So far its very short, just an introduction really. I like the premise. An older man going back to college to get the education he missed when younger. How the various females enter into what type of relationship isn't determined yet. I hope we will have the opportunity to choose who and how many sexual relationships the MC ends up in. Maybe an opportunity to end up with Mom and be a father figure to the girls. Alternately the MC could have a May December romance with one or both of the twins. I would hope all these opportunities are possible.
The characters are attractive and sexy, if a bit buxom. Not that I mind big tits, but not every woman on the planet has such large boobs, so it lacks a bit of realism. The author has tried to make some differentiation to the (so far) 3 LIs but it remains to be seen how different they will be. Also, the mother is supposedly 37 but looks pretty much as youthful as her two 18 year old daughters. Another point of lack of realism.
The dialogue is sufficient. It gets the point across quickly and thoroughly. It is also fast paced which I like. There are no grammatical errors as far as I can tell.
There is no sex scenes yet, just the mother showering where we get a boob shot. Then the VN ends.
So far so good. The VN has promise. I'll keep an eye on it.
