VN - Ren'Py - Agent Horny [v0.7 (ACT 2) Full] [Mr.Creep Games]

I really couldn't recommend this to anyone in its current state. The only saving grace is the render quality is good but it falls flat with just about everything else. The story is generic and boring and the dialogue does very little to raise it either. The characters you meet have no distinctive personality's and it all come off feeling bland. The game sort of stumbles from act to act with not much in the way of cohesiveness, its just mc does badass thing here and then we go to the next mc doing badass thing with generic run of the mill mustache twirling villain's. The dev is obviously good at the technical side of things but the story and character just let all that go to waste.

A bit of Bond/Borne type MC.
Fair Renders but not so good 'animation' atm. Needs more current designs and styles available on both.
Each Act too short but decent character introductions.
Do not see too many grammatic errors.
I think it could be a good VN with better animation a bit more to each act.
Other Suggestions... Please do not add any mini games to it, waste of time for this story. Bump up the camera angles and pans on the close ups and a little more depth in the animation scenes.
It's an average build for this day and time, nothing that matches current design abilities, but if just starting or doing alone, understandable and hopefully with enough dedication, skill growth and support it will become better. I'll be watching for updates. 8/

v0.6 (ACT 1) Standard Version

Renders are sublime for this game but that's where it ends. Plays like a 007 film, beat to beat, with more explicit sex scenes. But that's not necessarily a good thing.

Story/writing are bland at best . Feels very chaotic from the get go, then you get your random sexual scene before another chaotic scene again which goes back and forth.

Dialogue/Relationships feels very scripted and stiff. Need to hear what goes through there heads more and less of the essaying (most sentances could be cut in half). Every girl you encounter feels easy with a 'Lets Bang' scenario, no real relationship growth.

Weird to complain about it but i feel there was quite a few pointless renders too. Where there's no dialogue and your clicking 5 - 10 times to get through, some were great but def could cut out a couple.

One last thing is the options 1, 2 & 3.
I would love to see the statistics what people are selecting, which I'm betting 90% of the time its option 3 every time (except maybe one of them). Options are always great but i feel probably alot of time rendering option 1 & 2 when they aren't completive enough to option 3 end up being a waste of time/effort.
I feel they would have more impact if say one was a boob option with its poses to compliment them and another option for ass with its own set of poses.


So all in all Its kind of successful at what its trying to be which is a 007 type game with more explicit sexual scenes. Just, i wouldn't go watch Bond film for porn even if the sex scenes were as explicit.


Dev clearly has some of the top rendering skills here just needs direction from a good visionary/writer to make a top tier game.

It's pretty sloppy. Grammatical and spelling errors all over the place, story that tries to be tacticool but ends up being overly cringy and mediocre sex scenes coupled with lack of choices means this is just a subpar below average kinetic novel. Some of the renders are cool i guess like the unrealistic shootout in the beginning, but theres really not much good here.

As of 0.5, my opinion is... I guess it's okay.

There's some good things like the graphics and the story, the models also look good and I like an assertive, dominant MC. Picking outfits is also a cool feature.

But there's more bad things tbh, like the lack of any kind of sound. The writing is also a little boring and the h-scenes are short and lackluster. The best h-scene was the first one and since then its been just kind of meh. I hated the emoticons at the start, but atleast they stopped pretty quickly.

I also don't like how we get rapid fire introductions to an ever growing number of girls, but so far, no real progression is actually made in any of the relationships.

Then there's that so called clothing shop that was nothing more then a hallway with a computer and some kind of storage area that was being used as a dressing room. Though this was apparently a rendering issue and the clothing shop was supposed to have a lot more.

I will probably play future updates still, but damn, at this point, I'm playing this game for the story instead of the adult content and that's just wrong. It makes me feel filthy.

