Ren'Py - A Wife's Phone [v0.6.5] [Bloody Ink/Scyxar Studios]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    EraserHead123

    Hast great NTR potential if youre into that kind of thinng.

    love the choice of images so far.

    The story could use some work but i really dont mind it. Looking forward to seeing more updated, not too much to go off so far.

    **v0.15 Turning into some A tier shit, lots more content added. Worried the creator might be doing too many story threads and wont be able to deliver, but id love to be proven wrong. Cant wait to see more
  2. 4.00 star(s)

    Bertthc

    Good start, perhaps a slower rate would be better as the colleague goes a bit too weirdly fast :). I like the idea of the phone interface and the mc just experiencing everything through the device. I Look forward to seeing more.
  3. 2.00 star(s)

    DrDerpington

    TL;DR = game focused on cheating, voyeurism, spying. Really early in development.

    Story: 2/5
    - The story goes like: every single girl in MC's life is a slut. Majority of them are sluts for black cocks. As far as we know only MC's wife is sort of good person, but that will somehow change soon.
    - There isnt any plot at all. Everybody is cheating. At start MC has trouble accepting it, but after few minutes he accepts it. That's all the plot development we get. It feels quite lacklustre.

    Art: 2/5
    - This game contains some random pictures and GIFs. The number is quite low.
    - The game is mostly text based. If you dont mind, then feel free to check out the game.

    Sex stuff: 0/5
    - The sex part is HUGE disappointment for me. In text based games I expect a lot of description of the sex. Unfortunately the game doesnt have that. You are only witnessing the game through mobile phone interface and it sucks. Imagine this example:
    Wife sends you a message "I will be home in 1 hour and I feel horny". But then the game will SKIP entire sex scene with some message "2 hours have passed". After that you will receive a SMS from your wife "Today we had nice sex". OMG! Bascially the game skips the whole sex part. You will only hear how good/bad sex was. No details!!!

    Gameplay: 2/5
    - Idea about the the witnessing the story only through mobile phone interface is novelty idea. But it also sucks because it restricts players a lot.
    - The game is also very early in development and there isnt much content at this point. It is quite short.
    - The game has some choices, but they dont affect much. So far only difference is seeing slightly different pictures. No matter what you choose the game will proceed anyway.
    - Game is also very UNFINISHED and buggy.
    - Skip button doesnt work.
    - Settings about text speed dont work. You can set to "max" or "min" speed, but text will always CRAWL slowly on your screen.
    - There is no image gallery. When people send you pictures, you cant see them at your own leisure. The image will only popup when you click through the text and then it will disappear. If you want to see it again, you will to SCROLL BACK through a tons of text. Seriously? If dev takes his time to create mobile phone interface in RenPy then at least he should add img gallery.

    To sum it up:
    This is game in early development. At this point it is not worth playing. Maybe check the game later.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    Up1978

    A bit of a new take on the wife corruption path. I would prefer that there was a little more freedom with the path, but this is so much better than games that require a grind to progress story. Decent imagery. I hope there will be more options to stear the wife into different directions in future updates.
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    NLightD

    A great start (y)I like the phone simulation idea. It's the first time I've played a game like this, and, well, it's really good. The MC is likeable and seems like a good person who loves his wife. There already are some choices to make, so the player won't be railroaded into stuff they don't like.
    I haven't seen any bugs, and the game is quite good from a technical standpoint. I mean, it's a pretty realistic simulation of a phone with messages and apps.
    So, best of luck to the dev! Looking forward to the next update :)
  6. 3.00 star(s)

    radical686

    Updated review:

    Interracial is a driving aspect of this game, so if you're not into interracial you may want to avoid this title. There are a lot of good quality clips and images from Blacked. But, it could be argued that black men's portrayal is a bit racist. Too many are presented as thug tropes, who happen to be successful, though that's never really explained.

