Ren'Py - Agent17 [v0.24.8] [HEXATAIL]

The characters looks really good, the story is weird but maybe in next versions will make more sense. The english is really broken, I don't speak english but for my was hard to understand some dialogues, I still don't understand why the MC says "Im sorry that I hurt you" (or something like that) almost all the time. I don't know in what universe a mother's say to his son, "If you do something to your sister I will kill you". The MC being excessively creep with his sister she ask for help her with homework and he "ask" to let him touch her boobs/ass or money in exchange for help.

Don't understand why her classmate doesn't like him, to the level of ignore him, and later she has no problem in have sex with him.

The agent is stupid for someone who needs to collect intel. The MC order her do stupids things and she never thinks. Why I'm beating school bullies, why I'm investigatin a shopcashier?

You never heard what happened with the cellphone's owner after the accident, is like they just disappeared with the car, after the accident makes it should appears some news in tv and someone should recognize the car and look for the Boss, is weird that someone important has a car accident and no one notice his ausence.

On the one hand the animations look pretty smooth and some of the girl characters look great. The idea behind the plot is interesting just not handled well.

It's obvious English isn't the devs first language and it shows in the script. It's all over the place.

The biggest downfall of the game is the main character. He unlikeable, he's a creep and he's a rapist.

The main issue is the MC has no charisma, he's not presented well, he has redeemable qualities and I don't understand the thought process behind creating him.

He manages to ruin every scene he's in. He's the first MC i've played that manages to put me off sex scenes. Every sex scene is just weird and creepy, there is nothing hot about it.

I tried really hard to get into it hoping he'd have some kind of character growth or maybe I was reading it wrong and then it introduced his little sister.

She innocently asks him for help with her homework and the response you can give is to only help her if she pays with money or letting him grope her. She turns him down and his first thought is "I know, i'll rape her while she sleeps" ...... and that's exactly what he does.

I don't know if the dev wants people to like this character but I spent all my time playing hoping something bad would happen to him. He's such a shit character I had to stop playing, I couldn't take anymore of his creepy nonsense.

If playing a weird creepy loser is your thing then give it a try but if you expect a well written MC with depth then it's probably not for you.

I would have just deleted it and moved on but the MC was so bad I couldn't pass on without comment and the girls the dev created deserve a better showing than this game. Good character models are just wasted here.

It's pretty generic and the grammar is shit but the CG's are nice and it has some animations. A nice plus is that you can pretty much get right in on the action so not much mindless clicking to get to the H-scenes. Overall it's a pretty average game so far but it's also pretty new I'm gonna stick around.

Review for v0.9
Recommended: NO
Pros:
+ Good character models
+ Really good UI
+ Has animations
+ Good sandbox traversal and easy to navigate map.
Cons:
- Really bad grammar (Machine Translation Level)
- The story is terrible
- The story is so bad it should be listed twice
- The characters (including MC) are boring, stupid and uninspired
- Wimpy MC
Overview:
You play as a Nerd who found a damaged cellphone after a nearby accident and make a decision to take it from the scene. After that you get a call to the found cellphone from a `Agent17` who follows any order given, thinking that you are his boss (the dead guy from the accident). So you use him to do your bidding (which totally won't end with you dead after the paycheck from his dead boss stops coming).
The problem arises from how the characters interacts with each other. For an example: after using Agent17 to beat up a bully, nether the bully nor you change. Both act as nothing happened. I mean, after bullying the MC, some guy beats you and your friends up, then literally threatens to kill you, only choosing not to if you give MC a blowjob, next day you choose to bully him again, only for the EXACT situation to repeat and you still choose to continue bullying the MC?? And the MC still remains a wimp.