Unity - Abandoned - Abyss [v0.4] [Magic Fingers]

[Rev @ v0.4]

Even at .4 this seems like a tech demo.

Art's alright. Bit simple but fine.

Writing is bad. Scenario's interesting if not novel, but characters are nonexistant or borrowed and misused. Fluency is non-english-speaker level and voice incomprehensible.

Didn't see enough porn to justify the download, and nothing for the tags I clicked it for.

UI is awful in both design and execution; inconsistent placement of purchase and exit buttons makes trying to interact with it take longer than the gameplay currently available.

TLDR: Keep this one cooking in the still for a couple more revisions. Godspeed.

It's decent for a version two, has some potential, needs some tweaking. It's a solid 3 right now, if it's your thing you'll like it, if it's not your style of game it isn't good enough to escape it's genre and while the content isn't zero it will need more to escape the middle tiers.

Evil (or good) overlord twist on breeding season/mangement simulator. decent amount of content for a first release. At the moment there are orcs and humans but it looks like there is supposed to be at a minimum of 5 races in future updates. A crash here and there but thats to be expected for a .1 introduction