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    My biggest problem with the game is its grind and narrative inconsistencies. There are step guides they don't really indicate how certain choices will affect the path you want to pursue. There are also a lot of flaws in the programming so that you end up with text chains where Valerie is acting like she's not cheating, even though you've seen evidence she has cheated.

    This has not changed though I played v0.6. It really breaks the immersion when you get to the path involving Anissa. Your wife explicitly throws her your way to cheat, to encourage swinging, she gets upset when you do cheat and admit it . . . . BUT she had already slept with her boss. And Jenna had sent the MC pictures of her sleeping with black men. Yet, she's acting like nothing happened (including conversations with Jenna, who is encouraging her to cheat). Meanwhile, the MC had slept with Kirley and there was no exposition, internal or otherwise, on you cheating before Anissa.

    Another immersion breaking flaw was the central role of Jenna. She is the architect of your character's downfall, appears to be responsible for many of the behind the scenes machinations with family, and yet, despite the MCs mild annoyance with her, she has access to you and your entire family for the most part, mostly w/your consent. Yes the MC whines about things she says, but you can never block her. I suspect because of the limitations of the format. Everything you know comes through the phone so some of the NTR aspects come from her. But, this could be handled with effective use of the camera phone or other people sending you images and videos. But, nearly all is from Jenna or the wifeapp persona. Stupidly you could block her and still get that content from the wife spy app since she constantly contacts people you follow and you get regular contact from the wifespy admin??.

    So, I can't give this better than a 3-star rating. The Dev has chosen a lot of good images, and quality porn, and it will please NTR lovers. But, it is undermined by a messy, inconsistent, and incoherent story, and is annoyingly repetitive too often. The grind for this title is epic. There are a lot of bugs that thwart any attempt to save you of your family from their inevitable downfall. So, despite the claims, current bugs in the game mean little of the NTR is actually avoidable. You will inevitably have scenes that make no sense. If NTR is your fetish, you'll avoid many of these flaws, but you still won't be able to avoid some of the narrative inconsistencies mentioned above.
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    kush_sv_

    Great Start ! Can't wait for next update . Good mix of resistance from the husband about wife's promiscuity. Couple of bugs and text mistakes but i am sure dev will fix those. The characters are well defined and good direction.
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    RecicledJ

    Nice relaease the Game seens very very interesting, i hope the Game go far in this route. I wait next update of this. The way you can "hack" phone, the social media app, nice image pick, well i don't have to much of this, the Game is on early developement but promises. Good job developer i hope the Next chapter keep the same quality
  9. 2.00 star(s)

    lodadsaq

    where the fuck do i begin -_-

    ok, so, if this is a legit game,it has a semi intresting premis, inspired from the girlfreind abroad or whatever it was. simple ground work content wise, a decent base. the future of it could be intresting.

    as for the way the game is made/played, very bad, at least for the renpy engine, twine suger cuber or other engines could be better.

    having text speed funtion be default no matter that the setting is isnt a good idea.
    disabaling the skip dialog also isnt a good idea,
    I am not a programmer but something tells me the reason those to exist, is because the game would be unplayable with the following and the last 2,
    when you click 1 too many times after a convo is ended you are expected to click the home butoon on the bottem of the screen, click too many times and it will boot you to the menu.
    same with the phones "home screen" after the players dialog is finished at times you are supose to select the messaging app or the instagram app, but click the home screen and you get booted to the menu.

    you have shown the next mechanics of game play, they are intresting for sure, but the last problem, of being booted to the menu from 1 accedental click, must be resolved, other wise people will drop it thinking the game is borked.

    i am intrested to see what is planned and how it comes out, best of luck.
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    James_Locksley

    A really great first instalment. Very few bugs or errors when played on android (wife's name is sometimes the MC's name is the only one that stands out) Definitely one to watch for those who...enjoy this type of content...

    Writing and pacing is great and I can see this becoming quite addictive if played long-term. I wouldn't mind seeing the son being sissified at some point too...