Honestly, this game is terrible af. Renders and characters model are decent but damn the plot suck ass lol. Every girls are bunch of whores with unlikeable personality. Mc personality ain't that good as well. Seems like those douchebag MC but Hella boring and weird. Execution sucks and plot is extremely medicore. Two mins in and you will see there isn't anything remarkable. If you are looking for a good story and fun likeable characters with Personality that ain't always the same ole whore personality then this ain't a game for you. No Choices too, a boring kinetic novel. I guess from the title it easy to figure out the nonsensical plot lol

I was really struggling whether to give the game 2 or 3 stars.
It really bored me and annoyed me and to be completely honest, the dev kinda gets on my nerves as well, but since that shouldn't influence the rating, I did decide to go with a 3 which makes this either an average or slightly above average game.
Which it might be, if you have different tastes to mine.

This is supposed to be a story about crime and gangsters and sex, all stuff that I like to read/watch, but somehow this still turned out to be boring.

This is mostly due to everything about it being so average. The story is a trivial standard thriller thing, the writing is adequate (though I noticed a lot of words simply missing, never more than one per sentence, so you could always just guess the missing word, but it happened so often that I took notice of it), the sex scenes are adequate. The models are fine, I guess, but they are all pretty basic stuff. We've seen this all before (that alone wouldn't be a problem, if anything else was above average, but as it is, it just became part of the whole meh thing).

I like harem games, I like a confident and strong MC, I like action... here's why this didn't work for me.
The harem is once more something that just comes to the MC, because he is so fucking cool. I'm so tired of these god-tier MCs that all women just want to fuck.
The MC is overconfident, a bit of a dick, and way too much in love with himself. Again, I have no problem with a strong MC, and he doesn't come off like a complete dick, just a bit of it, but he's absolutely not fleshed out, it's so two-dimensional that it's just boring.
Where are the flaws that make a character interesting?
Basically, this is a "strong male character" like the "strong female characters" we mostly get today. Just overconfident, arrogant pricks that are mostly annoying.

And about the kinetic novel thing, I concede, that according to the site rules this could be seen as NOT being a kinetic novel, however that is just semantics.
Though there are choices in the game, they amount to two types.
1. You can pick the clothes a female character wears and
2. You can pick in which sequence you want to watch the sex scenes or whether you don't want to watch some specific parts of it.

So technically there are options, but they have ZERO INFLUENCE on the story. In this case, instead of endlessly arguing and defending themselves, why not just add the kinetic novel tag and not have any annoyance come up due to that?

Also, also, if a game calls its version of Onlyfans "Onlywhores" you pretty much already know what to expect.

I'm sure there are fans of this type of game, who don't mind the mediocre story and the two-dimensional characters.
For me, not even the attempts at humour worked, because even when it seems the game is making fun of itself, it still manages to take itself too serious.
The dialogue is so OTT, that it feels almost like a parody, but you still realize the story is taking itself deadly serious, which kind of removes the fun again that the game might have got from the cheesy action flick dialogues.

The main positive point is the visual of girls.

After that, there are a lot of bad points:
- ability to choose the outfits of girls is maybe something interesting in theory, but it completely removes any sense of the story being anything other than a porn story where the MC has all girls to fuck
- and mainly, the style of the game is to have many images for almost no text. In theory if those images are an animation it can work, but it is not. So the player needs to click, click, click, to change screens, and it can go like 10 clicks without text. In a visual novel, when it happens too much, it's not very fun.
- there are many "diverse" locations, but most of those feel empty, like they are little empty rooms with only one purpose: show a character in a place not seen. I'd rather see less places, but with something inside them showing they have a purpose other than to hold the characters.
- when characters do talk to the phone, at least show a phone? if the point is to let tit be possible that the character is speaking to himself due to mental issue, give some visual clue of it? At the moment, there are multiple times where I couldn't know if the character is doing one of those, and I'm not sure it's the effect wanted.
- for like 2h of gameplay, we already have met like 7 fuckable girls. So it's a fuck fest. Too bad because that destroy the story pace. And the story is what make those games shine. Otherwise, it's just a random porn and not very enjoyable seen the visual quality is good, but the animations are almost non existent, and the sex scenes are basic stuff.

