VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Acting Lessons [v1.0.2] [DrPinkCake]

i think it was THE best writing i know in an H-game (if you don't count VNs from Japan), got me hooked all throughout, and choices really did matter. Game doesn't hold your hand either(unless you want it).Got very bittersweet ending first time around, and immediately dived in for second playthrough.
Characters are good, but i gotta say...fucking Liam was the best out of them all (and no, it was an adjective).

I guess the only con i can name is some of the poses were bit jarring(like pelvic area on Melissa in some scenes), and there are not THAT many scenes to fap to, but hey, it got gallery.

Thoroughly enjoyed it, it was very good exercise for every emotion.
Some of mine haven't been exercised in years.
This must surely be THE new standard of writing these projects.
But not only first class writing, first class graphics as well, truly stunning amount of work in such a short space of time.
This should give many other devs something to think about.

I came expecting a good time for wanking but instead i got hook in the storyline which is unexpectedly good and instead of fapping i decide to play through to the end, leaving my dick blueballed after the first few hot-scenes.

Most of the time the game feels more like a well written VN than just an ordinary porn game, i feel that the perverted scenes here only served as side-dishes. The dialogues are interesting and Liam has a strong bro-vibe. The game keeps your interests till the end through various scenarios, tells a lot about the dedication of the dev-team.

The scenes and the characters are most of the time well-presented but honestly i don't care much because the story is again, unexpectedly good. The only thing i notice is that sometimes the characters seem to have the weird "dead-eyes" stares.

The only reason i gave this a "4" and not a "5" is that my dick is sad.

One of the best story telling game I ever played.Have good rendering ,humor ,scenes ,stories and the best of all is ma man Liam with his black mobile.Dev totally deserve fame and recognition.
P.S. It freaking hard to choose between hot baes and best bro.

More of a visual novel than a masturbation aid. Probably not the best game if you just want to jack off. Burly black guy steals the show imo (no homo).

While it starts a bit slow with some slightly awkward interactions, it rapidly improves with decent character development, humour and tragedy that come together to make an entertaining and memorable vn.
Big credit for being finished, for telling a (relatively) believable story, and for not just making you care - but for actually doing something with it.

This is one of the rare VN's that keeps you involved in the story and almost every decision will have consequences, which brings several reasons to replay it, not to mention that you probably want more than just one of the girls.

The characters are well rendered and the animations are also pretty good.

This is 100% in my personal top 5 of the novels here.

First Depraved Awakening and now another masterpiece of the " porn games " is finished! :,( What I can say about this gem, a story that makes you feel love, anger and even cry. This game is definitely more than just a porn material, it teaches you things about LIFE and how it can be a sea of wonders but also how hard and sad it can get and that you have to stay strong and realize that there are people who care about you and want to help you to overcome that! Thank you so much for making such a wonderful game, Dr Pink Cake, and for being such a nice guy that is always interacting with us too! And of course, if you can, please support him on Patreon! He worked really hard to make such a game for us and I think there's no doubt that he surely deserves that <3

This is difficult. The game starts exceptional. It plays as a title that cares enough to make enjoyable characters and take them seriously. I had it sure in for the best game I had played from a western developer. Strong characters and good graphics. The writing is not perfect, but it is clearly a step above the usual. The sexy bits are... adequate, good enough for a wank, but nothing special. The writing was what makes or breaks the game.

Then the game decides that it has to follow the path of other amateur work and go dark and go dark fast. It becomes a soap opera, then a pretentious drama before becoming a horror movie and finally ending as a fairy tale in most endings. If you told me the game was written by two different people I would believe you.

That's the dilemma. It's bloody brilliant at first. The end is so rubbish that it makes the grand beginning unplayable in retrospect. If a game started badly and ended well I would give it 5 stars if the latter part made up for the bad start. This is the opposite.

Played it from start to finish, and while there were some elements and possibilities in the game that weren't exactly my cup of tea, it was superb. I have played it before when all the updates have come in, but only by playing the whole thing through gave it due credit.

Great game , I enjoy it a lot:

Graphics 4/5: great overall: Nice models, nice rendering. Good animations,
enjoyable sex scenes, different type of girls.

