Ren'Py - Completed - AFTER DEATH DID US APART [v1.0] [trc450]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    ShadowYamihiro

    The game is good in my opinion,the story of tragic love but still love that keeps burning regardless of obstacles on the way

    STORY---------------
    enticing,little bit short for my taste but i find it deep and satisfying

    Sex-----------------------------
    Plenty of scenes,some have short animations but the FMC was built beautifully

    Writing-------------------------
    thats kinda the bad part of it all cuz many sentences are repeated
    and it had too much descriptions but that did kinda get along with the theme,just wish it had more different descriptions but still deep

    OVERALL i gave it 4/5 simply for it being short,didnt care about animations but writing did make it lose a star,regardless i recommend it
  2. 3.00 star(s)

    aslop

    3/5 — just for the attempt to create something unusual.
    But yeah, it's AI slop, and the worst part is the text. The images are more or less okay: not too many AI artifacts and the art style is mostly consistent. I don't know whether that was intentional or not, but the gradual paling of MMC's skin before death was a cool feature. Though the novel part of the game is pure trash — it feels like the author fed the general plot to an AI in a few sentences and asked it to blob it 100 times using "ornate" language. The result is total slop with constant repetition and nonsensical twists. H-scenes are obviously bad — just 2–3 images per scene with dumb AI-generated text.
  3. 1.00 star(s)

    Cetarin

    Absolute AI slop. It's like reading the same few lines over and over and over.

    Just some examples:
    Line 1002: n "His lips found her fingers, as soft and cool as the first rays of dawn upon the frost-kissed earth."
    Line 1029: n "As Lyndon spilled himself within her once more, his seed mingling with her own essence, he felt a warmth spread through him like the first rays of dawn upon the frost-kissed earth. "
    Line 1055: n "Beside him stood Elysia, her form as delicate as the first rays of dawn upon the frost-kissed earth, her hand clinging to his own with a desperation born of shared despair."
    Line 1063: n "'Fear not, kind villagers,' Lyndon replied, his voice as soft and warm as the first rays of dawn upon the frost-kissed earth."
    Line 1074: n "Lyndon felt her tremble beside him, her petite form as delicate as the first rays of dawn upon the frost-kissed earth."
    Line 1157: n "She felt it then - a warmth upon her breath, as soft and gentle as the first rays of dawn upon the frost-kissed earth."


    Line 787: n "Yet still, he felt her - a whisper of life that lingered like the echo of a long-forgotten dream."
    Line 805: n "Her eyes remained empty, her body still as beautiful and frail, yet he felt her will - a whisper of life that lingered like the echo of a long-forgotten dream."
    Line 1009: n "Yet then, as if awakened from some long-forgotten dream, she stirred - her fingers tightening around his own, her body pressing closer to his with an urgency born of will and desire."
    Line 1083: n "As if awakened from some long-forgotten dream, doubt began to spread amongst them like wildfire through dry tinder."
    Line 1895: n "As twilight descended like a shroud upon the world below, she beheld it—the house at the mountain's foot, its walls crumbling like the remnants of a long-forgotten dream."


    Line 676: n "Her skin was soft beneath his touch, yet rigid as stone, like a statue carved from the heart of winter's first frost."
    Line 730: n "He rose, donning his garments with a quiet dignity, and turned to find Elysia still seated by the window, her form as motionless as a statue carved from the heart of winter's first frost."
    Line 865: n "They whispered amongst themselves, their words as sharp as the bite of winter's first frost."
    Line 1062: n "'You haven't left your house in three days,' it accused, its tone as harsh as the bite of winter's first frost. 'We were sure you had joined the drowned lady in her watery grave.'"
    Line 1085: n "Whispers echoed through the stillness, their words as sharp as the bite of winter's first frost. 'If she be truly alive, why did she not speak?' they asked one another, their gazes flitting from Elysia's pale form to Lyndon's own."
    Line 1351: n "Yet, as she guided her steed through the wilderness, a thought assailed her, sharp as the winter's first frost: what would Lyndon make of this resurrection? "
  4. 2.00 star(s)

    Xx_Gamerdad-69_xX

    [v0.5] [v1.0]

    A soulless machine-generated short tragic love story.

    The premise is super short. There are these two kids, we have no idea who they are and what they are to each other. Then they run away and the girl gets killed. It is not established that they loved each other before the incident, they were just some kids, probably just friends, so I don't understand what kind of feelings motivated him at that age (he's maybe 12?) to spend the next 10 years wandering in search of a way to resurrect her. He does "love" her now, but was it really love that motivated him all these years back? Idk it just seems strange. Anyways, where did Lyndon find necronomicon? It's not at all explained, he traveled and just kinda found it. I guess necromancy is pretty common in this world.

    • Visuals are the usual low effort AI-generated slop. Elysia somehow became pale as snow even before dying. Her wound looks like she was pierced with a pole, not a sword. Background feature smudged or incorrect details, often copy and pasted many times, to create a sense of a bigger scope. Elysia has different haircut during sex scenes. Most of the scenery and actions are narrated and not shown for the lack of appropriate visuals.
    • There is no music or ambiance and the total silence is only broken by the occasional sound effect.
    • Semi-transparent text box that covers almost a third of the image (I used URM to circumvent this).
    • Sex scenes are 2-3 jpegs with no animations and a scuffed sound design.
    • Dev apparently did not bother to proofread his text even once, so we get stuff like "Winter's cold embrace" repeated 5 times within the same paragraph.

    I don't recommend trying this right now, there is simply not enough. Maybe wait for a few updates.
    Yeah after finishing the whole thing, it's not really worth it neither for the plot nor for the porn


    Playtime: 1-2 hours