I'll touch it again when it's more evolved, but I hope the trend is corrected because the context (fbi agent) is sufficiently interesting.

The quality of the animations is great, the women are sexy and it is a great "harem" simulator for sure, if that is your type of game I recommend this game!

That said, I found a couple of things that made me stop playing the game, but I don't want to give it a 1-star review because I can see the love the dev put into this game. The grammar and syntax are off, with random "" throughout the game that immediately takes you out of the storyline, which should be pretty heavy stuff, and the MC being a macho chad who fucks top-of-the-line models while working with the FBI while also not really having the charisma to match up for it, the MC is a caricature and I think that is the point, he's supposed to be like James Bond, but I think the game itself could be improved with some tweaks, but it is really hard to relate to anything that is going on in this game because it feels like the game can't decide if it should be serious or goofy, it's like if Austin Powers had the Daniel Craig ball torture scene from Casino Royale, it just doesn't fit.

[v0.3]

I'm can't really tell if the dev is writing this as a self-aware "too cool for school" satire, but It's a decent power fantasy.

The MC has massive iAmVeRyBAdAsS vibes. If you took out all the subtlety and "suave" from 007, you might end up with this game. The pacing is quite rushed. The game rarely takes the time to build up the characters or relationships. I'm not just talking about the sex. Even in action movies, you kinda have to get us invested in the characters, you know?

Perhaps the most egregious annoyance was the insistence on using emojis in the spoken dialogues. Ugh...

The English in general could be improved, but I've seen much worse in other games.

The renders and models are quite good, but this game has a serious case of "same face syndrome." Like the majority of the female cast seems to be using the same model with bare minimum morphing.

Brief mention about the coding. Whatever the dev wants to say, this is a KN in practice. Whether that's good or bad is up to you. The game is not keeping track of any choices through variables/flags, and there is intentionally no plot-altering choices given. Personally, I prefer to have some impact on the story, however minor it may be, but I'm not docking points for it being a KN.

TL;DR
It's a decently entertaining story about a Mr. Cool super agent banging bitches. If you don't take it too seriously, it might be worth your time.

Review for Agent Horny v0.3
PROS -
Excellent crime story
Likeable main character ( not a midget or a pervert )
Visuals are great
H Animations are well done
Loved options to choose different types of weapons and choose different types of dresses for female characters while playing the game ( something that I haven't seen before ) .
And I don't have any problems with game being linear as dev has even put a disclaimer for those who are trying the game . Looking forward to future developments .

V.03
Making a game where the player dont actually chooses anything and cant even pick which girl MC is fucking is really becoming a trend here on F95, i think its the 3rd or 4th game just this week that i play with the same aspect, and none of them are tagged as KN.
The models are pretty, but 2 of them are like twin sisters or something, they really look like each other, and having 3 blondes dont contributes a thing with the variety of girls aspect, if one of them was red haired at least would help a bit.
The game also has some good animations, above average.
Story is interesting too, above average imo, but the lack of interactivity really hurts the experience....but what really made me delete the game was the unavoidable sex scenes...i HATE forced content, and i think that if the player will be railroaded into everything would be better tag it as a KN, it would spare time for a lot of players.

This is for version 0.3

The renders are nice, but there are simply too many of them. It got to the point where I was clicking faster just to get to the next dialogue. Or the scene of one girl working out - I just simply stopped paying attention to the renders just to get through the text.

There doesn't appear to be any meaningful choices in the game yet. You also don't have a say in your LI - so far there are two forced scenes. What you do get a choice in, however, is the outfit that one of the female characters will be wearing in a scene where the MC doesn't see. Again, why waste the rendering time for three separate outfits for scenes without the MC. The first (maybe) LI we meet... 18 renders of her doing yoga. No dialogue in that time.

Two of the (I'm guessing) LI's also have their own agenda for you, or are at least some form of agent/double agent or something. Yet to be seen to what end, but you've shown me that they have ulterior motives, so I'm no longer interested in them (and one of them wants to open up an OnlyWhores account to make money in the future).

