What a weird game.
The writing, I think, is actually quite well, however the sex scenes could do with a lot more polish.
And not just writing wise, but also in terms of renders and posing etc..
Due to the grainy and low render quality and the lacklustre approach, this game certainly won't win you over with the porn, unless you are really starved.
The story is more interesting though, but it is weird, and it is not just weird in terms of story, also in characterization and dialogue.
If anything, I would say it has a dream-like quality to it, there are many dreams/hallucinations, but the stuff that is supposedly real also seems very unrealistic and has the same dream-like approach.
Other reviewers mention PTSD, that might be the case, but it does seem very severe.
I mean in the sense that the MC has a very tender grasp on reality, I don't mean to diminish PTSD, but to me, it seems as if there are more mental illnesses in play, definitely something like schizophrenia or a bipolar-disorder.
Can that also be part of PTSD?
IDK, I admit I am not that much of an expert on it.
Or this is just some lynch-esque mindfuck, I just don't know.
It's so far, interesting enough to keep me reading, but not so interesting, that I don't skip parts. I mostly just want to know what the fuck is actually going on. Is the writer great and the weirdness and strange behaviour (all characters, not just MC) are all intentional, or is the writer bad and that's why everything seems so strange and loosely strung together.
IMO, both options are still a possibility.