VN - Ren'Py - Alice in Wonderland [v4.1] [Slow Burn Games]

This VN is a delightful mix of playful fantasy and grounded realism. It features both young and mature women, all with natural looks and expressive faces. The renders are beautiful, the humor works, and the erotic tone is immersive without being forced.

Not quite as good as their previous game (Undercover) but still worth playing. I think the scenes have too few images and all the characters are too willing.
Unfortunately, Alice has little resistance either. You get the feeling that she is ready for anything right from the start.

Let's see how the game develops.

White the story is interesting enough, the rest leaves room for improvement. The models are decent but could be improved, the UI could also use some polishing, but overall it was worth the time to play it. Hoping it improves in future updates

I think by now we all know what we are getting with Slow Burn Games AVNs. They have created a niche and it works for them. The graphic are mediocre, the stories are all basically the same and the h scenes are of low to medium quality. The appeal are the scenarios and the creepy old men taking advantage of the young wife.

I mean, you start the game in serious debt and homeless so you can only imagine the things your MC and wife will have to do to survive. You can play your MC as a loyal husband and limit his wife's exposures or you can play him as a deviant. With games like this, what is even the point of the first route.

The bottom line is, the stories are ridiculous and the artwork and writing is mediocre at best. This allows the dev to crank out significant updates on a regular bases and they keep the stories shortish so they complete the AVNs faster than any other dev out there.

Like I said, the dev has figured out a system and a style that works for them. This is not going to win any awards and you will probably forget about it pretty shortly after you play it, but it works.

Personally, I could take it or leave it. I like more substance to the stories and I always struggle with the cuck thing and the MC borders on being either a cuck or a full on deviant, but you have to give it up to a dev who has it figured out.

If I was honestly rating this, I would give it 3/5 stars but because the dev has a track record of constantly producing, I am adding an extra star. These AVNs are hard to produce and we have to reward devs who keep on keepin' on so to speak.

Good luck on the rest of the AVN.

This adult visual novel is a good game overall, offering a decent experience for fans of the genre. The story, while not unique or groundbreaking, is solid enough to keep you interested. It doesn’t do anything out of the box, but it also doesn’t bore you—which is a win in itself. So far, so good.

The choices in the game are decent in number and give a fair sense of control over the story. While they might not lead to drastically different outcomes, they still make the experience feel interactive rather than just passive reading. It keeps you engaged without trying too hard.

The artwork uses 3D models, and while it’s not the best, it’s okay enough to keep playing. It gets the job done and fits the tone of the game, even if it won’t blow you away visually. The characters look fine, and the scenes are clear enough to follow along without distraction.

Overall, it’s a decent adult visual novel that doesn’t aim too high but still manages to be enjoyable. If you’re looking for something simple that won’t bore you, this one’s worth a try. It’s not perfect, but it’s definitely playable and entertaining enough.

VERSION:.2.1
SUMMARY: Solid start with some decent content, but visually not really good
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context.

1. Model Visuals............................................. : ★ ★
2. General Visuals.......................................... : ★ ★ ★
3. Animation Quality....................................... : ★ ★ ★
4. Character (Persona).................................... : ★ ★ ★
5. Story Quality & Pacing................................. : ★ ★ ★
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........................... : ★ ★ ★
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics.......................... : ★ ★ ★
8. Playtime & General Quality........................... : ★ ★ ★
9. Sounds & Music.......................................... : ★ ★ ★
10. H-Content & Fetishes................................... : ★ ★ ★

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Animations are OK...but not great
2. Visually, the models are OK, but also not great.
3. Music is OK, not wonderful, kinda silly, but not bad, sets a tone that I think is planned.
4. Story is actually not bad, its not complex but its realistic enough to work with. Some porn logic follows around the main plot though, but its at least fun and kinky enough to forgive.
5. Dialogue is pretty decent, flows nicely and is overall structured well.
6. H-scenes are not bad in terms of there are at least a few with the content that is here.
7. Kinks are OK, creampie, cheat, cuck being the main ones I suppose, but more are welcome!
8. Fair amount of content for a start, hopefully this will continue with each update.

CONS:

1. Visually the game does leave a fair deal to be desired, the models are OK, but really not good looking if compared to many other Renpy novels out there.
2. Animations, while not bad and least smooth are basic and there are no good angles to the animations.
3. Additional tags required, the MC has a kink for creampies, so I was wondering if pregnancy is a thing as its also hinted at in dialogue, either MC knocking up chicks and/or Alice being knocked up. These would be great options to have.
4. While sounds are fairly OK, more ambient and lewd scene sounds would be nice.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context which could be useful to the developer.

• The MC looks a bit stupid IMO and Alice has really just that plane girl next door look about her making her "normal" and not very attractive. She is fairly good looking as the MCs wife and all but not an oil painting as many other NTR/Cuck games often have.
• The general visual renders, animations and quality is not really good and the game will suffer for that. Its further compounded by not providing more sexy and kinky H-scene angles nor the lewd sounds that provide immersion.

TLDR:

Overall, I think its a good start, its visually not great and that is kinda sad, because its written, scripted and the way it plays out is actually pretty good. Its just rough and not got the quality I would like. It can achieve 4 stars but not 5 ever IMO.