didn't expect the game to be so small, but I liked what little there was.
The game has its potential, Akari's look is simple but she's pretty, classic hot girl stereotype who's kind of dumb and innocent, but still has her horny side, clearly enjoying the things that happen. Katie is the character I liked the most, as she always makes things much more interesting and exciting. Her look is really cool and I personally liked it a lot.
On the other hand, the game clearly needs more polishing.
There are some grammatical errors (missing accents) almost constantly throughout the game, which is not a very nice thing to have in a VN. There's no music, or any kind of ambience, if I'm not mistaken there should be music that you can put in your game that isn't copyrighted or anything like that, as well as ambience. The per frame animations are very stiff and “unsophisticated”, they need a better polish. And finally, things seem to happen too quickly, especially in the tutorial, there was no proper world-building, or who Akari is, etc... it just threw us in there and let us have fun.
But honestly? For a person who isn't experienced in the slightest, either in animating positions in KKS, or in programming in general, the game is very good and was enough to hold my attention and want to see it developed over time, since I'll be able to experience the developer's evolution in terms of art, writing, and everything, which makes me really excited!
(Personally, I think it would be a good idea to add some detail to Akari that makes her minimally different from a simple busty girl with blue hair, like Katie).
The game has its potential, Akari's look is simple but she's pretty, classic hot girl stereotype who's kind of dumb and innocent, but still has her horny side, clearly enjoying the things that happen. Katie is the character I liked the most, as she always makes things much more interesting and exciting. Her look is really cool and I personally liked it a lot.
On the other hand, the game clearly needs more polishing.
There are some grammatical errors (missing accents) almost constantly throughout the game, which is not a very nice thing to have in a VN. There's no music, or any kind of ambience, if I'm not mistaken there should be music that you can put in your game that isn't copyrighted or anything like that, as well as ambience. The per frame animations are very stiff and “unsophisticated”, they need a better polish. And finally, things seem to happen too quickly, especially in the tutorial, there was no proper world-building, or who Akari is, etc... it just threw us in there and let us have fun.
But honestly? For a person who isn't experienced in the slightest, either in animating positions in KKS, or in programming in general, the game is very good and was enough to hold my attention and want to see it developed over time, since I'll be able to experience the developer's evolution in terms of art, writing, and everything, which makes me really excited!
(Personally, I think it would be a good idea to add some detail to Akari that makes her minimally different from a simple busty girl with blue hair, like Katie).