The girls are beautiful, and the story could become something interesting. The MC is a bit over the top (we all dream of being the hero playboy, but it isn't executed well) and needs to be humbled. If the story leads that way, maybe this could be a fun Bond-type story. As of now, its a bore.

TLDR: Doesn't need better art, does need better writing.

The art is great, BUT there's too much of it. Whaaa? Yeah. Some games have 100 lines of text for every image change, that's too little, but this game has 15 images of the same scene from different angles for no reason, and then does a few lines of (badly written) text. Dev has a great big computer though, that's obvious.

First 20 minutes make no sense. No idea what's going on. Not necessarily a bad thing, but the writing could be clearer.

But the most important for an AVN: the sexy bits. They're just bad. How do you start a sex scene with a black screen with "One foreplay session later" ?? That's part of it dude! I know it's hard to write good sex scenes, but that is what an AVN is, not just rotating HD images without atmosphere.

This game has good renders, a promissing story and an interesting MC.
If you like hot girls and action movies, this one is for you.

Now for some objective criticsm, this is mainly directed to the dev, but potential players might find out if they want to give this one a shot if they read it:
Most of my criticism comes down to this: use the novel aspect of the "visual genre" more
The individual scenes are done very well, but they transition rather abruptly, give us maybe two lines of context on a black screen and the game would feel more fluid.
This might sound harsh, but the sex scene in the hotel room is really not that good. The visuals are great... but thats it. I try to give real constructive criticism: For me it felt like watching 1minute of porn on mute, didnt even get hard.
Which is a shame, because the girl is very hot, the renders are nice and the animations are crisp. But there isn't anything else. You obviously know how to write dialogue, the breach team guys bantering felt natural and lifted my mood and when it got tense you shifted the tone accordingly. You also know how to make sexy renders and animations, because there were a lot in the sex scenes. But for some odd reason you did not combine your skills to give us great erotic content.
As a person who played like 300+ AVNs but never created one myself, I would give you 3 tipps, 2 are for sex scenes and 1 for "game design" / "story telling".
1. This one is very long and in depth.
When creating a sex scene, target as many areas of the brain as possible. What is already there, great visual stimulation with the renders and animations. But no text and music/sounds. So you only manage to appeal like 50% of one of the 5 senses. So where could you improve? For starters to, add the generic sex scene lines, give us some moans etc. As for the other senses, go in depth and give us text based infos about what we cannot perceive with out eyes. We don't know how Lily's skin feels, how soft her tits are, how nice her well defined ass fells when trusting into her etc. Is her pussy nice and wet and hot and tight? We don't know how her smell, is she wearing parfume (thats a small part, 1line is like enough but details make the world). And now the most important part, involve the characters. This instantly changes the quality of a story and greatly improves erotic scenes. By using the characters as "ressources" instead of "props where stick goes in hole" you add more depth to any given scene.
Again with the hotel scene as an example. The MC is proably pissed that his sexy time got delayed because his "co-workers" suck at their job. So he is probably either really happy to see a hot naked lady or maybe pent up and takes matter into his own hands because the other idiots just arent capable. In essence, give us some lines about his state of mind and how it changes after seeing Lily and vice versa. She prolly wasnt thirlled either to wait in a hotel room just to get fucked later instead of spending a lovley evening with the MC.
Next up, ith this method a "power dynamic" comes into play and the role of the setting of the scene can either be increased or decreased to fit your story. The MC might take the lead and play a rather dominant role if he is pent up or can approach the situation more passively if he just want to get laid and then sleep. Make Lily reakt to his approach. Maybe she likes it rough or wished the MC would go harder depending on how he is acting, or the oppoite, they are your characters I'm just spittballing here. Regarding the setting, maybe in a future scenario the MC is inapropriately going after the sexy Lt we saw in the intro. But he decides to do so in the office while whe is directing her troups. In such a scenario you can give us lines after lines of stuff like "I can't believe he's doing it at work" "what if I get caught" "I hope I don't have to moan" "Its so wrooong but feel sooo good, arh why can't I stop him".
