And again, hurray!
FEM Mark (26–95) - The path is secondary, well, there will be another 70 steps of whining about Mark.
Paula (62–108) - let's see, given the author's abilities - it is doubtful that he will be able to make something more interesting out of this path than it already is.
❤ Niece Romance (0–34) - yes, this path should be brought into line with the main plot line. The question remains how this will be done, if again snotty kisses, well, there will be another snotty branch. The Niece must have a character, she must have her own will, make her own decisions. Otherwise, there will be 3 related branches (Niece, Step-Sister and Wife's Sister) of the plot as if under a carbon copy, differing almost only in a set of photographs.
Femdom - Yes. Here the author has more chances to give something out judging by how he builds the other paths, this path is closer to him. Let's see.
But if I were the author, I would pay attention to a competitor who has only recently appeared in the genre of wife's cheating with a phone.
A Wife's Loyalty - The project is not indisputable, but it has a number of advantages and successful game solutions.
The first is that the wife has an image and character created, she is nice (even if it is a neural network, the arrangement of images with real porn is done quite skillfully), you empathize with her and sympathize.
Second - the plot is not complicated, therefore it is understandable, described at an average artistic level (for a game this is acceptable). He does not knock the player out of the game, but guides him smoothly through the game. You do not lose interest because of absurdities.
Third - the combination of the prospects of the usual gameplay with a phone simulator gives more choice for the implementation of the plan and looks more realistic.
Fourth - the POV perspective - husband and POV - wife at the player's discretion, in my opinion a very successful solution allows to clarify a number of points in the plot and show the wife's attitude to what is happening, emphasizing her character.
Plus or minus - regarding the lack of the Alpha path, I think the author really assessed his capabilities and did not take a difficult topic for him. He managed to form an average man of the modern world, who talks more and plays with toys, does something, but does not agree with his wife's betrayal. A kind of office teddy bear.
That’s enough for now, I think it’s useless for our author, but this goes to the question “What would I do in the author’s place?”
I would definitely pay attention to the competitor and analyze the pros and cons, and I would do this as objectively as possible, regardless of the feelings that the creation of a competitor or critic evokes in me.
Yes, the competitor is weak - for now, but he is already taking away potential viewers and subscribers.
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You need to play 0.6.5 to at least somehow imagine the development of the plot! 0.0.7 does not give any understanding at all of what you are doing and why you are doing it!
But I agree with you, playing 0.6.5 is from the realm of Sado-Maso!
I don’t understand why you need a business? In 0.0.7, the hero does not need to do anything at all, except respond to messages.
APP - does not work!
OnlyFaps - does not work!
Faxtogram - photos appear, but there is simply zero effect from it!
Deposits in the bank - why?
Purchase and rent - why?
Your hero does not live at all, he lazily crawls out of his shelter to take Paula somewhere or fuck Mark-F, or run in on occasion to Talay.
Everything else in the game takes place in another universe. Wife, sisters, daughter, niece and mother with son in another universe, they occasionally send our MC greetings. Well, this is probably so as not to distract from the dangerous fight with Mr. Salem and Jenna!
Don't be upset, you haven't lost much, a few pages earlier we were explained how the author feels about such comments! In addition, we are again promised another "WOW!"
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If anyone else has problems with OnlyFaps locking the game (it used 100% CPU for a long while for me) I have a small workaround.
Locate game/scripts/of/of.rpy and open it in whatever text editor you like.
In line 50 (I think) there is a for loop. Change it to:
for i in of_home_posts[:1]:
I do not have the original file, but I think it said :40 and that slowed down everything.
Locate game/scripts/of/of.rpy and open it in whatever text editor you like.
In line 50 (I think) there is a for loop. Change it to:
for i in of_home_posts[:1]:
I do not have the original file, but I think it said :40 and that slowed down everything.
0.7.2 on Android.
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Is it me or did the writing take a turn for bad since 0.7.2?
Only 1-2 words are used now instead of full sentences?
P.S. I am playing the new content in the 0.7.0 version of the "Not added Wife (Alpha)" branch.
Only 1-2 words are used now instead of full sentences?
P.S. I am playing the new content in the 0.7.0 version of the "Not added Wife (Alpha)" branch.
Since the 0.6.7 revamp I've felt like the quality of writing has fallen off a cliff
It is almost like a different person is writing the dialogues now and they have not even played the old version to atleast get a feel of the usual dialogue.
I m ngl this might actually become a deal breaker for me. And I played through the bugged as hell old version multiple times.
The update to the mothers route in 0.7 suddenly had all the characters become British, so its almost certain there is a new writer or multiple.