a very difficult journey powering through it for the first time over the last couple of days. As far as I can tell, the first glimmerof light I've seen is at the end of this version is if the MC intervene's before a certain Jeremy event occurs, which results in the wife indicating a real timeline to quit finally, but that could be smoke and mirrors too. But I do hope for at least one semi escape route to make it seem like choices matter more than they have so far.Sounds like you'll add the whole breeding kink package.
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By how you've explained a couple of things so far the story might become too depressing for my liking. More interesting and consistent for sure, but also more depressing by that.
That's not something i'm looking forward to in games and porn in general.