And now to combine appealing the brain and involing the characters. Give us many lines of thought. What is the MC thinking about when he is fucking Lily. Is he going easy on her because it's their first date? Would he rather choke her, slap her ass and go balls deep but is holding back? Would he love for her to just ride him until they both cum and then cuddle? Would he want to fuck her cute little ass? Turn her upside down and fuck her throat. Make her beg him to make her cum but deny her for a bit. What does Lily think. etc. Also add some thought or verbal lines of what they like about each other, I know we (or at least I) don't really do that in real life, but a VN is by name sake at least 50% novel so go for it.
And finally: sex is not a sprint. Your animations are very crisp. Don't just chain them together. The doggy animation for example. In this example the MC is taking control of the situation because this seems to fit his type and he is a bit more dominant and rough. Also don't expect quality work, I've never written erotica and English isn't my first language and I'm just rambling from the top of my head:
Start the animation Lily says "Ahhhh ahh hmm~", then do that Phyton thing were it just goes for like 5 seconds, then the MC thinks "ah yes thats it" "pounding this hot piece of ass like I own it", MC says "do you like that?", MC says "Do you like it when I fuck your thight little pussy like I own it?", Lily says "ahhh yeees [MC / Daddy / whatever you like] yeeesss fuck me", MC thinks "ohh thats unexpected " MC thinks "she got a little tighter when I said I owned her, MC says "so you like talking dirty when you get pounded from behind?", Lily says "Ahh ahhng " Lily says "yess ahh I love it when your big hard cock fucks me from behind ahh" Lily thinks "oh no I hope this wasn't too much, I just felt so good I blurted it out without thinking", MC thinks "so we have a wild girld in our hands, interesting", do the 10 seconds still thing. Narrator: You decide to push you dick deep inside Lily and tigten your grip on her wrist and pull her closer, reaching her deepest parts. And then you suddenly stop thrusting to see how the little perv would react. Switch from doggy animation to a shot of Lily's surprised horny face. Lily thinking "oh no i went to far I knew I shouldn't have just said that nasty stuff without thinking" Lily says slightly angry but with a tone of inecurity "why did you stop? Did I do something wrong?" Switch to one of the images where only half of th eMC's dick is inside Lily, Narrator: you slowly start to pull your dick out of Lilys pussy. MC thinks "hehe I'm gonna tease her a bit" while pulling out his cock the MC says "Maybe I am?" Mc says "Or do you want me to continues?" Lily says "Nooo! Don't", you stop pulling out and MC says "that wasn't very convicing now, was it?" you start to slowly pull out a bit more, more than half out of Lilys pussy, the rest is still engulfed by her hot and now trembling sex. You know you have her now, she really wants this, maybe even more than you. But you also want to make the most out of your evening after that shitjob you had to take care of before, so you decide to play with her a little more. Lily say "noo pleae dont stop" MC with a grin on his face says "Stop what?" You once again stop pulling out, much to Lilys relief. Lily thinks "oh no I totally fell for that. He totally got me." Lily thinks "that was really mean but also kinda hot. Thank god he doesn't think I'm a weirdo" MC says "Lily?" and you continue to pull out a little more of your penis, still maintaining wrist control to put Lily in her place. Lily say" dont stop fucking mee please" MC says "is that all?" MC says with a firmer voice, pouring some of his autority and anger from his professional life into it "you think I'm just some kind of fuckstick you can use to pleasure yourself? If you want something beg for it" MC says "and do a good job" Lily says "Please [MC / Dady / Sir / Whatever you want], please fuck me with your long hard cock, fuck my little pussy like you own it" switch to image where MC is fully inside Lily. Lily says "ahhhhhhhh ohhh" Lily thinks "O!M!G! he just impaled me I think I might cum" MC thninks "wow she is much tighter than before" MC thinks "I'm glad she liked that stunt I pulled. No in fact she loved it, she is so wet now I bet if I would go down on her now I might drown" switch to image in doggy with focus on Lilys face, she now has an ahego like face. MC thinks "hehe I love playing with horny little girls like her. She likes it a bit rough? I give her rough" switch back to doggy animation. Lily says "ahhh ahh ohh" Lily thinks "he's so much more into it now, or maybe I'm just extra hornyyy." Lily thinks "ahhh fuccck this feels so good".
After writng I noticed I stopped adding "5 seconds of animation" gaps. But If you do something like that, you can get like a good 2-5 minutes out of an animation. But you can like write at least 10x better than me and know your characters. I'm not capable of adding sublte bits like, MC felt her pulse go up or shit like that.

