VN - Ren'Py - Alice's Descent [Ch.2 v3.0] [Lumenis]

Game is not bad at all, i really like the models even tho mom looks young, but who says games have to be realistic here lmao.

Renders are solid especially for a first game.

We never know how good this game might become if we give some support instead of discouragement !

I invest in these models.

Story is a typical incest renpy game, not amazing not terrible, depending what you're used to, and it looks like it will have optional NTR for those who like that.

VERSION: ch2 v1.2
SUMMARY: Really not that impressive, does some basics badly.
RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐
2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐
4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐
5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐
6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐
7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐
8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐⭐
9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐⭐⭐
10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Fair models, not bad looking
2. Music is not bad either.
3. General visuals are ok
4. Extra little sounds are not bad and done nicely.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. While visuals are ok, some things look completely wrong like how Natasha hold the laptop wtf is with that?
2. Lack of opacity setting for dialogue box.
3. Dialogue is chees, cringeworthy and totally unnatural, the script feels fake and bullshit, like some commercial script.
4. Some model visuals look really bad, like whats with Natashas nipples (shower scene) Also the faces look like some wax doll from a 80s Steven King movie...
5. Plot setup/dynamic is just so bad, the mother looks like a sister to the rest, the story if you can call it that is filled with such cliche now its not even funny...
6. Cringe worthy scenes that make little to no sense and is just totally unnatural and feels forced.
7. Unable to set MC name, almost hard to know who the MC is actually...
8. While choices exist, they actually dont do anything save lock you out of content, could just as well have made a kinetic novel of this tbh..
9. Currently no option but to keep sexual interaction within family so incest, there is no content for NTR at the moment.

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• If its not the models faces that look really like something from The Sims or some animation cartoon its the ridiculously stupid dialogue...really go back to the drawing board with this please.
• What the developer attempted with this AVN, God alone only knows but its not good.
• While there is no content other than incest route, its stupid to have many of the choices that you have, because they only serve to slow progression, the player must pick the incest route then the choices that follow would naturally be to push for that kind of interaction within the family, but the choices often go against that behaviour, whats the point then of having the initial choice???

TLDR:

This is just a poor game overall, it does nothing well enough to look past what it does poorly, model faces and dialogue are just that bad. It doesn't end there though...cringe...