Script 5/5 (best, I praise this part) Original history, drama and NICE characters.
This VN can make you feel funny , sad, furious, intrigued. Dont you like dramas? well a VN is more than sex, its a history. I don tcomplain and I praise the DrpinkCake effort to make a history outside easy fucks.

Good dialogs and entertaining situations

Overall: 9 . Great game.

Please excuse my english, it is not my native language.

A genuine triumph. Not a simple sex focused visual novel and will leave you feeling all kinds of emotions but well worth the time and effort. The cast of characters are among the most likable and well developed in the genre and getting your choice of 3 'main' routes provides ample replayability.

Honestly, this game has been amazing. Having the time in between updates REALLY made some of the story rough on the feels... I am actually really satisfied that the DrPinkCake stuck it out despite all the negative criticism and ended the story in such a thoughtful way. Sure part of tying everything together ended up being convenient, I can honestly look past it. Absolutely looking forward to his future work. Artwork is stellar, animation is good, and story is top-notch.

The story is great and doesn't actually fizzle out. The two main femal characters are interesting and easy to empathize with. The MC is also an everyman's man. Which again makes it easy to connect with his character. The actual story itself has a plot, which progresses, climaxes (lol), and resolves. Which is fulfilling.
Animations are good. And kudos to the dev for making a black character that isn't meant to draw on racial stereotypes or cultural taboos.

Oh yeah and there's sex.

5/5

The story is nice, but nothing special. The renders are nice, I also like the numerous options to choose in situations. The reason I give five star is the dynamic between MC and his best friend. It feels so real, so natural, I almost wait for the duo on the scene, better than any sex scene

Massive Spoilers Alert!!

After playing this story, I felt like there must be some other different endings! Like, what if I never fucked a girl? It turns out there are 22 possible endings. Now I regret fucking every girl... This game is freakingly awesome for readers but for a porn game it's really sad because of ending! I understand why many people are giving 1 star. But, this game massively touched my heart so 5/5 from me...

I'm giving it 5 stars, but I want to give it 4.5. the rating won't let me. That being said, I love this game. Rena and Melissa in particular are hawwwwwwt as hell! The story is well-scripted. Honestly, I didn't see the "crazy" ending before the ending ending. (how's that for avoiding spoilers? LOL) Fact is there was one threesome ending I WISH was in it but is not. That is my only knock on the game, if you can call it a knock. You can't please all of the people, so just remember I'm one dude.... and I gave you 5 stars... LOL! You've done amazing freaking work here! Hope to see more from these characters in the future maybe... maybe in "life lessons: Acting Lessons Part deux"? (kidding) You're an amazing storyteller.... We can talk artwork all day, but this story is the best scripted of any of them I've yet played. (The Liam story about the rug still kills me).

This game is a rough draft of something that could be amazing. It starts out great and goes downhill after a few episodes.

It's worth checking out for the good parts, but overall it's poor as an adult game, which is what I think it wants to be reviewed as. As a porn game, it's a bit low on scenes and variety but ok. If you're looking for a game where crazy stuff happens, then it's excellent.

Good art and dialogue, creative ideas (for example, the acting scenes), some great characters ... brought down by too many over-the-top dramatic twists. There is a genre shift, but the bigger problem is that most of the premise only makes sense as a porn game (ie, ignore things that don't make sense), but later on the game wants to be taken seriously as an adult game, despite having a foundation with too many holes in it.

Anyway, play it until it jumps the shark. If that doesn't happen for you, enjoy! If it does, unfortunately it's not going to get better.

Absolutely awesome VN. looking forward to more of your work in the future.
Great story & funny at the same time. Now I've just to find time to do this 21 more times to see ALL the endings.
I hope Retrieving the Past will have more links to this.

Great 5 episodes but then the dev ruins it and tries to force a different genre upon unexpecting players. Dropped it episode 6, not going to touch neither this nor devs other games ever again.

He could even make everyone happy with a very minimal update but I guess his "vision" is more important that half of the playerbase.

It's not just a porn game. Got very emotional further into the game. A good Story in my Eyes, and a nice game if you are not trying to masturbate.
the first half of the game is more Porny than the other half.
You shouldn't play it tho, if ya tryin to bust a nut.