2. Don't skip foreplay unless you have to or if the relation between characters does not call for it. Foreplay in porn isn't that great because film is a very different medium than a VN. For a VN, foreplay is a very nice tool to achieve many things. We get to know the intentions of the parties involved. In the hotel scene for example. Does the MC want to make Lily cum until she passes out or does he just want to fuck to be done with this day? Same for Lily. In the foreplay scene, you can add some line of dialogue to give us a better understanding of the characters, their relationship and how they are doing. Here you can tell us how even small actions like felling hard nipples through a shirt make the hair on the MC's neck stand up in anticipation and how the MC's kissing skill sends a tingle of joy dawn Lily's spine. Foreplay is also excellent in establishing a "power dynamic" if there is one.
Along those lines, erotic scenes that do not contain fucking or nudity can be hot as hell too, but are almost always kinky in nature, so this might never apply to your storytelling. A blackmail/ exhibisionist scene where (in)voluntary flashing, groping, vibes/butplutt shenanigans is going on can be more exciting than a sex scene if done properly. With the right amounts of facial expressions, lines about how the characters like/hate hats going on, how they love controlling or not being in control, how they like to be with / excert dominance over the other etc.

3. If I were you I'd probably make three changes to the game and re-upload it again. Smooth over transitions between scenes wit like 2 lines in between (who is there and why, what are they doing). Add like 3 full renders of foreplay. Take like 7 of the existing renders of the sex scenes, change Lily's face in them. Write a lot of sexy text. Add some facial expression images of Lily. Make the sex scene great. If you would make these changes, you'd have a very promising v0.1. You introduce the plot, the cast, add some mystery elements, leave us intrigued with what might happen with the maid, the sexy Lt. and the gangsters and you also gave us something to masturbate to.
I have no idea how long it takes to make 3 new poses and take 10 renders, but writing a bunch of text, takes like 4h max, 6h if you do it like a champion and 15minutes more if you check for spelling errors (<- I did not do that in the review). I think the game would profit greatly from it.

Thats all I have to say. Promising game. Keep up the grind. Peace.

Good renders. The story and setting is kinda weird and dumb though. The english is bad but still understandable and okay but the dialogues themselves are very bad. The characters are similar to the cliched characters in a Michael bay movie. Also the story progression/scene transitions from one scene to the other seem kinda abrupt and sudden.

Game is new but very promising.
+ Good render
+Interesting story (so far)
+ Great protagonist (a capable guy not an idiot)
+ A diversity of female characters that can have different personalities

- Let's see...

My review: overall good game.
Renders: 4/5.
Plot: nothing wrong with a detective story, and at least this isn't "standard" incest. 4/5
Fetishes: pretty vanilla so far, we'll see how it goes later. 4/5
UI, performance: Standard Ren'Py, I had zero problems. Image size is a concern: over 700 MB is too much for 0.1. 4/5.

Interesting game of a genre that you don't see much of. No 2 liter dicks chasing sis and mom around dear old Dads jug of ashes. Great renders and animation. Good story so far. Early days so will have to watch this one. Kudos to the dev(s)/author(s).
Renders - 5
Story - 5
Women - 5

And nothing else matters.

This is a great VN! The renders are great, characters are beautiful and I love the action scenes. I can't quite tell where the story is going but already you can tell it has some promise and great character development.